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Did you know that the US is the third most populous country in the world and has the economy with the largest GDP?
The United States has the longest interstate highway system in the world.
Today I want to talk about this fascinating country, as well as its history and its people.
The history of the US is a tale of courage, innovation and growth.
It all began in the 17th century, when European settlers established colonies along the East Coast.
In 1585, the Roanoke Colony, the first English foothold in North America mysteriously vanished, setting the stage for future attempts.
By 1776, thirteen colonies sought freedom from British rule.
The Statue of Liberty is is the most famous statue in the world.
It's a symbol of the United States of America, and it was actually a gift from France.
Although it looks like a traditional sculpture, it is a skyscraper in its own right.
Since 1886, the Statue of Liberty has served as a beacon for immigrants, millions of whom have poured into the United States.
At the beginning of the 19th century，the population of the US was less than 4 million, by 1920 it was more than 100 million.
This transformation redefined the American identity and signaled the beginning of modern American history.
Of coures, English is the primary language, yet you will hear a multitude of languages spoken throughout the country.
Spanish is the second foreign language for most Americans.
I woke up and checked the news this morning.
It seems Donald Trump is still president.
你知道吗，美国是世界上人口第三多的国家，也是GDP最大的经济体。
美国拥有世界上最长的州际高速公路系统。
今天我想谈谈这个迷人的国家以及它的历史和人民。
美国的历史是一部关于勇气、创新和成长的故事。
这一切都始于17世纪，当时欧洲殖民者在东海岸建立了殖民地。
1585年，英国在北美的第一个立足点罗阿诺克殖民地彻底消失，为未来的尝试奠定了基础。
到1776年，有13个殖民地寻求从英国统治下获得自由。
这是世界上最著名的雕像，它是美国的象征，实际上它是来自法国的礼物。
尽管它看上去像一座传统的雕塑，它本身是一座摩天大楼。
自1886年以来自由女神成为了召唤移民的灯塔，数以百万的移民涌入美国。
19世纪初美国人口不足400万，到1920年增至1亿多。
这一变化重新定义了美国，并宣告了美国现代史的开始。
当然，英语是主要语言，但你会听到全国各地说多种语言。
西班牙语是大多数美国人的第二外语。
今天早上我醒来后查看了新闻。
看起来唐纳德·特朗普仍然是总统。
USA
Did you know that the US is the third most populous country in the world and has the economy with the largest GDP?
The United States has the longest interstate highway system in the world.
Today I want to talk about this fascinating country, as well as its history and its people.
The history of the US is a tale of courage, innovation and growth.
It all began in the 17th century, when European settlers established colonies along the East Coast.
In 1585, the Roanoke Colony, the first English foothold in North America mysteriously vanished, setting the stage for future attempts.
By 1776, thirteen colonies sought freedom from British rule.
The Statue of Liberty is is the most famous statue in the world.
It's a symbol of the United States of America, andbut it was actually a gift from France.
I think if you are going to use "actually", as in you are rebutting something, it is best to pair it with "but".
Although it looks like a traditional sculpture, it is a skyscraper in its own right.
Since 1886, the Statue of Liberty has served as a beacon for immigrants, millions of whom have poured into the United States.
Excellent use of whom!
At the beginning of the 19th century， the population of the US was less than 4 million, but by 1920 it was more than 100 million.
This transformation redefined the American identity and signaled the beginning of modern American history.
Of coures, English is the primary language, yet you willcan hear a multitude of languages spoken throughout the country.
I think these are the 2 most natural versions:
1. "English is the primary language, yet you can hear a multitude of languages spoken throughout the country."
OR
2. Of course, English is the primary language, but you can hear a multitude of other languages throughout the country."
This is mostly because I'm not sure that "yet" pairs well with the use of "of course" at the start of the sentence.
Spanish is the second foreign language for most Americansmost common language.
I would phrase this as either:
- Spanish is the second most common language in America.
OR
- Spanish is the most common second language for Americans.
I'm not sure if I would use the word foreign at all for Spanish in America, as it seems so common and entrenched there.
I woke up and checked the news this morning.
It seems Donald Trump is still president.
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I'm very impressed by your use of whom - it will definitely make you sound like an educated English speaker. Most of my corrections are just about flow or sounding natural, so overall this is a very good piece of writing.
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Did you know that the US is the third most populous country in the world and has the economy with the largest GDP? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I want to talk about this fascinating country, as well as its history and its people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The history of the US is a tale of courage, innovation and growth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It all began in the 17th century, when European settlers established colonies along the East Coast. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In 1585, the Roanoke Colony, the first English foothold in North America mysteriously vanished, setting the stage for future attempts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By 1776, thirteen colonies sought freedom from British rule. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Statue of Liberty is is the most famous statue in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a symbol of the United States of America, and it was actually a gift from France. It's a symbol of the United States of America, I think if you are going to use "actually", as in you are rebutting something, it is best to pair it with "but". |
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Although it looks like a traditional sculpture, it is a skyscraper in its own right. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since 1886, the Statue of Liberty has served as a beacon for immigrants, millions of whom have poured into the United States. Since 1886, the Statue of Liberty has served as a beacon for immigrants, millions of whom have poured into the United States. Excellent use of whom! |
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At the beginning of the 19th century，the population of the US was less than 4 million, by 1920 it was more than 100 million. At the beginning of the 19th century |
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This transformation redefined the American identity and signaled the beginning of modern American history. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of coures, English is the primary language, yet you will hear a multitude of languages spoken throughout the country.
I think these are the 2 most natural versions: 1. "English is the primary language, yet you can hear a multitude of languages spoken throughout the country." OR 2. Of course, English is the primary language, but you can hear a multitude of other languages throughout the country." This is mostly because I'm not sure that "yet" pairs well with the use of "of course" at the start of the sentence. |
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Spanish is the second foreign language for most Americans. Spanish is the second I would phrase this as either: - Spanish is the second most common language in America. OR - Spanish is the most common second language for Americans. I'm not sure if I would use the word foreign at all for Spanish in America, as it seems so common and entrenched there. |
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I woke up and checked the news this morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It seems Donald Trump is still president. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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