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milkyway

Sept. 18, 2022

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I went to a new opened ramen restaurant in my neighborhood.
When I bought a meal ticket and handed it to the clerk, I was asked about the amount of vegetables and whether garlic was necessary.
I ordered much vegetables and garlic.
However all the customers who came after me ordered without garlic.
I think they were probably concerned about the smell, but I thought the one with garlic is definitely more delicious.
The ramen was delicious with plenty of bean sprouts.
However, I thought that it might be for young people because there was a lot of oil.
I thought I might go again.


近所に新しくできたラーメン屋に行ってきました。
食券を購入して、店員に渡すと、野菜の量と、にんにくの有無を聞かれました。
私は野菜多め、にんにくありでお願いしました。
私の後からきたお客さんは、みんなにんにく無しで注文していました。
たぶんみんなは匂いを気にしているんだと思いますが、にんにく入の方が断然美味しいと思います。
もやしがたっぷりで普通に美味しかったです。
ただ油が多いので若い人向けかもしれないと思いました。
もう一度くらいは行ってもいいかな。

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The ramen was delicious with plenty of bean sprouts.

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However, I thought that it might be for young people because there was a lot of oil.


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残念ですね。

I thought I might go again.


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