May 23, 2026
I have a friend, he is a really smart guy and he likes videos (on YouTube) with a popular sciencific content.
The value of video and information in it is more valuable for him if there are links to official researches. Sometimes he even read that researches - not the full documentation, but just the articles with final conclusions.
Also, he is an angry, jealosy fighter with magic and esoteric things like a taro, an astrology, religions and an alternative medicine.
I don't belive in magic too and prefer base on evidence knowledge. Especially I love the physics which explanes this wonderful world for us.
But I had an arguement with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on it.
In my view, history showed us that science could be wrong offen in the particular moment and just after the years of mistakes (as labotomy or elecrtical chair practice) people made discoveries which changed the common course.
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't the absolut" and we should led by science with a little carefully.
How muchALSO POSSIBLE: To what extent do you believe in science?
ALSO POSSIBLE: To what extent do you believe in science?
注:カジュアルな会話であれば、元の表現でも問題ありません。少しフォーマルな文章を書く場合は、上記の表現をお勧めします。 NOTE: The original is possible if speaking casually. If you are writing a bit formally, I recommend the above wording.
I have a friend, he who is a really smart guy and he likes videos (on YouTube) with a popular sciencific contentYouTube videos about science.
I have a friend who is a really smart and he likes YouTube videos about science.
The value of video andHe feels that the online information in it is more valuable for him if there are links to official researchesif links to reputable research sites exist.
He feels that the online information is more valuable if links to reputable research sites exist.
MY GUESS: Sometimes he even readclose look at that researches - not the full documentation, but just the articles with and ponder their final conclusions.
MY GUESS: Sometimes he even close look at that research and ponder their final conclusions.
Also, he is an angry, jealosy fighter witht any rate, my friend is quick-to-anger and he has a keen interest in magic and esoteric things like a taro, an astrology, religions and an alternative medicine.
At any rate, my friend is quick-to-anger and he has a keen interest in magic and esoteric things like a taro, an astrology, religions and an alternative medicine.
MY GUESS: I don't believe in magic too and prefer base on evidence knowledge.
MY GUESS: I don't believe in magic and prefer base on evidence knowledge.
注:日本語と英語の両方で書くことで、読者があなたの英語をより正確に添削できるようになります。時折、あなたが何を伝えたいのか分かりにくいことがあります。二か国語の日記は、一か国語の日記よりも添削がずっと簡単です。NOTE: If you write in Japanese and English readers can correct your English more accurately. Sometimes I am unsure what you wish to say. Bilingual diary entries are much easier to correct than monolingual entries.
Especially I love the physics, which explanesins much of this wonderful world for us.
Especially I love physics, which explains much of this wonderful world for us.
ButHowever, recently I had an arguement with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on it.[MEANING UNCLEAR]
However, recently I had an argument with my friend, because [MEANING UNCLEAR]
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I have a friend, hewho is a really smart guy and he likes videos (on YouTube) with a popular scienctific content.
I have a friend, who is a really smart guy and likes videos (on YouTube) with popular scientific content.
The value of the video, and the information in it, is more valuable for him if there are links to official researches.
The value of the video, and the information in it, is more valuable for him if there are links to official research.
Sometimes he even just reads that researches - not the full documentation, but just the articles with final conclusions.
Sometimes he even just reads that research - not the full documentation, but just the articles with final conclusions.
Also, he is an angry, jealosy fighter withopposes magic and esoteric things like a taro, an astrology, religions and an alternative medicine.
Also, he opposes magic and esoteric things like a taro, an astrology, religions and alternative medicine.
My correction isn't the only option but I think my correction makes it more clear.
I don't believe in magic tooeither, and prefer knowledge based on evidence knowledge.
I don't believe in magic either, and prefer knowledge based on evidence.
EI especially I love the physics, which explaines this wonderful world for us.
I especially love physics, which explains this wonderful world for us.
But I had an arguement with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on it.
But I had an argument with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on it.
I think the entire end of the sentence that says "too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on it" but I'm not totally sure what you want to say so that's why I didn't correct it.
In my view, history showed us that science could often be wrong offen in the particular moment and just after the years of mistakes (as lasuch of the practices of lobotomy or the elecrtrical chair practice) people made discoveries which changed the common course.
In my view, history showed us that science could often be wrong in the particular moment and after the years of mistakes (such of the practices of lobotomy or the electrical chair) people made discoveries which changed the common course.
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't the absolute" and we should be led by science with a little carefully.ution.
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't absolute" and we should be led by science with a little caution.
How much do you believe in science?
I have a friend, h. He is a really smart guy and he likes videos (on YouTube) with a popular scienctific content.
I have a friend. He is a really smart guy and he likes videos (on YouTube) with popular scientific content.
The value ofA video and the information in it is more valuable for him if there are links to official researches.
A video and the information in it is more valuable for him if there are links to official research.
You don't need to include value twice. You could also say "The value of a video... is greater for him..." Either works.
In English, 'research' is an 'uncountable' noun.
Sometimes he even reads that researches - not the full documentation, but just the articles with final conclusions.
Sometimes he even reads that research - not the full documentation, but just the articles with final conclusions.
This is fine. Because he doesn't read the actual research paper, I would change "he even reads that research" to "he even reads *about* the research".
Also, he igets an angry, jealosy fighter withgry about magic and esoteric things like a tarot, an astrology, religions, and an alternative medicine.
Also, he gets angry about magic and esoteric things like a tarot, astrology, religion, and alternative medicine.
Jealousy is the feeling of being worried that someone will take something of yours away. It's most often used in the context of romantic relationships. It is also frequently used to mean the same thing as 'envy': wanting something someone else has. In this context, your friend being jealous would mean he wishes he could also believe in magic and esoteric things.
I wasn't sure what you meant by "fighter". You could say "he gets angry and fights with people about magic and esoteric things..." if that's what you meant.
I don't believe in magic tooeither and prefer to base my beliefs on evidence knowledge.
I don't believe in magic either and prefer to base my beliefs on evidence.
EI especially I love the physics, which explaines this wonderful world for us.
I especially love physics, which explains this wonderful world for us.
When we talk about an area of study (for example, physics, math, biology, creative writing, things like that), we don't use 'the'. "The physics" would be used when you're talking about the physics *of* something, for example "the physics of airplanes is so cool".
But I had an arguement with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too straightong opinions instead of a wide wisdom sight on itn open mind.
But I had an argument with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too strong opinions instead of an open mind.
If you meant "opinions that do not bend", 'strong' or 'inflexible' are the most natural words here.
I don't know exactly what you meant by "wide wisdom sight on it".
In my view, history showed us that science could be wrong offten in thea particular moment and just after the years of mistakes (such as laobotomy or elecrtrical chair practice), people made discoveries which changed theour common courseunderstanding.
In my view, history showed us that science could be wrong often in a particular moment and just after the years of mistakes (such as lobotomy or electrical chair practice), people made discoveries which changed our common understanding.
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't the absolute" and we should be led by science with a little carefully.
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't absolute" and we should be led by science a little carefully.
"a little carefully" or "with a little care". Either works.
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Good work! This is not a straight-forward topic to write about, and it was easy to understand your meaning even where there were mistakes. When exactly to use 'the', 'an', 'a', or to not use them at all is a bit tricky, so don't feel bad about that.
How much do you believe in science?
I have a friend, he is a really smart guy and he likes pop science videos (on YouTube) with a popular sciencific content.
I have a friend, he is a really smart guy and he likes pop science videos (on YouTube).
The value of video and information in itideo is more valuable forto him if there are links to official researches.
The video is more valuable to him if there are links to official researches.
Perfectly understood what you said, just made it more concise
Sometimes he even reads thate researches - not the full documentation, but just the articles with' final conclusions.
Sometimes he even reads the research - not the full documentation, but just the articles' final conclusions.
Also, he is an angry, jealousy fighter with magic and esoteric things like a tarot, an astrology, religions and an alternative medicine.
Also, he is an angry, jealous fighter with magic and esoteric things like tarot, astrology, religion and alternative medicine.
The sentence is a bit hard too understand, are you saying he doesn't believe in these things?
I don't believe in magic tooeither and prefer to base my knowledge on evidence knowledge.
I don't believe in magic either and prefer to base my knowledge on evidence.
EI especially I love the physics, which explaines this wonderful world for us.
I especially love physics, which explains this wonderful world for us.
But I had an arguement with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on itout any nuance.
But I had an argument with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much without any nuance.
In my view, history has showedn us that science couldan often be wrong offen in the particular moment and just after the years of mistakes (aslike the laobotomy or elecrtical chair practice)tric chair), people made discoveries which changed the common course.
In my view, history has shown us that science can often be wrong in the particular moment and just after the mistakes (like the lobotomy or electric chair), people made discoveries which changed the common course.
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't the absolut"e and we should be led by science but with a little carefullycaution.
My main point is that our knowledge isn't absolute and we should be led by science but with caution.
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Fantastic writing! Your English is very good, keep practicing. Just be careful with the spelling, and try and make your sentences more concise to enhance understanding.
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How much do you believe in science? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
注:カジュアルな会話であれば、元の表現でも問題ありません。少しフォーマルな文章を書く場合は、上記の表現をお勧めします。 NOTE: The original is possible if speaking casually. If you are writing a bit formally, I recommend the above wording. |
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I have a friend, he is a really smart guy and he likes videos (on YouTube) with a popular sciencific content.
I have a friend, he is a really smart guy and he likes pop science videos (on YouTube)
I have a friend
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The value of video and information in it is more valuable for him if there are links to official researches.
The v Perfectly understood what you said, just made it more concise
You don't need to include value twice. You could also say "The value of a video... is greater for him..." Either works. In English, 'research' is an 'uncountable' noun.
The value of the video, and the information in it, is more valuable for him if there are links to official research
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Sometimes he even read that researches - not the full documentation, but just the articles with final conclusions.
Sometimes he even reads th
Sometimes he even reads that research This is fine. Because he doesn't read the actual research paper, I would change "he even reads that research" to "he even reads *about* the research".
Sometimes he even just reads that research
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Also, he is an angry, jealosy fighter with magic and esoteric things like a taro, an astrology, religions and an alternative medicine.
Also, he is an angry, jealous The sentence is a bit hard too understand, are you saying he doesn't believe in these things?
Also, he Jealousy is the feeling of being worried that someone will take something of yours away. It's most often used in the context of romantic relationships. It is also frequently used to mean the same thing as 'envy': wanting something someone else has. In this context, your friend being jealous would mean he wishes he could also believe in magic and esoteric things. I wasn't sure what you meant by "fighter". You could say "he gets angry and fights with people about magic and esoteric things..." if that's what you meant.
Also, he My correction isn't the only option but I think my correction makes it more clear.
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I don't belive in magic too and prefer base on evidence knowledge.
I don't believe in magic
I don't believe in magic
I don't believe in magic
MY GUESS: I don't believe in magic 注:日本語と英語の両方で書くことで、読者があなたの英語をより正確に添削できるようになります。時折、あなたが何を伝えたいのか分かりにくいことがあります。二か国語の日記は、一か国語の日記よりも添削がずっと簡単です。NOTE: If you write in Japanese and English readers can correct your English more accurately. Sometimes I am unsure what you wish to say. Bilingual diary entries are much easier to correct than monolingual entries. |
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Especially I love the physics which explanes this wonderful world for us.
When we talk about an area of study (for example, physics, math, biology, creative writing, things like that), we don't use 'the'. "The physics" would be used when you're talking about the physics *of* something, for example "the physics of airplanes is so cool".
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But I had an arguement with my friend, because I think that he believes in science too much with too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on it.
But I had an argu
But I had an argu If you meant "opinions that do not bend", 'strong' or 'inflexible' are the most natural words here. I don't know exactly what you meant by "wide wisdom sight on it".
But I had an argu I think the entire end of the sentence that says "too straight opinion instead of a wide wisdom sight on it" but I'm not totally sure what you want to say so that's why I didn't correct it.
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In my view, history showed us that science could be wrong offen in the particular moment and just after the years of mistakes (as labotomy or elecrtical chair practice) people made discoveries which changed the common course.
In my view, history has show
In my view, history showed us that science could be wrong of
In my view, history showed us that science could often be wrong |
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My main point is that "our knowledge isn't the absolut" and we should led by science with a little carefully.
My main point is that
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't "a little carefully" or "with a little care". Either works.
My main point is that "our knowledge isn't |
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