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May 28, 2026

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Crowded road and train

When I made it to the train stop on time, there were more people there than usual. The train was very crowded and hot. The train I get on every day doesn't have many office worker and have more high schooler and secondary schooler, but today was opposite.
I gradually felt hotter and my face went red. Once I got off, it was colder outside than the traIn and I was surprised.
I guessed that most office workers decided to leave their work earlier because the weather was good and pleasant. Some people planed to go on trips, using Monday nextweek which is public holiday in my country.
My dad came back home later than normal, and he said the road was very busy and it took him about 1 hour.
I told my dad that my prediction, and he laughted.

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Crowded road and train

When I made it to the train stop on time, there were more people there than usual.

The train was very crowded and hot.

I gradually felt hotter and my face went red.

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May 30, 2026

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When I made it to the train stop on time, there were more people there than usual.

The train was very crowded and hot.

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mapomapo

May 30, 2026

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Crowded road and train


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When I made it to the train stop on time, there were more people there than usual.


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The train was very crowded and hot.


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The train was very crowded, and it was also hot. The train was very crowded, and it was also hot.

The train was very crowded and hot. The train was very crowded and hot.

I really want to say this should be "hot and crowded" but I can't think of a grammar rule why it should be so, just the opposite order feels much more natural to me.

The train I get on every day doesn't have many office worker and have more high schooler and secondary schooler, but today was opposite.


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The train I get on every day doesn'tusually haves many office worker and have more high schooler and secondary schoolsecondary school students and few office workers, but today was opposite. The train I get on every day usually has many secondary school students and few office workers, but today was opposite.

英語ではsecondary schoolは中高、それとも高校だけの意味があります。"The train I get on every day usually has many junior and senior high school students"も言えます。

Theis train, this very train I get on every day, yeah it doesn't have many office worker ands. Yeah I guess it haves more high schoolers and secondary schoolers, but yeah, today wasit was the opposite. This train, this very train I get on every day, yeah it doesn't have many office workers. Yeah I guess it has more high schoolers and secondary schoolers, but yeah, today it was the opposite.

The train I get on every day doesn't have many office workers and instead haves more high schoolers and secondary schoolers, but today the was opposite. The train I get on every day doesn't have many office workers and instead has more high schoolers and secondary schoolers, but today the was opposite.

"instead" adds to the contrasting feeling between the number of office workers vs the number of students. "high schoolers and secondary schoolers" sound a little weird, as these are mostly synonyms - "high schoolers" is American English while "secondary schoolers" is British English. If this was a direct translation of 中学生 and 高校生, then 中学生 would be called middle schoolers (or sometimes "junior high students") in American English. (Britain doesn't have middle school as a distinct step from secondary school so British English doesn't really have its own term for that, but most British English speakers are familar enough with American media to know what age range you mean)

I gradually felt hotter and my face went red.


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I gradually feltslowly started feeling hotter and my face went red. I slowly started feeling hotter and my face went red.

Once I got off, it was colder outside than the traIn and I was surprised.


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Once I got off, it was colder outside than inside the traIin and I was surprised. Once I got off, it was colder outside than inside the train and I was surprised.

Once I got off, it was colder outside than the traIn and I wasin, which surprised. me. Once I got off, it was colder outside than the train, which surprised me.

Once I got off, it was colder outside than the traIin and I was surprised. Once I got off, it was colder outside than the train and I was surprised.

I guessed that most office workers decided to leave their work earlier because the weather was good and pleasant.


I guessed that most office workers had decided to leave their workplaces earliery, because the weather was goodfine and pleasant. I guessed that most office workers had decided to leave their workplaces early, because the weather was fine and pleasant.

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I guessed that today, most office workers decided to leave their work earlier because the weather was good and pleasant.pretty chill, man. Yeah it was pretty cool and stuff. I guess that today, most office workers decided to leave work earlier because the weather was pretty chill, man. Yeah it was pretty cool and stuff.

Some people planed to go on trips, using Monday nextweek which is public holiday in my country.


Some people had planned to go on trips, using Monday next week, which is a public holiday in my country. Some people had planned to go on trips, using Monday next week, which is a public holiday in my country.

Some people probably planed to go on trips, using Monday nextweek whichce next Monday is public holiday in my country. Some people probably plan to go on trips, since next Monday is public holiday in my country.

Some people planned to go on trips, using Monday next week which isMonday as it’s a public holiday in my country. Some people planned to go on trips next week Monday as it’s a public holiday in my country.

Some people planned to go on trips, using Monday next week which is a public holiday in my country. Some people planned to go on trips, using Monday next week which is a public holiday in my country.

My dad came back home later than normal, and he said the road was very busy and it took him about 1 hour.


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My dad came back home later than normal, and husual. He said the road was very busycongested and it took him abrout 1nd an hour. My dad came back home later than usual. He said the road was congested and it took him around an hour.

I told my dad that my prediction, and he laughted.


I told my dad that was my prediction, and he laughted. I told my dad that was my prediction, and he laughed.

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I told my dad that was my prediction, and he laughted. I told my dad that was my prediction, and he laughed.

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