Aug. 2, 2025
Until what age is a person considered "young?"
I don't think there is any particular age. Because today is the youngest moment for me, to others, young age might depend on what age I am. Even when I get older, I want to keep my passion hot about oil painting. The heart never get old.
Until what age is a person considered "young?"?
I don't think there is any particular age.
BThis is because today is the youngest moment for me, to others, young age might depend on what age I am.
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Even when I get older, I want to keep my passion hot aboutburning passion for oil painting.
Theis heart will never get old.
Aug. 2, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It's very difficult to eliminate small mistakes in expression.
Because today is the youngest moment foI will ever mbe, but to others, being young age might depend on what age I am.
Even when I get older, I want to keep my passion hot aboutfor oil painting.
Instead of "hot", I would use a verb ending in "-ing" here. Things like "going" and "burning" would work!
The heart never gets old.
"The heart will never get old" also works!
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Great job! I also don't think there's a particular age where we get old. To me, it's a state of mind!
Until what age is a person considered "young?"
I don't think there is any particular age.
Because for me, today is the youngest moment foI'll ever mbe, while to others, young age mighwhat is considered young might just depend on what age I am.
I tweaked your sentence so that it is clearer and fluent.
Even whenas I get older, I want to keep my passion hot aboutfor oil painting burning.
The phrase is "passion for (something)".
The heart never gets old.
"Heart" is singular, so it should be "gets".
Aug. 2, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It's very difficult to eliminate small mistakes in expression.
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