May 4, 2020
Unsere Jubiläum
Morgen is die zweite Jubiläum von mir und meines Freundin. Für die Quaratäne kann wir leider nicht in einem Restaurant essen oder ein Musical sehen, aber wir wurden feiern mit essen Kolombianischer Essen und trinken Wein. Ich freue mir darauf!
Tomorrow is me and my girlfriend's second anniversary. Unfortunately, due to the quarantine, we can't eat at a restaurant or see a musical, but we will celebrate by eating Colombian food and drinking wine. I'm looking forward to it!
Unsere Jubiläum
"Unsere" would be used if the object is feminine or plural.
"Jubiläum" is neutrum (das Jubiläum) therefore "unser".
Morgen ist dieas zweite Jubiläum von mir und meinesr Freundin.
I suppose you just forgot the "t" out of habit. Again, Jubiläum is neutrum ("das Jubiläum") therefore you must use "das". "meiner" is exactly the other way around, "Freundin" is feminine ("die Freundin") therefore you use "meiner", "meines" is used for maskulinum and neutrum.
"Morgen ist unser zweites Jubiläum/zweiter Jahrestag" or " Meine Freundin und ich haben morgen unser zweites Jubiläum/unseren zweiten Jahrestag" would be more how a German would phrase it. Generally "Jubiläum" is used for enterprises, countries and official purposes, "Jahrestag" is used for personal relationships.
Für die Quarantäne kanönnen wir leider nicht in einem Restaurant essen oder ein Musical sehen, aber wir wuerden feiern mit essen Kden Tag mit kolombianischerm Essen und Wein trinken Wfeiern.
Plural of "kann" is "können". If the German Umlaut is needed and you can't type it with your keyboard, alwas use the "ae", "oe" or "ue" form. This way it reads better for a German and there is no room for misunderstanding.
Here you use "würde" instead of "wurde" because "wurde" is past tense of become, "würde" is subjunctive for "sein". This is important because subjunctives in German are colloquially only formed by the "würde" + infinitive form instead of subjunctive I or II so you will mostly encounter that and therefore it is more important than true subjunctives.
Here an object is missing, I inserted "der Tag" in accusative. "essen" is obsolete in this case.
"kolombianisch" is an adjective, therefore not capitalized.
"trinken Wein" (wine drinking) normally would be correct, but here you have to use the infinitive "Wein trinken" (to drink wine). Normally you just could drop the "trinken" and just write "Wein" ("I enjoy food and wine" versus "I enjoy eating food and drinking wine", it's mostly the same).
In German independent clauses the verb ALWAYS is in the second (grammatical) place, with the exception of questions. "Paul und Tom gehen ins Schwimmbad". "Paul und Tom" is the first part, "gehen" the second, "ins Schwimmbad" the third. Dependent clauses have the verb ALWAYS in the last place. And your dependent clause is "aber wir feiern" therefore "feiern" has to be in the last place.
Ich freue mirch darauf!
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Your German is pretty good. Don't get frustrated because of my corrections, overall your only problem seems to be the gender of German words and the respective cases. That's a problem many people have with our language. But all Germans would understand what you are saying.
I wrote as comprehensibly as I could, hoping I expressed myself clearly. I don't know if you can contact me on this site, today is my first day of using it, but if it is possible and you have any questions or you couldn't understand anything, contact me.
I wish you and your (supposed) girlfriend a wonderful day.
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Ich freue mir darauf! Ich freue mi |
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Unsere Jubiläum Unser "Unsere" would be used if the object is feminine or plural. "Jubiläum" is neutrum (das Jubiläum) therefore "unser". |
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Morgen is die zweite Jubiläum von mir und meines Freundin. Morgen ist d I suppose you just forgot the "t" out of habit. Again, Jubiläum is neutrum ("das Jubiläum") therefore you must use "das". "meiner" is exactly the other way around, "Freundin" is feminine ("die Freundin") therefore you use "meiner", "meines" is used for maskulinum and neutrum. "Morgen ist unser zweites Jubiläum/zweiter Jahrestag" or " Meine Freundin und ich haben morgen unser zweites Jubiläum/unseren zweiten Jahrestag" would be more how a German would phrase it. Generally "Jubiläum" is used for enterprises, countries and official purposes, "Jahrestag" is used for personal relationships. |
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Für die Quaratäne kann wir leider nicht in einem Restaurant essen oder ein Musical sehen, aber wir wurden feiern mit essen Kolombianischer Essen und trinken Wein. Für die Quarantäne k Plural of "kann" is "können". If the German Umlaut is needed and you can't type it with your keyboard, alwas use the "ae", "oe" or "ue" form. This way it reads better for a German and there is no room for misunderstanding. Here you use "würde" instead of "wurde" because "wurde" is past tense of become, "würde" is subjunctive for "sein". This is important because subjunctives in German are colloquially only formed by the "würde" + infinitive form instead of subjunctive I or II so you will mostly encounter that and therefore it is more important than true subjunctives. Here an object is missing, I inserted "der Tag" in accusative. "essen" is obsolete in this case. "kolombianisch" is an adjective, therefore not capitalized. "trinken Wein" (wine drinking) normally would be correct, but here you have to use the infinitive "Wein trinken" (to drink wine). Normally you just could drop the "trinken" and just write "Wein" ("I enjoy food and wine" versus "I enjoy eating food and drinking wine", it's mostly the same). In German independent clauses the verb ALWAYS is in the second (grammatical) place, with the exception of questions. "Paul und Tom gehen ins Schwimmbad". "Paul und Tom" is the first part, "gehen" the second, "ins Schwimmbad" the third. Dependent clauses have the verb ALWAYS in the last place. And your dependent clause is "aber wir feiern" therefore "feiern" has to be in the last place. |
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