Dec. 25, 2021
University Investment.
Nowadays university prices are high, but do this kind of inversion give enough retribution to people?
Some people think that we should take this money and make a better inversion as star your own business or buy your home. They support this idea because buying your own home or business gives you stability and also in many cases it is the purpose when you begin to study, that you can find a good job and do this kind of inversion. However, this is not the only one argument, they say that the university does not coherent with the real life, that in many cases the people does not find a job or not in the way that they thought when they chose the career or university.
On the other hand, many people think that the knowledge that you gain in the university it is invaluable. This kind of experience builds you as person and allows you to open your mind to new cultures, realities, experiences, moreover you take new capacities that make you more competitive worldwide. The people in favor of the inversion in university think that the knowledge is the kind of thing that no one can take away from you, and this allows you to rebuild yourself as many times as you need. They take the knowledge as a tool against injustices and world improvement.
In conclusion, the university is as any inversion that should be taken with responsibility and by correct reasons.
Nowadays university prices are high, but does this kind of inversion give enough retribution to people?
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I assume you mean "starting a business" and not "star a business." I replaced "home" with "real estate" to add more formality to the sentence. You could also use the word "house" instead of home. You should also be consistent with your pronouns.
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Be consistent with your pronouns. I am not really sure what you mean by "inversion." Do you perhaps mean "investment"?
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This kind of experience builds you as a person and allows you to open your mind to new cultures, realities, and experiences, m. Moreover, you take new capacitihallenges that make you more globally competitive worldwide.
I replaced "capacities" with "challenges" in order to make the sentence flow better. The phrase "competitive worldwide" is technically correct but I changed it to flow more naturally.
The people in favor of the inversion in university think that the knowledge is the kind of thing that no one can take away from you, and this allows you to rebuild yourself as many times as you need.
They take the knowledge as a tool against injustices and world improvement.
In conclusion, theattending university is as important as any inversion thatand should be taken with responsibility and by correct reasonswith proper conduct.
I don't really understand what you mean by "inversion." Do you mean "investment"?
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Dec. 26, 2021
Thank you very much.
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University Investment. |
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Nowadays university prices are high, but do this kind of inversion give enough retribution to people? Nowadays university prices are high, but does this kind of inversion give enough retribution to people? |
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Some people think that we should take this money and make a better inversion as star your own business or buy your home. Some people think I assume you mean "starting a business" and not "star a business." I replaced "home" with "real estate" to add more formality to the sentence. You could also use the word "house" instead of home. You should also be consistent with your pronouns. |
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They support this idea because buying your own home or business gives you stability and also in many cases it is the purpose when you begin to study, that you can find a good job and do this kind of inversion. They support this idea because Be consistent with your pronouns. I am not really sure what you mean by "inversion." Do you perhaps mean "investment"? |
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However, this is not the only one argument, they say that the university does not coherent with the real life, that in many cases the people does not find a job or not in the way that they thought when they chose the career or university. However, this is not the only Break down the sentences in order to avoid confusion. I suggest you add statistical evidence to back up your claims, but it is not needed. |
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On the other hand, many people think that the knowledge that you gain in the university it is invaluable. On the other hand, many people think that the knowledge |
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This kind of experience builds you as person and allows you to open your mind to new cultures, realities, experiences, moreover you take new capacities that make you more competitive worldwide. This kind of experience builds you as a person and allows you to open your mind to new cultures, realities, and experiences I replaced "capacities" with "challenges" in order to make the sentence flow better. The phrase "competitive worldwide" is technically correct but I changed it to flow more naturally. |
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The people in favor of the inversion in university think that the knowledge is the kind of thing that no one can take away from you, and this allows you to rebuild yourself as many times as you need. The people in favor of the inversion in university think that |
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They take the knowledge as a tool against injustices and world improvement. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In conclusion, the university is as any inversion that should be taken with responsibility and by correct reasons. In conclusion, I don't really understand what you mean by "inversion." Do you mean "investment"? |
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