June 13, 2020
Universities in Europe
Many old universities in Europe were in a rural area or in a small city, where is far from crowded big cities. They took a step from continuous changes of the times, appreciate cultural heritages with calm and thoughtful attitude and gradually made a new culture.
ヨーロッパの古い大学の多くは大都市の喧騒を離れた美しい田園地帯か小さな町にあった。時代の目まぐるしい変化から一定の距離を保ち、思想と瞑想のうちに過去の文化遺産を検討し、次第に新しい文化を作り上げていった。
Universities in Europe
Many old universities in Europe were in a rural areas or in a small cityies, where isthey were far from big crowded big cities.
You can shorten this sentence further using:
"Many old universities in Europe were in rural areas or small cities, far from big crowded cities."
They took a step from the continuous changes of the times, appreciated cultural heritages with a calm and thoughtful attitude and gradually made a new culture.
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June 26, 2020
They took a step from the continuous changes of the times, appreciated cultural heritages with a calm and thoughtful attitude and gradually made a new culture.
The phrase "continuous changes of the times" makes sense, but wouldn't be said by an English speaker.
Here are two ways to say it:
They took a step away from the continuously changing world and focused on appreciating cultural heritages with a calm and thoughtful attitude, while gradually making a new culture.
They took a step away from the changing world and began to appreciate their cultural heritages with calm and a thoughtful attitude, while gradually making a new culture.
The first phrase is separated from the second with "and" to indicate these are two different things. One is an action they took and the other is what they did instead. The last bit "while ..." describes something else they were doing.
July 19, 2020
thank you!!!
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Many old universities in Europe were in a rural area or in a small city, where is far from crowded big cities. Many old universities in Europe were in You can shorten this sentence further using: "Many old universities in Europe were in rural areas or small cities, far from big crowded cities." |
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They took a step from continuous changes of the times, appreciate cultural heritages with calm and thoughtful attitude and gradually made a new culture. They took a step from the continuous changes of the times, appreciated cultural heritages with a calm and thoughtful attitude and gradually made a new culture. |
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