Jan. 13, 2021
Unique talents
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We should support anyone with a talent. We should be supportive and empathetic towards people. We can also develop however we want. For example, if we have a singing talent, we can grow with other groups of people or take courses where we meet other people as well.
Talent is innate and comes with time. When I was little, I discovered a talent for writing. Now I like to write short stories, various texts and fairy tales. It relaxes me. I want to develop this talent as long as possible. Such things must be appreciated. I think that in the future I will discover other dormant talents. I wonder if I can go back to drawing. I used to dislike my style, but now I think everyone has their own unique style. Maybe it will work? Who knows. My strong point is also good correction of the Polish language. I think this is a unique talent, because not everyone can remember where to put a comma or know how to write a word. Every talent is worth cultivating.
Unique talents
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We should support anyone with a talent.
We should be supportive and empathetic towards people.
Nothing about this is grammatically wrong, but it is a little repetitive. To avoid repetition, you could say "We should be supportive and empathetic towards anyone with a talent."
We can also develop however we want.
Again, not wrong, but confusing. A more specific sentence could say "We should also develop our own talents."
For example, if we have alike singing talent, we can growfoster this talent with other groups of people or take courses where we meet other people who share those interests as well.
Talent is both innate and comes with time.
Since "innate" and "comes with time" are opposites, I would specify you mean both.
When I was little, I discovered a talent for writing.
Now I like to write short stories, various texts and fairy tales.
It relaxes me.
I want to develop this talent as long as possible.
Such things must be appreciated.
I think that in the future I will discover other dormant talents.
I wonder if I can go back to drawing.
I used to dislike my writing style, but now I think everyone has their own unique style.
I suggested writing here, but you could mean a lot of things here. It's a little confusing. If you say "style" by itself, it usually means clothing.
Maybe it[what?] will work?
What "it" are you referring to?
Who knows.
MOne of my stroeng pointths is also providing good correction ofs for the Polish language.
I think this is a unique talent, because not everyone can remember where to put a comma or know how to write a word.
Every talent is worth cultivating.
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Great vocab and overall grammar! I'd think about being specific in future writing, or making more complex sentences instead of a lot of simple sentences to take your writing to the next level!
Jan. 14, 2021
Maybe it[what?] will work?
Hmmm I referring to: "Maybe can I get it?", if it is correct :))
Jan. 14, 2021
Thank you, Lizzy! I have trouble writing more complex sentences. The more such longer sentences I create, the more mistakes I make. This is my impression but I will try. :)
Jan. 14, 2021
Hmmm I referring to: "Maybe can I get it?", if it is correct :))
The problem is not knowing what it is referring to. So, it could be "maybe returning to drawing will work?" or "Maybe discovering other talents will work?" or "Maybe developing my own unique style will work?"
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https://kampus.come.uw.edu.pl/pluginfile.php/455037/mod_forum/post/320755/Enjoy_Talents.png This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We should support anyone with a talent. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We should be supportive and empathetic towards people. We should be supportive and empathetic towards people. Nothing about this is grammatically wrong, but it is a little repetitive. To avoid repetition, you could say "We should be supportive and empathetic towards anyone with a talent." |
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We can also develop however we want. We can also develop however we want. Again, not wrong, but confusing. A more specific sentence could say "We should also develop our own talents." |
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For example, if we have a singing talent, we can grow with other groups of people or take courses where we meet other people as well. For example, if we |
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Talent is innate and comes with time. Talent is both innate and comes with time. Since "innate" and "comes with time" are opposites, I would specify you mean both. |
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When I was little, I discovered a talent for writing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I like to write short stories, various texts and fairy tales. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It relaxes me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to develop this talent as long as possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Such things must be appreciated. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think that in the future I will discover other dormant talents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wonder if I can go back to drawing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used to dislike my style, but now I think everyone has their own unique style. I used to dislike my writing style, but now I think everyone has their own unique style. I suggested writing here, but you could mean a lot of things here. It's a little confusing. If you say "style" by itself, it usually means clothing. |
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Maybe it will work? Maybe What "it" are you referring to? |
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Who knows. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My strong point is also good correction of the Polish language.
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I think this is a unique talent, because not everyone can remember where to put a comma or know how to write a word. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every talent is worth cultivating. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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