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@marblemenow suggested that I talk about my best hikes. @marblemenow suggested that I talk about my best hikes.

You're welcome.

Here it isone is / Here’s one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/W1Ujh1m9U0E Here one is / Here’s one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/W1Ujh1m9U0E

Since you wrote “hikes” (plural) in the previous sentence, “it” (singular) doesn’t work here.

As usual, please feel free to tell me if I did something wrong in the video. As usual, please feel free to tell me if I did something wrong in the video.

You're all good. Love the scenery in your YouTube short.

This video has a follow-up story that came later.happened This video has a follow-up story that happened

This video has a follow-up story that came later(out) later when my friend and I went back to the foot of the waterfall and walked to the main road. This video has a follow-up story that came (out) later when my friend and I went back to the foot of the waterfall and walked to the main road.

When my friend and I went back to the foot of the waterfall and walked to the main road., we… When my friend and I went back to the foot of the waterfall and walked to the main road, we…

Merge this with the next sentence.

Wwhen my friend and I went back to the foot of the waterfall and walked to the main road. when my friend and I went back to the foot of the waterfall and walked to the main road.

This can be made into one sentence by combining with the previous sentence.

When my friend and I went back to the foot of the waterfall and walked to the main road.

I combined this sentence fragment with the sentence above.

W…we couldn't take a taxi because it was too wild.remote. …we couldn't take a taxi because it was too remote.

“Wild” sounds like maybe the available taxi drivers looked too disreputable, or maybe there were too many passengers fighting over each taxi. I’m guessing you mean “remote.”

We couldn't take a taxi because it was too wild. We couldn't take a taxi because it was too wild

While this is a complete and correct sentence, you can continue the thought with "and" making the complete thought flow more naturally.

And all of the cars that passed by didn't have enough space for (the) two of us. And all of the cars that passed by didn't have enough space for (the) two of us.

Suggestion: And none of the cars that passed by had enough space for the two of us.

Aand all of the cars that passed by didn't have enough space for two of us. and all of the cars that passed by didn't have enough space for two of us.

These two sentences can also be made into one sentence.

And all ofll the cars that passed by didn't have enough space for two of us. All the cars that passed by didn't have enough space for two of us.

AtIn the end, two policemen who drove up to deal with a car accident took us to the nearest bus stop. In the end, two policemen who drove up to deal with a car accident took us to the nearest bus stop.

At the end, two policemen, who drove up to deal with a car accident, took us to the nearest bus stop. At the end, two policemen, who drove up to deal with a car accident, took us to the nearest bus stop.

This is a little more complex. Everything between the two "," is a small clarifying explanation. By itself it is not a complete sentence, but it adds more detail about why the policemen were there. If you removed everything between ",", you would still have a complete and correct sentence: "At the end, two policemen took us to the nearest bus stop."

When {the two policemen | they} heard our exploration story, they said we were lucky that we didn't climb to the top (level) of the waterfall. When {the two policemen | they} heard our exploration story, they said we were lucky that we didn't climb to the top (level) of the waterfall.

When the two policemen heard about our exploration storyedition, they said we were lucky that we didn't climb to the top level of the waterfall. When the two policemen heard about our expedition, they said we were lucky that we didn't climb to the top level of the waterfall.

Here "exploration story" is valid, but wouldn't typically be said by a native speaker. People would still understand you though. Instead, using a word like "expedition", which is more grand than "exploration", adds subtle context that this hike entailed much more than your normal hikes! ^This is also a sentence where removing "which is more grand then 'exploration'", still leaves us with a complete sentence.

Every year, several times a year, they have to rescue the lost hikers several times. Every year, several times a year, they have to rescue the lost hikers.

Every year, they have to rescue the lost hikers several times. Every year, they have to rescue lost hikers several times.

EThey told us that every year, they frequently have to rescue the lost hikers several times. They told us that every year they frequently have to rescue lost hikers.

Added "They told us that" to clarify that the policemen told you this information. "Several times" can be replaced with "frequently". "lost hikers" does not need "the" in front of it.

Every year, they have to rescue the lost(missing or injured) hikers several times. Every year, they have to rescue the (missing or injured) hikers several times.

And every time, it's hard and dangerous, especially when some peopleof the {people | hikers} are injured. And every time, it's hard and dangerous, especially when some of the {people | hikers} are injured.

And eEvery time, it's hard and dangerous, especially when some people are injured. Every time, it's hard and dangerous, especially when some people are injured.