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MinazLe

July 10, 2025

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I didn’t expect the trip to end like this. Last weekend, my friends and I went camping in the mountains. At first, everything was perfect – the weather was sunny, we sang songs, and told funny stories around the fire.
However, at night, it started to rain heavily. Our tents got wet, and the wind was so strong that we couldn’t sleep at all. The next morning, we found that the road back was blocked by a fallen tree.
Luckily, we had a phone signal. We called for help and a rescue team came after an hour.
We were all safe, but tired and dirty. It was a trip we would never forget!

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Um i need sb to correct this. this is just a sample

I didn’t expect the trip to end like this.

Last weekend, my friends and I went camping in the mountains.

At first, everything was perfect – the weather was sunny, we sang songs, and told funny stories around the fire.

However, at night, it started to rain heavily.

Our tents got wet, and the wind was so strong that we couldn’t sleep at all.

The next morning, we found that the road back was blocked by a fallen tree.

Luckily, we had a phone signal.

We called for help and a rescue team came after an hour.

We were all safe, but tired and dirty.

It was a trip we would never forget!

Um i need sb to correct this. this is just a sample


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I didn’t expect the trip to end like this.


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Last weekend, my friends and I went camping in the mountains.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first, everything was perfect – the weather was sunny, we sang songs, and told funny stories around the fire.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, at night, it started to rain heavily.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Our tents got wet, and the wind was so strong that we couldn’t sleep at all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The next morning, we found that the road back was blocked by a fallen tree.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Luckily, we had a phone signal.


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We called for help and a rescue team came after an hour.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We were all safe, but tired and dirty.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a trip we would never forget!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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