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alexwong2164

Nov. 3, 2020

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Expat life

Just reading my friend’s post.

About a Japanese single father living in Paris for 15 years.

But still struggle with daily life problems with the locals.

I lived in UK for 7 years as students.

Even that consider was long a period of time.

But as a student I don’t have to dealing with many problems.

Like paying tax, working stress…

Having said that just like my friend’s experience.

In UK many rules, system… I found that difficult to understand.

Later I realize because I always use my mother country to compare.

In fact, I should put that aside first.

Therefore that makes me feel better.

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Expat life

In fact, I should put that aside first.

Therefore that makes me feel better.

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Just reading my friend’s post.


JI just reading my friend’s post. I just read my friend’s post.

I'm just reading my friend’s post. (present tense, you're currently doing it) I just read my friend’s post. (past tense, you were reading the post, but now you're finished)

JustI just finished reading my friend’s post about a single Japanese father who has lived in Paris for 15 years but stills struggles daily with the locals. I just finished reading my friend’s post about a single Japanese father who has lived in Paris for 15 years but stills struggles daily with the locals.

This sentence, along with the following 2 should all be combined into the same sentence.

JI was just reading my friend’s post.... I was just reading my friend’s post....

About a Japanese single father living in Paris for 15 years.


AIt was about a Japanese single father living in Paris for 15 years. It was about a Japanese single father living in Paris for 15 years.

About a Japanese single father livingsingle Japanese father who has lived in Paris for 15 years. About a single Japanese father who has lived in Paris for 15 years.

A... about a Japanese single father living in Paris for the past 15 years. ... about a Japanese single father living in Paris for the past 15 years.

But still struggle with daily life problems with the locals.


But he still struggles with daily life problems with the locals in his life. But he still struggles with daily problems with the locals in his life.

There are daily problems and life problems, but it seems strange to put them together as daily life problems.

But still struggles with daily life problems with the locals. But still struggles with daily with the locals.

ButHe is still struggle withing daily, life problems withving amongst the locals. He is still struggling daily, living amongst the locals.

I lived in UK for 7 years as students.


I lived in UK for 7 years as a students. I lived in UK for 7 years as a student.

I lived in the UK for 7 years as a students. I lived in the UK for 7 years as a student.

I lived in the UK for 7 years as a students. I lived in the UK for 7 years as a student.

Even that consider was long a period of time.


Even that is consider wased a long a period of time. Even that is considered a long period of time.

Even that is consider wased a long a period of time. Even that is considered a long period of time.

EI even that consider was long a period ofthat to be a long time. I even consider that to be a long time.

But as a student I don’t have to dealing with many problems.


But as a student I don’t have to dealing with many problems. But as a student I don’t have to deal with many problems.

Normally you use to + verb or just the verb +ing. I like to swim. I like swimming. I have to read a book. She taught me to sing. She taught me singing.

But as a student I don’idn't have to dealing with as many problems. But as a student I didn't have to deal with as many problems.

But aAs a student, I doidn’t have to dealing with many problems such as .... As a student, I didn’t have to deal with problems such as ....

Like paying tax, working stress…


Like paying tax, working stress… Like paying tax, working stress…

This is can be added to the previous sentence.

Like paying tax, working stress… Like paying tax, work stress…

Like ...paying taxes, working stress, etc. ...paying taxes, work stress, etc.

Having said that just like my friend’s experience.


Having said that just like my friend’s experience, In the UK there are many rules and systems… I found that difficult to understand. Having said that just like my friend’s experience, In the UK there are many rules and systems… I found that difficult to understand.

Having said that, just like my friend’s experience in the UK there are many rules and systems that I found were difficult to understand. Having said that, just like my friend’s experience in the UK there are many rules and systems that I found were difficult to understand.

This sentence as well as the following sentence should be combined.

Having said that just like, I can still relate to my friend’s experience. Having said that, I can still relate to my friend’s experience.

In UK many rules, system… I found that difficult to understand.


In UKthe UK there are many rules, and systems… I found that difficult to understand. In the UK there are many rules and systems… I found that difficult to understand.

This is can be added to the previous sentence.

In UKthe UK there are many rules, and systems that I found that difficult to understand. In the UK there are many rules and systems that I found difficult to understand.

In UK many rules, system… I found thatthe UK, it was difficult for me to understand. their rules and systems. In the UK, it was difficult for me to understand their rules and systems.

Later I realize because I always use my mother country to compare.


Later I realize becaused I always use my mother country toas a compare.ison. Later I realized I always use my mother country as a comparison.

LI later I realized that it was because I always used to compare it with my mother country to compare. I later realized that it was because I always used to compare it with my mother country.

Later, I realized that it's because I always usecompare the UK with my mother country to compare. Later, I realized that it's because I always compare the UK with my mother country.

In fact, I should put that aside first.


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In fact, I should put that aside first. In fact, I should put that aside first.

I think that this is grammatically correct but it makes no sense in this context. I think what you meant to say was, "I should put aside my bias", or something along those lines.

In factTherefor, I should put that aside first.stop doing that. Therefor, I should stop doing that.

Therefore that makes me feel better.


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Therefore that makes meI would feel better. Therefore I would feel better.

Therefore thatIt will makes me feel better. It will make me feel better.

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