Dec. 3, 2020
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I saw a Youtube video of Canada. It seems they've gotten their real first snow fall. It's a beautiful scenery. When I was kid, snow piled up on the ground in my city at least a few times a year, but we didn't have snow last winter. It might have snowed lightly, but I missed seeing it. I'm looking forward to seeing how the scenery will change in Canada during winter.
Youtubeでカナダの動画を見ました。 今年初めて雪が積もったそうです。 きれいな景色です。 私が子どもの頃は、少なくとも年に数回は私の街にも雪が積もりましたが、去年の冬は雪が降りませんでした。 もしかしたら雪がちらついていたかもしれませんが、見逃してしまいました。 これから冬のカナダの風景がどう変わるか楽しみです。
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It seems they'vre gottenhaving their real first snow fall of the year.
It seems they're having their first snow fall of the year.
It's aThe scenery is beautiful scenery.
The scenery is beautiful.
When I was kid, snow used to piled up on the ground in my city at least a few times a year, but now the climate has changed as we didn't even have snow at all last winter.
When I was kid, snow used to pile up on the ground in my city at least a few times a year, but now the climate has changed as we didn't even have snow at all last winter.
It might have snowed lightly, but I missed seeing it.
It might have snowed lightly, but I missed it.
Back to Canada. I'm looking forward to seeing how the scenery will change in Canada during the winter.
Back to Canada. I'm looking forward to seeing how the scenery will change during the winter.
Dec. 3, 2020
Thank you for the corrections! I learned a lot. :D
SnowBetter titled: Snowfall
Better titled: Snowfall
I sawrecently watched a Youtube video ofabout Canada.,
I recently watched a Youtube video about Canada,
It seems they've gottenwhere they received their real first real snow fall.
where they received their first real snowfall.
It's a looked beautiful scenery.
It looked beautiful.
When I was kiDuring my childhood, snow would piled up on the ground in my city at least a few times a year, but we didn't have snow, every year. However, we didn't see much of it last winter.
During my childhood, snow would pile up in my city at least a few times, every year. However, we didn't see much of it last winter.
"on the ground" sounds repetitive. While it is technically correct that snow falls on the ground, it could also fall on trees, roofs, etc. That's why it's best to leave that out here.
It might havePerhaps it did snowed a lighttlye, but I missed seeingdidn't see any of it.
Perhaps it did snow a little, but I didn't see any of it.
I'm looking forward to seeknowing how the scenery willweather might change in Canada during this winter.
I'm looking forward to knowing how the weather might change in Canada during this winter.
Added "might" here, because we don't know how the weather in Canada will be yet.
Dec. 3, 2020
Thank you for the corrections! I learned a lot. :D
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It's a beautiful scenery.
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When I was kid, snow piled up on the ground in my city at least a few times a year, but we didn't have snow last winter.
"on the ground" sounds repetitive. While it is technically correct that snow falls on the ground, it could also fall on trees, roofs, etc. That's why it's best to leave that out here.
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It might have snowed lightly, but I missed seeing it.
It might have snowed lightly, but I missed |
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I'm looking forward to seeing how the scenery will change in Canada during winter.
I'm looking forward to Added "might" here, because we don't know how the weather in Canada will be yet.
Back to Canada. I'm looking forward to seeing how the scenery will change |
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