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Is this grammatically correct?

< Over time, many of their buttons became viewed as “extra” and removed , and with each reduction these devices eventually developed into the phones in our pockets.>

In this sentence, I would like to know whether 'removed' is grammatically correct or not.
I believe it can be used in parallel with 'viewed' after the verb 'became'.
Is this construction possible?

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Is this grammatically correct?

In this sentence, I would like to know whether 'removed' is grammatically correct or not.

I believe it can be used in parallel with 'viewed' after the verb 'became'.

Is this construction possible?

Is this grammatically correct?

In this sentence, I would like to know whether 'removed' is grammatically correct or not.

I believe it can be used in parallel with 'viewed' after the verb 'became'.

Is this construction possible?

Is this grammatically correct?


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< Over time, many of their buttons became viewed as “extra” and removed , and with each reduction these devices eventually developed into the phones in our pockets.>


< Over time, many of their buttons became viewed as extra” andneous and were removed , and with each reduction these devices eventually developed into the phones in our pockets (today).> < Over time, many of their buttons became viewed as extraneous and were removed, and with each reduction these devices eventually developed into the phones in our pockets (today).>

While such a parallel construction is grammatical, "became removed" is a very awkward expression that makes the sentence sound unnatural.

< "Over time, many of their buttons became viewed as “extraneous” and removed , and with each reduction these devices eventually developed into the phones in our pockets.> today." "Over time, many of their buttons became viewed as “extraneous” and removed, and with each reduction these devices eventually developed into the phones in our pockets today."

In this sentence, I want to know whether 'removed' is grammatically correct or not.


I think it can be paralleled with 'viewed' after 'became'.


Is it possible?


In this sentence, I would like to know whether 'removed' is grammatically correct or not.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I believe it can be used in parallel with 'viewed' after the verb 'became'.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Is this construction possible?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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