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alexwong2164

Nov. 5, 2020

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Ukraine / Estonia

Around 2 years ago got interest about Estonia.

Last year even planning to visit there.

As result I didn’t go there because many reasons.

At such time I was thinking maybe I can go there next year.

Because no one believe the virus problem will last for so long.

Anyway, recently got interest on Ukraine.

Thanks to internet!

Provide so many good, free and update information.


All I need right now is the government allow us to travel aboard.

Sure, if you know Ukraine or got friends from there.

Please let me know, I got many questions to ask.

Corrections

Around 2 years ago gotI became interest abouted in Estonia.

Last year I was even planning to visit there.

As resultHowever, I didn’t go there because of many reasons.

Or
However, I _couldn't_ go there because of many reasons

At suchthe time I was thinking maybe I canould go there next year.

Because no one believed the virus problem willwould last for so long.

Anyway, I recently gotbecame interest oed in Ukraine.

Or
_That aside_, I recently became interested in Ukraine

(This way the sentence follows on more logically from the last sentence)

Thanks to the internet!

PIt provides so manyuch good, free and up to date information.

All I need right now is the government to allow us to travel aboard.

Sure, iIf you know about Ukraine or gothave friends from there.,

Please let me know,. I gothave many questions to ask.

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Good work

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Around 2 years ago got, I became interested about Estonia.

Last year I even planninged to visit there.

As resultBut unfortunately I didn’t go there because of many different reasons.

"As a result" is used to tell a consequence of something, so you would need to provide the causation first before going onto the next sentence.

For example, you could say:
"Last year I planned to go to Estonia, but some things came up, and
as a result I couldn't go there."

In this case, the "many reasons" ---> " some things" just to make the sentence sound more natural

At suchthat time I was thinkingthought maybe I can go there next year instead.

Because no one believes the virus problem will last for stoo long.

Anyway, I recently gotbecame interest oned about Ukraine.

Thanks to the internet!

PIt provides so manyuch good, free and regularly updated information.

(I think that's what you meant, I'm sorry if I corrected this incorrectly!)

All I need right now is for the government to allow us to travel aboard.

Sureo, if you know about Ukraine or gothave friends from there.,

Please let me know, I gothave many questions to ask.

Feedback

Good luck finding Ukrainian buddies here online!! I think it's great you're so interested in these countries :)

Just some writing tips from me:

1) Remember to use "I" when talking about yourself
2) Perhaps look into the differences between the words "have" and "got"; (“Have” refers to owning something and “got” refers to receiving something)

Otherwise this was a good piece of writing! 頑張ってね!

Ukraine / Estonia


Around 2 years ago got interest about Estonia.


Around 2 years ago got, I became interested about Estonia.

Around 2 years ago gotI became interest abouted in Estonia.

Last year even planning to visit there.


Last year I even planninged to visit there.

Last year I was even planning to visit there.

As result I didn’t go there because many reasons.


As resultBut unfortunately I didn’t go there because of many different reasons.

"As a result" is used to tell a consequence of something, so you would need to provide the causation first before going onto the next sentence. For example, you could say: "Last year I planned to go to Estonia, but some things came up, and as a result I couldn't go there." In this case, the "many reasons" ---> " some things" just to make the sentence sound more natural

As resultHowever, I didn’t go there because of many reasons.

Or However, I _couldn't_ go there because of many reasons

At such time I was thinking maybe I can go there next year.


At suchthat time I was thinkingthought maybe I can go there next year instead.

At suchthe time I was thinking maybe I canould go there next year.

Because no one believe the virus problem will last for so long.


Because no one believes the virus problem will last for stoo long.

Because no one believed the virus problem willwould last for so long.

Anyway, recently got interest on Ukraine.


Anyway, I recently gotbecame interest oned about Ukraine.

Anyway, I recently gotbecame interest oed in Ukraine.

Or _That aside_, I recently became interested in Ukraine (This way the sentence follows on more logically from the last sentence)

Thanks to internet!


Thanks to the internet!

Thanks to the internet!

Provide so many good, free and update information.


PIt provides so manyuch good, free and regularly updated information.

(I think that's what you meant, I'm sorry if I corrected this incorrectly!)

PIt provides so manyuch good, free and up to date information.

All I need right now is the government allow us to travel aboard.


All I need right now is for the government to allow us to travel aboard.

All I need right now is the government to allow us to travel aboard.

Sure, if you know Ukraine or got friends from there.


Sureo, if you know about Ukraine or gothave friends from there.,

Sure, iIf you know about Ukraine or gothave friends from there.,

Please let me know, I got many questions to ask.


Please let me know, I gothave many questions to ask.

Please let me know,. I gothave many questions to ask.

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