Nov. 5, 2020
Around 2 years ago got interest about Estonia.
Last year even planning to visit there.
As result I didn’t go there because many reasons.
At such time I was thinking maybe I can go there next year.
Because no one believe the virus problem will last for so long.
Anyway, recently got interest on Ukraine.
Thanks to internet!
Provide so many good, free and update information.
All I need right now is the government allow us to travel aboard.
Sure, if you know Ukraine or got friends from there.
Please let me know, I got many questions to ask.
Around 2 years ago gotI became interest abouted in Estonia.
Last year I was even planning to visit there.
As resultHowever, I didn’t go there because of many reasons.
Or
However, I _couldn't_ go there because of many reasons
At suchthe time I was thinking maybe I canould go there next year.
Because no one believed the virus problem willwould last for so long.
Anyway, I recently gotbecame interest oed in Ukraine.
Or
_That aside_, I recently became interested in Ukraine
(This way the sentence follows on more logically from the last sentence)
Thanks to the internet!
PIt provides so manyuch good, free and up to date information.
All I need right now is the government to allow us to travel aboard.
Sure, iIf you know about Ukraine or gothave friends from there.,
Please let me know,. I gothave many questions to ask.
Feedback
Good work
Around 2 years ago got, I became interested about Estonia.
Last year I even planninged to visit there.
As resultBut unfortunately I didn’t go there because of many different reasons.
"As a result" is used to tell a consequence of something, so you would need to provide the causation first before going onto the next sentence.
For example, you could say:
"Last year I planned to go to Estonia, but some things came up, and
as a result I couldn't go there."
In this case, the "many reasons" ---> " some things" just to make the sentence sound more natural
At suchthat time I was thinkingthought maybe I can go there next year instead.
Because no one believes the virus problem will last for stoo long.
Anyway, I recently gotbecame interest oned about Ukraine.
Thanks to the internet!
PIt provides so manyuch good, free and regularly updated information.
(I think that's what you meant, I'm sorry if I corrected this incorrectly!)
All I need right now is for the government to allow us to travel aboard.
Sureo, if you know about Ukraine or gothave friends from there.,
Please let me know, I gothave many questions to ask.
Feedback
Good luck finding Ukrainian buddies here online!! I think it's great you're so interested in these countries :)
Just some writing tips from me:
1) Remember to use "I" when talking about yourself
2) Perhaps look into the differences between the words "have" and "got"; (“Have” refers to owning something and “got” refers to receiving something)
Otherwise this was a good piece of writing! 頑張ってね!
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Around 2 years ago got interest about Estonia. Around 2 years ago Around 2 years ago |
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Last year even planning to visit there. Last year I even plann Last year I was even planning to visit there. |
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As result I didn’t go there because many reasons.
"As a result" is used to tell a consequence of something, so you would need to provide the causation first before going onto the next sentence. For example, you could say: "Last year I planned to go to Estonia, but some things came up, and as a result I couldn't go there." In this case, the "many reasons" ---> " some things" just to make the sentence sound more natural
Or However, I _couldn't_ go there because of many reasons |
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At such time I was thinking maybe I can go there next year. At At |
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Because no one believe the virus problem will last for so long. Because no one believes the virus problem will last Because no one believed the virus |
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Anyway, recently got interest on Ukraine. Anyway, I recently Anyway, I recently Or _That aside_, I recently became interested in Ukraine (This way the sentence follows on more logically from the last sentence) |
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Thanks to internet! Thanks to the internet! Thanks to the internet! |
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Provide so many good, free and update information.
(I think that's what you meant, I'm sorry if I corrected this incorrectly!)
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All I need right now is the government allow us to travel aboard. All I need All I need right now is the government to allow us to travel aboard. |
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Sure, if you know Ukraine or got friends from there. S
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Please let me know, I got many questions to ask. Please let me know, I Please let me know |
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