Jan. 31, 2021
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I'm trying to improve my English by reading stuff and rewriting immediately after a text using my own words without looking at the original source. Therefore, I'd be very appreciative if you could spot any mistakes or unnatural words and sentences out there. Thank you!
After Elizabeth I died childless in 1603, James I of England and VI of Scotland became king (1603-1625), who had inherited the Scottish throne when he was only 13 months old. His childhood was turbulent, and later on married Anne of Denmark, with whom had 9 children. James I was a strong advocate of royal absolutism and the divine right of kings, which asserted kings derived their authority directly from God and, therefore, could not be held accountable for their actions by an earthly authority (such as Parliament), only by a divine authority. This earned him a reputation for narrow-mindedness and conflict with an increasingly self-asserted Parliament, which set the stage for the rebellion against his successor, Charles I. He commissioned a version of the Bible, which remained the standard text for more than 250 years - the King James’ Bible.
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I'm trying to improve my English by reading stuff and rewriting immediately after a text using my own words without looking at the original source.
I'm trying to improve my English by reading stuff and rewriting immediately after using my own words without looking at the original source.
Therefore, I'd be very appreciative if you could spot any mistakes or unnatural words and sentences out there.
Therefore, I'd be very appreciative if you could spot any mistakes or unnatural words and sentences here.
Thank you!
After Elizabeth I died childless in 1603, James I of England and VI of Scotland became kingJames I of England (1603-1625), who. He had inherited the Scottish throne when he was only 13 months old in 1567.
After Elizabeth I died childless in 1603, James VI of Scotland became James I of England (1603-1625). He had inherited the Scottish throne when he was only 13 months old in 1567.
Some adjustments for clarity. I feel this is best split in two sentences.
His childhood was turbulent, and later onas an adult married Anne of Denmark, with whom had 9 children.
His childhood was turbulent, and as an adult married Anne of Denmark, with whom had 9 children.
going from childhood to marriage with the phrase "later on" is unexpected.
James I was a strong advocate of royal absolutism and the divine right of kings, which asserted kings derived their authority directly from God and, therefore, could not be held accountable for their actions by an earthly authority (such as Parliament), only by a divine authority.
This earned him a reputation for narrow-mindedness and conflictfrequently clashed with an increasingly self-assertived Parliament, which set the stage for the rebellion against his successor, Charles I.
This earned him a reputation for narrow-mindedness and frequently clashed with an increasingly self-assertive Parliament, which set the stage for the rebellion against his successor, Charles I.
He commissioned a version of the Bible, which remained the standard English-language text for more than 250 years - the King James’ Bible. He commissioned a version of the Bible, which remained the standard English-language text for more than 250 years - the King James’ Bible.
Added "English-language" to be more specific
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Well done, nice sentence length.
Feb. 4, 2021
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I'm trying to improve my English by reading stuff and rewriting immediately after a text using my own words without looking at the original source.
I'm trying to improve my English by reading stuff and rewriting immediately after |
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Therefore, I'd be very appreciative if you could spot any mistakes or unnatural words and sentences out there.
Therefore, I'd be very appreciative if you could spot any mistakes or unnatural words and sentences |
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Thank you! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After Elizabeth I died childless in 1603, James I of England and VI of Scotland became king (1603-1625), who had inherited the Scottish throne when he was only 13 months old.
After Elizabeth I died childless in 1603, James Some adjustments for clarity. I feel this is best split in two sentences. |
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His childhood was turbulent, and later on married Anne of Denmark, with whom had 9 children.
His childhood was turbulent, and going from childhood to marriage with the phrase "later on" is unexpected. |
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James I was a strong advocate of royal absolutism and the divine right of kings, which asserted kings derived their authority directly from God and, therefore, could not be held accountable for their actions by an earthly authority (such as Parliament), only by a divine authority. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This earned him a reputation for narrow-mindedness and conflict with an increasingly self-asserted Parliament, which set the stage for the rebellion against his successor, Charles I.
This earned him a reputation for narrow-mindedness and |
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He commissioned a version of the Bible, which remained the standard text for more than 250 years - the King James’ Bible. He commissioned a version of the Bible, which remained the standard English-language text for more than 250 years - the King James’ Bible. He commissioned a version of the Bible, which remained the standard English-language text for more than 250 years - the King James’ Bible. Added "English-language" to be more specific |
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