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July 18, 2022

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What is your intention for this week?

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks. I have been out of order, and I have alter my sleep patterns too. Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier. My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.
Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts. I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too far. Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks. I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings hold me back anymore.
My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me. But, I will overcome all these, and step by step. Let’s start from tomorrow.

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July 22, 2022

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This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

Alt: Try to figure out what to do (more general and colloquial)

Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier.

My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.

Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts.

Let’s start from tomorrow.

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July 18, 2022

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My anxiety has cometaken over, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the worldexposure have been a real challenge for me.

Complex and vulnerable sentence! Great command of language and emotion!

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July 18, 2022

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But, I will, however, overcome all of these, and challenges, step by step.

Try to avoid starting sentences with these words: and, but, then, so, or, also, because
They aren't always wrong, but they usually are not complete sentences, and they are often not accepted in professional writing.

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July 18, 2022

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Let’s start frombegin tomorrow.

Start from scratch, or start from there, or start from here, but not start from tomorrow. You can say, let's start tomorrow.

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July 18, 2022

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I appreciate all your suggestions 😊

What is your intention for this week?

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier.

My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.

Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings hold me back anymore.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

Let’s start from tomorrow.

What is your intention for this week?


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What is your intentioplan for this week? What is your plan for this week?

What is your intentiongoal for this week? What is your goal for this week?

Intention is odd. Use goal instead for common use

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.


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This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks. This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

"tasks" is fine, but I might suggest "to-do list" if that's how your tasks are organized.

This week I am going to continue mykeep job searching and trying to organize my taskgoals. This week I am going to keep job searching and trying to organize my goals.

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks. This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

Alt: Try to figure out what to do (more general and colloquial)

I have been out of order, and I have alter my sleep patterns too.


IMy routine haves been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too. My routine has been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

I have been out ofdoing my tasks in the wrong order, and I have had to alter my sleep patterns, too. I have been doing my tasks in the wrong order, and I have had to alter my sleep patterns, too.

I have been out of order(/disorganized), and I have altered my sleep patterns too. I have been out of order(/disorganized), and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

I have been out of order, and I have altered my sleeping patterns too. I have been out of order, and I have altered my sleeping patterns too.

IMy routine have been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too. My routine have been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

Alt: My routine has been off (sounds a little more natural!)

Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier.


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Starting tomorrow, I am going to get out of bed earlier. Starting tomorrow, I am going to get out of bed earlier.

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Starting tomorrow, I am going towill get out of bed earlier. Starting tomorrow, I will get out of bed earlier.

My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.


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MIn order to complete my tasks, they have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going to let my frustrations take control overf me. In order to complete my tasks, they have to be in order, and I am not going to let my frustrations take control of me.

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My tasks have tomust be in order to get them done, anded or I will not do them. I am not going to let my frustrations take control over mf me anymore. My tasks must be ordered or I will not do them. I am not going to let my frustrations take control of me anymore.

Continuing habit you must use anymore to distinguish.

My tasks have to be in ordered for me to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control overf me. My tasks have to be ordered for me to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control of me.

Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts.


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Since I am unemployed, I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and my thoughts. Since I am unemployed, I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and my thoughts.

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Since I am unBecause of the status of my employedment, I have letallowed my anxiety and my fears to dominate my mind and thoughts. Because of the status of my employment, I have allowed my anxiety and my fears to dominate my mind and thoughts.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too far.


I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch. I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too much.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch. I know that it is completely normal to feel a little down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too much.

Negativity can either go too far or take over too much (not take over too far or go too much)

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch. I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too much.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too far. I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take overgo too far. I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity go too far.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.


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Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remaincontinue following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks. Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will continue following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

"remain following" is never correct Keep following or continue following is fine, but remain following means stay, and stay following is wrong, because stay usually means not moving or not changing.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks. Despite the negative thoughts I have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

Despite the negative thoughts I couldan have, I will remainkeep following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks. Despite the negative thoughts I can have, I will keep following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks. Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will follow my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

I understand you perfectly with remain, but I would omit it.

I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings hold me back anymore.


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I have said before that I felt like something hasd come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore. I have said before that I felt like something had come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore.

I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore. I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.


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My anxiety has cometaken over, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the worldexposure have been a real challenge for me. My anxiety has taken over, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and exposure have been a real challenge for me.

Complex and vulnerable sentence! Great command of language and emotion!

My anxiety has *come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me. My anxiety has *come because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

*I'm not quite sure what you mean here. Maybe "sprung up" "hit me" or "gotten worse"?

My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident when it comes to speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me. My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident when it comes to speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feelcomes from a lack of confidentce speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and beingand exposured to the real world have been a real challenge for me. My anxiety comes from a lack of confidence speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and and exposure to the real world have been a real challenge for me.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.


But, I will overcome all these, and step by step. But, I will overcome all these, step by step.

"And" is not needed and it sounds more natural to omit it.

But, I will, however, overcome all of these, and challenges, step by step. I will, however, overcome all of these challenges, step by step.

Try to avoid starting sentences with these words: and, but, then, so, or, also, because They aren't always wrong, but they usually are not complete sentences, and they are often not accepted in professional writing.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step. But, I will overcome all these step by step.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step. But, I will overcome all these, step by step.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step. But I will overcome all these, step by step.

Let’s start from tomorrow.


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Let’s start frombegin tomorrow. Let’s begin tomorrow.

Start from scratch, or start from there, or start from here, but not start from tomorrow. You can say, let's start tomorrow.

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Let’sI will start from tomorrow. I will start from tomorrow.

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