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Phuocle2000

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Why do I learn writing english?

I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English in my daily job, but my writing skill is not good enough, so it makes me lack productivity.
I am learning English to use it more naturally and quicker. I often have to write emails in English to communicate with overseas partners and make the English report also.
Further more, I also would like to go to study abroad if I can get a scholarship in the future.
Thank you guys for helping me in this journey!

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Why do I learn writing english?


Why do I learn writing ehow to write in English? Why do I learn how to write in English?

MY GUESS: Why doam I learn writing eing (how) to write in English? MY GUESS: Why am I learning (how) to write in English?

ALSO POSSIBLE: Why am I studying English composition?

Why do I learn writing ehow to write English? Why do I learn how to write English?

You could also say, “Why am I learning how to write English?” to sound more natural and conversational.

I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English in my daily job, but my writing skill is not good enough, so it makes me lack productivity.


I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English in my daily job, but my writing skill is not good enough, so it makes me lacklowers my productivity. I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English daily, but my writing skill is not good enough, so it lowers my productivity.

Good grammar! Just changed to sound more natural

I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English in/for my daily job, but my writing skill is not good enough, so it makes me lacks are not adequate, so my productivity falters. I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English in/for my daily job, but my writing skills are not adequate, so my productivity falters.

I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English in my daily job, bdaily. But my writing skill iss are not good enough, so it makes meI lack productivity. I am currently an office worker, and my job requires me to use English daily. But my writing skills are not good enough, so I lack productivity.

This sentence is a run-on sentence, meaning it is way too many independent clauses connected at once. You should separate it into two separate sentences. Also, by removing some unneeded words you sound more natural.

I am learning English to use it more naturally and quicker.


I am learning English and want to use it more naturally and quicker. I am learning English and want to use it more naturally.

Using English quickly is assumed when you say "naturally" since natural English is assumed to be fluent

I am hoping to learning English to use it more naturally and more quickerly. I am hoping to learn English to use it more naturally and more quickly.

I am learning English toso I can use it more naturally and quickerly. I am learning English so I can use it more naturally and quickly.

“to use it…” is correct, but “so I can use it…” sounds more natural.

I often have to write emails in English to communicate with overseas partners and make the English report also.


I often have to write emails and make reports in English to communicate with overseas partners and make the English report also. I often have to write emails and make reports in English to communicate with overseas partners.

I oOften I have to write eEnglish e-mails (in) English to communicate with overseas partners and make thor to make English report alsos. Often I have to write English e-mails (in) to communicate with overseas partners or to make English reports.

I often have to write emails in English to communicate with overseas partners and make the English report alsoI also make reports in English. I often have to write emails in English to communicate with overseas partners and I also make reports in English.

Further more, I also would like to go to study abroad if I can get a scholarship in the future.


Further more, I also would like to go to study abroad if I can get a scholarship in the future. Furthermore, I also would like to study abroad if I can get a scholarship in the future.

Further more, I also would like to go to study abroad if I can get a scholarship in the futureobtain a future scholarship. Furthermore, I also would like to study abroad if I can obtain a future scholarship.

Further more, I also would like to go to study abroad if I can get a scholarship in the future. Furthermore, I would like to study abroad if I can get a scholarship in the future.

Since you already said “furthermore,” saying “also,” is unnecessary and sounds odd. The phrase “…to go to study abroad” sounds wordy and unnatural. It makes more sense to just say, “to study abroad”

Thank you guys for helping me in this journey!


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Thank you guys for helping me in this journey! Thank you guys for helping me in this journey!

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