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alexwong2164

Sept. 15, 2020

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Doraemon Park

I haven’t play mobile games for more than 3 months.


Today I used line to chatting with friends.


While waiting for the reply.


I take a look at the game page and find out this game.


So, I installed the game and start to play.


That is nightmare begin!


This game is so addictive to play.


Once I started I can’t stop playing.


My battery was from 90% down to 9%!


When I return home I charge my mobile phone immediately.


Now, I am not playing this game.


Because I know if I start to play again.


I will never stop.


I will delete the game and you should not play this game too!
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This game is so addictive to play.

I will never stop.

Because I know if I start to play again.


Because I know if I start to play again., Because I know if I start to play again,

I will never stop.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will delete the game and you should not play this game too!


I will delete the game and you should not play this game tooeither! I will delete the game and you should not play this game either!

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Doraemon Park


I haven’t play mobile games for more than 3 months.


I haven’t played mobile games for more than 3 months. I haven’t played mobile games for more than 3 months.

Today I used line to chatting with friends.


Today I used lLine to chatting with friends. Today I used Line to chat with friends.

While waiting for the reply.


While waiting for the reply., While waiting for the reply,

I take a look at the game page and find out this game.


I takeook a look at the game page and find outound this game. I took a look at the game page and found this game.

So, I installed the game and start to play.


So, I installed the game and started to play. So, I installed the game and started to play.

That is nightmare begin!


That iswas the beginning of a nightmare begin! That was the beginning of a nightmare!

This game is so addictive to play.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Once I started I can’t stop playing.


Once I started I can’ouldn't stop playing. Once I started I couldn't stop playing.

My battery was from 90% down to 9%!


My battery was down from 90% down to 9%! My battery was down from 90% to 9%!

When I return home I charge my mobile phone immediately.


When I returned home I charged my mobile phone immediately. When I returned home I charged my mobile phone immediately.

Now, I am not playing this game.


Now, I am not playing this game any more. I am not playing this game any more.

You were technically not wrong, but this way it implies better that you were playing before and then you stopped.

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