What I Get ThroughLearned from My Experience What I Learned from My Experience

Saying "get through" sounds like the experience (having those thoughts for over half a year) is ongoing. Saying "got from" or "learned from" makes it clear that the experience was in the past, and you are talking about how it affects you today. This title is good, but we can maybe improve it by being more specific than experience. A good title explains to the reader what the 作文 is about, but using "experience" doesn't really do that because "experience" can describe basically anything you did. I don't want to speak for you, so I wasn't sure what to change it to, but that is just my suggestion.

What I GetHave Learned Through My Experience What I Have Learned Through My Experience

I doidn’t want to do anything. I didn’t want to do anything.

"I don’t want to do anything." "I don’t want to do anything."

I wanted nothing. I wanted nothing.

"I want nothing." "I want nothing."

"I just want to become like sand and want to be blown away by the wind to disappear from this world." "I just want to become like sand and want to be blown away by the wind to disappear from this world."

Basically what Aidan said, just applied.

I just want to become like sand and I want to be blown away by the wind to disappear from this world. I just want to become like sand and I want to be blown away by the wind to disappear from this world.

These thoughts had controlled my mind for over half a year. These thoughts controlled my mind for over half a year.

I'm finding it hard to explain why, but I don't think I would say "had controlled" here. To me, that sounds like you are explaining something rather than stating a specific fact. Maybe check with someone who knows grammar better, but I think either sounds fine to a native speaker.

These thoughts hadve controlled my mind for over half a year. These thoughts have controlled my mind for over half a year.

Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuffthings that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was getting back myself. Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some things that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was getting back myself.

"stuffs" sounds a little awkward here. The best replacement for a word like 事 is probably "things," but I would probably be more specific (like saying "clothes" or "shoes") or, if you don't want to say what it was, just say "shopping with my mother, and." In other words, the phrase "some things that I'd wanted" says so little that you can just leave it out if you don't want to be more detailed.

Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuffthings that I’'d wanted, and I noticed that I was getting back to myself. or Today, I went shopping with my mother, and I noticed I was getting back to myself. Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some things that I'd wanted, and I noticed that I was getting back to myself. or Today, I went shopping with my mother, and I noticed I was getting back to myself.

I agree with Aidan here. I think that without providing a specific item, it sounds most natural to just say "I went shopping with my mother" Also, I noticed you said: "I noticed I was getting back myself" People often say, "I was getting back "to" myself" But reading the native text I think to better get across what you mean you could say: "I was regaining(or getting back) who I used to be" I know you mean something along those lines, so many someone can help you get it across better.

Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuffs that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was getting back myself back. Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuff that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was getting myself back.

Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuffs that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was gretturning back myto my old self. Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuffs that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was returning to my old self.

Now, I tend to become happy sovery easily because of my hard experiencestruggles in the past. Now, I tend to become happy very easily because of my struggles in the past.

Become = なる. I think this is better because it emphasizes that something changed your ー気 to happiness from something else.

Now, I tend to become happy sovery easily because of my hard experience.the struggles of my past Now, I tend to become happy very easily because of the struggles of my past

I'm just building upon Aidan's correction, which is already great.

Now I tend to be happy so easileasily become happy because of my hard experience. Now I tend to easily become happy because of my hard experience.

Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, and funny storyies with my son—these small things in life feel so bright and lovely to me. Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, and funny stories with my son—these small things in life feel so bright and lovely to me.

There are two ways to fix "funny story," and it looks like someone has suggested each of them. The problem is that "funny story" is singular which means that it needs the article "a" before it. However, because all the other items are plural, I suggest we make "funny story" plural by changing it to "funny stories" instead. This makes all the items in the list plural, which is called "parallel structure" and tends to make writing sound stronger. The other thing is that this isn't a complete sentence, because it is just a list of nouns. There is no verb. There are many ways to fix this, but in this case, I suggest joining it to the next sentence with a dash like this, I think "feel" or "seem" sounds better to emphasize the emotional connection they have to you. But there is nothing at all wrong with what you had either!

Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, and funny(or silly) storyies with my son-these small things are so bright and lovely to me. Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, and funny(or silly) stories with my son-these small things are so bright and lovely to me.

"Silly stories" sounds a it more natural than "funny stories" to me. Possibly because "silly" is a word often used when speaking of children or in regard to children.

Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, a funny story with my son. Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, a funny story with my son.

Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, funny story with my son...these small things are so bright and lovely to me. Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, funny story with my son...these small things are so bright and lovely to me.

In my experience lists are usually not their own sentences in English.

These small things are so bright and lovely to me.

These small things are so bright and lovely to me.

Still, there are not good days in our lives, but I’ll keep on noticing goodwill be difficult days in life, but I’ll keep on looking on the bright sides. Still, there will be difficult days in life, but I’ll keep on looking on the bright side.

I think the word difficult fits best here, although it is maybe a little closer in meaning to 大変 then 良くない. In general, it seems like using the negative form of adjectives is not as common in English. A more literal translation would be "unpleasant days." "will be" is better because it emphasizes that we are talking about the future here. "Bright" literally means 明朗, but we usually use it in this expression instead of "good." Another word you could try is "silver lining," which means the good that comes with something bad. There's nothing wrong with saying "noticed," but it just feels a little weird to me. It just sounds like the bright side is hidden and you happen to come across it, whereas "looking on" is more commonly used with this phrase and emphasizes that you are making an effort to seek out positive, pleasant experiences in life and keep them in mind.

StWhille there are not goodstill difficult days within our lives, but I’I'll keep on noticing good sideappreciating the positive aspects. While there are still difficult days within our lives, I'll keep on appreciating the positive aspects.

I think Aidan's correction was already perfect and very detailed here. But just so as to give more examples of ways you could say this I've given an okay example. One thing though, it seems notice in this sentence is used similar to "appreciate", so does "appreciate" still work with what you meant?

Still there are not good days in our lives that aren't good, but I’ll keep on noticing the good sides. Still there are days in our lives that aren't good, but I’ll keep on noticing the good.