My dad bought me 2 comic books, from the "cCase cClosed" series, when we went to the book shop yesterday. My dad bought me 2 comic books, from the "Case Closed" series, when we went to the book shop yesterday.

Titles should be capitalised

This series is one of my favourite mysteriesy comic books. This series is one of my favourite mystery comic books.

The genre is just called "mystery", no need to pluralise it here. Examples - I love mystery novels (talking about the genre) vs I only read books with mysteries (talking about the mysteries themselves)

And it is really famouse in Japan. And it is really famous in Japan.

According to my friend who is from China, it is also famouse in Chaina and everyone loves it. According to my friend who is from China, it is also famous in China and everyone loves it.

However, I am looking forward to going, because the country that I am going to go, is to is the Netherlands. However, I am looking forward to going, because the country that I am going to go to is the Netherlands.

The Netherlands is one of only a few countries which have "the" in their name. The other ones include the United Kingdom (the UK), the United States (the US), the United Arab Emirates (the UAE), the Gambia, and most island nations like the Solomon Islands, the Bahamas, the Phillipines, etc.

And I and my dad and I love apple pie, and I want to know more about Anne Frank more. And my dad and I love apple pie, and I want to know more about Anne Frank.

OR: me and my dad

So, I may can'tnot be able to write my dialry entry from tomorrow. So, I may not be able to write my diary entry from tomorrow.

I've been stopped at security before because I forgot to take the compass from my bag, so, I'll be careful this time too. I've been stopped at security before because I forgot to take the compass from my bag, so I'll be careful this time too.

I am going to read the comic books that my dad bought me yesterday on the plaine. I am going to read the comic books that my dad bought me yesterday on the plane.