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Book Review: Okakura Tenshin (1862–1913)

Nara and Kyoto were once the capitals of Japan and are places rich in history. They are home to many shrines and temples, where valuable cultural treasures such as Buddhist statues were preserved. Even today, these important cultural properties are carefully protected.

However, in the early Meiji period, a belief spread that “the West is superior to everything.” As a result, there was a movement to destroy Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts. Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心1862-1913)worked hard to protect Japanese artworks. Fenollosa himself was deeply moved by the beauty of Japanese art and devoted himself to preserving its cultural heritage.

In order to share the beauty of Japanese culture with the world, Okakura Tenshin wrote The Book of Tea, through which he introduced Japanese aesthetics to an international audience. He dedicated his life to protecting Japan’s cultural treasures.

By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)? You may not know him, but European painters such as Vincent van Gogh and Claude Monet were fascinated by his woodblock prints, which greatly influenced their art. As a side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy. (Laughs)

When I learned that such a great artist was not a perfect person, I felt a sense of closeness to him. I believe that the idea that “the West is always the best” is mistaken.

Reference: 世界を変えた人たち365→The 365 People Who Changed the World 365 (by Nobumoto Tajima, Nagaoka Publishing)
This book includes furigana (phonetic readings) written above all the kanji characters, so intermediate to advanced learners of Japanese may be able to read it on their own.

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Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心1862-1913)worked hard to protect Japanese artworks.

Fenollosa himself was deeply moved by the beauty of Japanese art and devoted himself to preserving its cultural heritage.

In order to share the beauty of Japanese culture with the world, Okakura Tenshin wrote The Book of Tea, through which he introduced Japanese aesthetics to an international audience.

He dedicated his life to protecting Japan’s cultural treasures.

By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)?

You may not know him, but European painters such as Vincent van Gogh and Claude Monet were fascinated by his woodblock prints, which greatly influenced their art.

As a side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy.

I believe that the idea that “the West is always the best” is mistaken.

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Book Review: Okakura Tenshin (1862–1913)

Nara and Kyoto were once the capitals of Japan and are places rich in history.

They are home to many shrines and temples, where valuable cultural treasures such as Buddhist statues were preserved.

Even today, these important cultural properties are carefully protected.

As a result, there was a movement to destroy Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts.

Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心1862-1913)worked hard to protect Japanese artworks.

Fenollosa himself was deeply moved by the beauty of Japanese art and devoted himself to preserving its cultural heritage.

In order to share the beauty of Japanese culture with the world, Okakura Tenshin wrote The Book of Tea, through which he introduced Japanese aesthetics to an international audience.

He dedicated his life to protecting Japan’s cultural treasures.

You may not know him, but European painters such as Vincent van Gogh and Claude Monet were fascinated by his woodblock prints, which greatly influenced their art.

When I learned that such a great artist was not a perfect person, I felt a sense of closeness to him.

Reference:

This book includes furigana (phonetic readings) written above all the kanji characters, so intermediate to advanced learners of Japanese may be able to read it on their own.

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Book Review: Okakura Tenshin (1862–1913)

Nara and Kyoto were once the capitals of Japan and are places rich in history.

They are home to many shrines and temples, where valuable cultural treasures such as Buddhist statues were preserved.

Even today, these important cultural properties are carefully protected.

However, in the early Meiji period, a belief spread that “the West is superior to everything.”

Fenollosa himself was deeply moved by the beauty of Japanese art and devoted himself to preserving its cultural heritage.

In order to share the beauty of Japanese culture with the world, Okakura Tenshin wrote The Book of Tea, through which he introduced Japanese aesthetics to an international audience.

He dedicated his life to protecting Japan’s cultural treasures.

You may not know him, but European painters such as Vincent van Gogh and Claude Monet were fascinated by his woodblock prints, which greatly influenced their art.

As a side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy.

When I learned that such a great artist was not a perfect person, I felt a sense of closeness to him.

I believe that the idea that “the West is always the best” is mistaken.

Reference:

世界を変えた人たち

365→The 365 People Who Changed the World 365 (by Nobumoto Tajima, Nagaoka Publishing)

This book includes furigana (phonetic readings) written above all the kanji characters, so intermediate to advanced learners of Japanese may be able to read it on their own.

https://www.amazon.co.jp/%E4%B8%96%E7%95%8C%E3%82%92%E5%A4%89%E3%81%88%E3%81%9F%E4%BA%BA%E3%81%9F%E3%81%A1365-%E7%94%B0%E5%B3%B6-%E4%BF%A1%E5%85%83/dp/4522431740/ref=sr_1_1?__mk_ja_JP=%E3%82%AB%E3%82%BF%E3%82%AB%E3%83%8A&crid=190BT2XK3JKMD&dib=eyJ2IjoiMSJ9.gOc4YfuuQrxkFiFpI68NhqieOvXse8-XZe09fvXzPXtnDj_Wf5r3YqCGPQI1vxiDxwSh2ix1PpXe-9BTPssOdudVxSSMPIgC0MNgNE_Fvrs.NZYwjqM_ARoa1Ij5iHd1U3dcQjUPI-JDhPCQj1esUSs&dib_tag=se&keywords=%E4%B8%96%E7%95%8C%E3%82%92%E5%A4%89%E3%81%88%E3%81%9F%E4%BA%BA%E3%81%9F%E3%81%A1365&qid=1775481083&sprefix=%E4%B8%96%E7%95%8C%E3%82%92%E5%A4%89%E3%81%88%E3%81%9F%E4%BA%BA%E3%81%9F%E3%81%A1365%2Caps%2C204&sr=8-1

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Book Review: Okakura Tenshin (1862–1913)

Nara and Kyoto were once the capitals of Japan and are places rich in history.

They are home to many shrines and temples, where valuable cultural treasures such as Buddhist statues were preserved.

Even today, these important cultural properties are carefully protected.

However, in the early Meiji period, a belief spread that “the West is superior to everything.”

As a result, there was a movement to destroy Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts.

Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心1862-1913)worked hard to protect Japanese artworks.

Fenollosa himself was deeply moved by the beauty of Japanese art and devoted himself to preserving its cultural heritage.

In order to share the beauty of Japanese culture with the world, Okakura Tenshin wrote The Book of Tea, through which he introduced Japanese aesthetics to an international audience.

He dedicated his life to protecting Japan’s cultural treasures.

By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)?

You may not know him, but European painters such as Vincent van Gogh and Claude Monet were fascinated by his woodblock prints, which greatly influenced their art.

When I learned that such a great artist was not a perfect person, I felt a sense of closeness to him.

I believe that the idea that “the West is always the best” is mistaken.

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Book Review: Okakura Tenshin (1862–1913)


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They are home to many shrines and temples, where valuable cultural treasures such as Buddhist statues were preserved.


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TheyANOTHER OPTION: Those cities are home to many shrines and temples, wherehousing valuable cultural treasures such as Buddhist statues weare preserved. ANOTHER OPTION: Those cities are home to many shrines and temples, housing valuable cultural treasures such as Buddhist statues are preserved.

Even today, these important cultural properties are carefully protected.


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Even today, many of these important cultural properties are carefully protected. Even today, many of these important cultural properties are carefully protected.

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However, in the early Meiji period, a belief spread that “the West is superior to everythingin all respects.” However, in the early Meiji period, a belief spread that “the West is superior in all respects.”

The original sentence is correct, this is just another way to phrase it.

However, in the early Meiji period, a belief spread there was a widespread belief that the West is was "superior" to everything Japanese. However, in the early Meiji period there was a widespread belief that the West was "superior" to everything Japanese.

As a result, there was a movement to destroy Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts.


As a result, there was a movement to destroy Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts. As a result, there was a movement to destroy Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts.

Definitely a shame. I study Old English at university, and after the Protestant Reformation in England, there was a period where people destroyed all sorts of thousand-year-old sculptures, just because they were told that churches should look plain. Ideas can be dangerous things.

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APartly as a result, there was a movement to destro of this, many Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts were destroyed. Partly as a result of this, many Buddhist statues and other traditional artifacts were destroyed.

LOGIC: There was likely multiple reasons that Buddhist statues and artifacts lost their appeal in the early Meiji era.

Fenollosa himself was deeply moved by the beauty of Japanese art and devoted himself to preserving its cultural heritage.


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In order to share the beauty of Japanese culture with the world, Okakura Tenshin wrote The Book of Tea, through which he introduced Japanese aesthetics to an international audience.


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He dedicated his life to protecting Japan’s cultural treasures.


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When I learned that such a great artist was not a perfect person, I felt a sense of closeness to him.


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LOGIC: Some great artists were women, and some had other gendered identities . . . .

Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心1862-1913)worked hard to protect Japanese artworks.


Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心1862-1913) worked hard to protect Japanese artworks. Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心1862-1913) worked hard to protect Japanese artworks.

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By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)?


By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)? By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)?

Yes! Most people in the West have, though they know him as just "Hokusai". And even if they don't know his name, they've definitely seen The Great Wave off Kanagawa before. It's a very famous artwork.

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By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)? By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (葛飾北斎 1760–1849)?

Yes I have!

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You may not know him, but European painters such as Vincent van Gogh and Claude Monet were fascinated by his woodblock prints, which greatly influenced their art.


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As a side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy.


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As a side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy. As a side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy

As a humorous side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy.! As a humorous side note, Hokusai was so absorbed in his work and disliked cleaning so much that he reportedly moved dozens of times whenever his room became too messy!

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(Laughs)

We usually wouldn't express laughter in this way. In a fairly formal piece like this, we wouldn't express laughter at all. If you really wanted, you could maybe say "Isn't that funny?", or something along those lines, but I personally wouldn't recommend that. In more informal pieces, you could use internet slang like 'lol', 'lmao', 'XD', etc. or just write "haha".

(Laughs)! !

Since the tone of this piece is a bit on the formal side, you could maybe use an exclamation mark (!) instead of a period in order to more subtly express amusement. "(Laughs)" in English makes it sound like this text is a transcription of someone speaking, e.g. a transcribed interview.

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Generally we don't use "(Laughs)" except for transcribing speech. The other user corrections work, above is another way to communicate the humor of the previous sentence.

I believe that the idea that “the West is always the best” is mistaken.


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I believe that the idea that “the West is always the bestbetter” is mistaken. I believe that the idea that “the West is always better” is mistaken.

The original sentence is correct, this is just another way to phrase it.

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世界を変えた人たち


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365→The 365 People Who Changed the World 365 (by Nobumoto Tajima, Nagaoka Publishing)


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365→The 365 People Who Changed the World 365 (by Nobumoto Tajima, Nagaoka Publishing) 365→The 365 People Who Changed the World 365 (Nobumoto Tajima, Nagaoka Publishing)

This book includes furigana (phonetic readings) written above all the kanji characters, so intermediate to advanced learners of Japanese may be able to read it on their own.


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Ernest Fenollosa, an American scholar, and his student Okakura Tenshin (岡倉天心)worked hard to protect Japanese artworks.


By the way, have you heard of Katsushika Hokusai (1760–1849)?


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