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How to improve expressive skills

Those days I have taking several interviews to find a job in 2024. But it did not goes well. I summarized the list of reasons why I have failed in those interviews.
Firstly, I have a bad communication skill. I could not get my content well organized. They are mix together, that makes my audiences feel difficult to understand from a mass.
Secondly, I haven’t arrange my past work well. So, when asked my job experience, my performance was a disaster.
I must change, or I may lost my job and have no pay at 2024.
To the first problem, I determine to slow down my talking speed, that would help me to buy some time to get content organized. And I should do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, maybe I should take some writing classes. Do you have any other ideas on this question?
To the second problem, maybe I should do some summarize!

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I could not get my content well organized.

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How to improve expressive skills

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How to improve expressive skills

I could not get my content well organized.

How to improve expressive skills


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Those days I have taking several interviews to find a job in 2024.


Thoese days I have takbeen having several interviews to find a job in 2024. These days I have been having several interviews to find a job in 2024.

Those days I haveI am takingen several interviews to find afor jobs in 2024. I am taken several interviews for jobs in 2024.

"Those days" is for days long gone. "These days" is for the now. Ultimately, it was hard to tell if you have upcoming interviews so I opted to cut the phrase entirely. "Find a job" is typically reserved for the pre-interview job search which includes activities like reading job listings and contacting industry friends. By the time you're interviewing, you've already "found" the job, you just need to secure it.

ThoseIn the past few days, I have takingen several interviews to find a job infor 2024. In the past few days, I have taken several interviews to find a job for 2024.

Thoese days, I have been taking severalmany interviews to find a job in 2024. These days, I have been taking many interviews to find a job in 2024.

Those odays I have takingdid several interviews to, so I can find a job in 2024. Today I did several interviews, so I can find a job in 2024.

did/have is often used more than taken for interviews.

But it did not goes well.


But it didis not goesing well. But it is not going well.

But it did not goes well. But it did not go well.

But it didIt has not gones well. It has not gone well.

But ithey did not goes well. But they did not go well.

But ithey did non't goes well. But they didn't go well.

Be careful with tense, it's unclear whether you're speaking in present tense, or if all the events have already occurred.

I summarized the list of reasons why I have failed in those interviews.


I'll summarized the list of reasons why I have failed in thoese interviews. I'll summarize the list of reasons why I have failed in these interviews.

I summarized the list of reasons why I have failed in those interviews. I summarized the list of reasons why I have failed those interviews.

I've summarized the list of reasons why I have failed in those interviews. I've summarized the list of reasons why I failed in those interviews.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skill.


Firstly, I have a bad communication skills. Firstly, I have bad communication skills.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills. Firstly, I have bad communication skills.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills. Firstly, I have bad communication skills.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills. Firstly, I have bad communication skills.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills. Firstly, I have bad communication skills.

"skills" more commonly used than "a skill"

I could not get my content well organized.


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I could noan't get my content well organized. I can't get my content well organized.

Once again, unclear if this is present tense, or if you're talking about a specific event in the past. If past tense, "Firstly, I have bad communication skills. I could not get my content well organized in the interview."

They are mix together, that makes my audiences feel difficult to understand from a mass.


They are mixed together, thatwhich makes my audiences feel have difficult toies understand from a massing the gist of what I want to say. They are mixed together, which makes my audience have difficulties understanding the gist of what I want to say.

TheyVarious parts are mixed together, that makes my audiences feelind it difficult to understand from a massthem as a whole. Various parts are mixed together, that makes my audiences find it difficult to understand them as a whole.

"Difficult" isn't a feeling, but "find it" has maybe that sort of meaning in a sense.

They areMy content was mixed together, that makes my audiences feelwhich made it difficult to understand from a massor my audience. My content was mixed together, which made it difficult to understand for my audience.

I might suggest using "disorganized" rather than "mixed together". "Mixed together" doesn't always imply something being difficult to understand.

They are mixed together, thatand this makess my audiences feel difficultakes it difficult for my audience to understand from a mass. They are mixed together, and this mass makes it difficult for my audience to understand.

They aAll my talking points were mixed together, thatwhich makes my audiences feel difficultit difficult for my audience to understand from a mass. All my talking points were mixed together, which makes it difficult for my audience to understand.

What is "they"? Content is usually not referred to as "they"

Secondly, I haven’t arrange my past work well.


Secondly, I haven’t arrange my past work experience well. Secondly, I haven’t arrange my past work experience well.

Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well. Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well.

Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well. Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well.

Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well. Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well.

So, when asked my job experience, my performance was a disaster.


So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster. So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster. So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

When "asked" takes a direct object, it's a person, like in "Tom asked Marry." Thus we need a preposition like "about" to describe the topic of the question.

So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster. So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

So, when askedthey asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster. So, when they asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

So, when askedI was asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster. So, when I was asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

I must change, or I may lost my job and have no pay at 2024.


I must change, or I may lost mynot get a job and have no pay atin 2024. I must change, or I may not get a job and have no pay in 2024.

I must change, or I may loste my job and have no pay at all in 2024. I must change, or I may lose my job and have no pay at all in 2024.

I must change, or I may lost mynot get a job and have no pay atin 2024. I must change, or I may not get a job and have no pay in 2024.

I must change, or I may loste my job and have no pay atin 2024. I must change, or I may lose my job and have no pay in 2024.

I must changneed to improve, or I may loste my job and have no pay atin 2024. I need to improve, or I may lose my job and have no pay in 2024.

"must change" is very strong, and a bit vague.

To the first problem, I determine to slow down my talking speed, that would help me to buy some time to get content organized.


ToFor the first problem, I am determined to slow down my talking speed, thatwhich would help me (to) buy some time to get the content organized. For the first problem, I am determined to slow down my talking speed, which would help me (to) buy some time to get the content organized.

To the first problem, I determine tomust slow down my talking speed, that would help me to buy some time to get my content organized. To the first problem, I must slow down my talking speed, that would help me to buy some time to get my content organized.

To the first problem, I determined tohat I should slow down my talking speed, thatwhich would help me to buy some time to get my content organized. To the first problem, I determined that I should slow down my talking speed, which would help me buy some time to get my content organized.

To address the first problem, I determine towill slow down my talking speed, that wouldo help me to buy some time to get content organized. To address the first problem, I will slow down my talking speed to help me buy some time to get content organized.

ToFor the first problem, I determine towill slow down my talking speed,; that would help me to buy some time to get content organizedill give me time to organize my content. For the first problem, I will slow down my talking speed; that will give me time to organize my content.

"determine" is rarely used in first-person present tense. Semicolon to combine two linked sentences. Second half is quite long, can be shortened.

And I should do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, maybe I should take some writing classes.


And I should do some deliberate practice on logistic, as. At the same time, maybe I should take some writing classes. And I should do some deliberate practice on logistics. At the same time, maybe I should take some writing classes.

And I should do some deliberate practice on logistic(?), at the same time, maybe I should take some writing classes. And I should do some deliberate practice on logistic(?), at the same time, maybe I should take some writing classes.

"logistic" seems wrong, but I'm not sure what you're trying to say.

And I should also do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, ms. Maybe I should take some writing classes at the same time. I should also do some deliberate practice on logistics. Maybe I should take some writing classes at the same time.

Andt the same time, I should do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, maybe I shoulds, maybe even take some writing classes. At the same time, I should do some deliberate practice on logistics, maybe even take some writing classes.

Andlso, I should do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, maybegrammar practice. Perhaps I should take some writing classes. Also, I should do some deliberate grammar practice. Perhaps I should take some writing classes.

what was meant by "logistic", doesn't make sense in the context of the sentence. The whole phrase is cleaner as two sentences.

Do you have any other ideas on this question?


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Do you have any other ideas on this questionproblem? Do you have any other ideas on this problem?

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To the second problem, maybe I should do some summarize!


ToFor the second problem, maybe I should do some summarizes! For the second problem, maybe I should do some summaries!

To the second problem, maybe I should do some summarizeation! To the second problem, maybe I should do some summarization!

To the second problem, maybe I should do some summarizes! To the second problem, maybe I should do some summaries!

ToFor the second problem, maybe I should do some summarize!summarise my content! For the second problem, maybe I should summarise my content!

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