July 11, 2022
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My grandfather was recruited by Russian Army just before outbreak of World War II. He attended 3 months of military training prior to be sent to the frontline. He was as good soldier as professional military officer was. However, he was fallen into the trap by the Germany Army in Poland. My grandfather learnt Germany that way throughout the captivity of 8 months.
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My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II. My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II.
He attendedunderwent 3 months of military training prior to being sent to the frontline.
He underwent 3 months of military training prior to being sent to the frontline.
"Attended" isn't incorrect, but "underwent" fits better.
He was as good a soldier as any professional military officer was.
He was as good a soldier as any professional military officer.
However, he was fallenfell into thea trap set by the Germany Army in Poland.
However, he fell into a trap set by the German Army in Poland.
My grandfather learnt Germany that way throughout the captivity of 8 monthshis 8 months of captivity.
My grandfather learnt German that way throughout his 8 months of captivity.
"Learnt" can also be spelled "learned". "Learned" is used in the US and Canada, and "learnt" is more common in other English-speaking countries.
My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II. My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II.
He attendedundertook 3 months of military training prior to being sent to the frontline.
He undertook 3 months of military training prior to being sent to the frontline.
"Attended" isn't incorrect, but it is a bit passive. You could say "took part in", or "undertook" for something a bit more active like a training.
He was as good a soldier as any professional military officer was.
He was as good a soldier as any professional military officer.
However, he was fallenfell into thea trap laid by the Germany Army in Poland.
However, he fell into a trap laid by the German Army in Poland.
"Germany" is the country while "German" is the descriptor for a person/group of people/or language.
My grandfather learnted Germany that way throughout the while being held in captivity ofor 8 months.
My grandfather learned German while being held in captivity for 8 months.
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My grandfather was recruited by Russian Army just before outbreak of World War II. My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II. My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II. My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II. My grandfather was recruited by the Russian Army just before the outbreak of World War II. |
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He attended 3 months of military training prior to be sent to the frontline.
He "Attended" isn't incorrect, but it is a bit passive. You could say "took part in", or "undertook" for something a bit more active like a training.
He "Attended" isn't incorrect, but "underwent" fits better. |
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He was as good soldier as professional military officer was.
He was as good a soldier as any professional military officer
He was as good a soldier as any professional military officer |
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However, he was fallen into the trap by the Germany Army in Poland.
However, he "Germany" is the country while "German" is the descriptor for a person/group of people/or language.
However, he |
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My grandfather learnt Germany that way throughout the captivity of 8 months.
My grandfather learn
My grandfather learnt German "Learnt" can also be spelled "learned". "Learned" is used in the US and Canada, and "learnt" is more common in other English-speaking countries. |
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