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alexwong2164

Dec. 15, 2020

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Digital Clock

I have a digital clock next to my bed.

It has a function when the room gets dark the back light will turns on.

Therefore even the room is dark I can still see the time.

The back light isn’t strong but still make the room become little brighter.

I was annoyed by that.

After almost three months when I change the battery, I notice there is a switch at top side can turn off that function. (Stupid!)

I was happy the back light is off and the room is dark.

Another three months I change the battery again.

But this time I forgot not to turn off the back light.

Surprisingly, now I am happy the back light is on.

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Digital Clock

I have a digital clock next to my bed.

Digital Clock


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I have a digital clock next to my bed.


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It has a function when the room gets dark the back light will turns on.


It has a function where, when the room gets dark, the back light will turns on. It has a function where, when the room gets dark, the back light will turn on.

Therefore even the room is dark I can still see the time.


Therefore even when the room is dark, I can still see the time. Therefore even when the room is dark, I can still see the time.

The back light isn’t strong but still make the room become little brighter.


The back light isn’t strong, but it still makes the room becomea little brighter. The back light isn’t strong, but it still makes the room a little brighter.

I was annoyed by that.


After almost three months when I change the battery, I notice there is a switch at top side can turn off that function.


After almost three months, when I changed the battery, I notice there is a switch aton the top sidethat can turn off that function. After almost three months, when I changed the battery, I notice a switch on the top that can turn off that function.

(Stupid! )


(Stupid! ) (Stupid!)

This doesn't really make sense in this context. Maybe write, "I thought it was stupid of me never to have noticed that."

I was happy the back light is off and the room is dark.


I was happy the back light iwas off and the room iwas dark. I was happy the back light was off and the room was dark.

Another three months I change the battery again.


After another three months, I changed the battery again. After another three months, I changed the battery again.

But this time I forgot not to turn off the back light.


But this time, I forgot not to turn off the back light. But this time, I forgot not to turn off the back light.

Surprisingly, now I am happy the back light is on.


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