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022701 - An Emergency

Yesterday I reviewed my writing these days and did not write new journals. Today I opened this web joyfully and clicked the button "write" . Suddenly, an alarm message popped. I was shocked, soon I calmed down and found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correcting rate of 50%. I was relieved.

The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, such as yesterday, that no recent article was recommended to me. Happily, today I got three new ones to correct. I secretly hope Chinese learners write more haha. Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication.

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022701 - An Emergency

I was relieved.

Happily, today I got three new ones to correct.

I secretly hope Chinese learners write more haha.

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022701 - An Emergency

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Yesterday, I reviewed my writing these days and did not write. Lately, I haven't written any new journal entries.

let me know if this is what you mean

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022701 - An Emergency


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Yesterday I reviewed my writing these days and did not write new journals.


Yesterday, I reviewed my writing these days and did not write. Lately, I haven't written any new journal entries. Yesterday, I reviewed my writing. Lately, I haven't written any new journal entries.

let me know if this is what you mean

Yesterday I reviewed my writing these days andrecent journal entries, but I did not write new journalany new entries. Yesterday I reviewed my recent journal entries, but I did not write any new entries.

Yesterday I reviewed my recent writing these days and did not write new journals. Yesterday I reviewed my recent writing and did not write new journals.

This sounds a bit more natural.

Today I opened this web joyfully and clicked the button "write" .


Today, I opened this web joyfulsite excitedly and clicked the button "write" . Today, I opened this website excitedly and clicked the button "write" .

Today, I opened this website and joyfully and clicked the button "write" . Today, I opened this website and joyfully clicked the button "write" .

Today I opened this website joyfully and clicked the button "write" button. Today I opened this website joyfully and clicked the "write" button.

Wording, word order.

Suddenly, an alarm message popped.


Suddenly, an alarm message popped up. Suddenly, an alarm message popped up.

popped up (phrasal verb - to appear)

Suddenly, an alarmert message popped up. Suddenly, an alert message popped up.

Suddenly, an alarm message popped up. Suddenly, an alarm message popped up.

I was shocked, soon I calmed down and found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correcting rate of 50%.


I was shocked, s. Soon I calmed down and. I found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correcting rate of 50%. I was shocked. Soon I calmed down. I found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correcting rate of 50%.

I was shocked, soobut then I calmed down and founwhen I realized it was remindeding me to correct more journals to maintain my correctiong rate of 50%. I was shocked, but then I calmed down when I realized it was reminding me to correct more journals to maintain my correction rate of 50%.

I was shocked, but soon I calmed down and found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correctiong rate of 50%. I was shocked, but soon I calmed down and found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correction rate of 50%.

I was relieved.


I wasWhat a relieved.f! What a relief!

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The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, such as yesterday, that no recent article was recommended to me.


The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, s. Such as yesterday, that no recent articles wasere recommended to me. The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals. Such as yesterday, no recent articles were recommended to me.

The only problem is that there are usually very few new Chinese journals, such as entries. For example, yesterday, that no recent article was recommended to meere were no new entries recommended for correction. The only problem is that there are usually very few new Chinese journal entries. For example, yesterday there were no new entries recommended for correction.

The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, such as yesterday, thatwhen no recent article was recommended to me. The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, such as yesterday, when no recent article was recommended to me.

Happily, today I got three new ones to correct.


HappLuckily, today I got three new ones to correct. Luckily, today I got three new ones to correct.

HappiFortunately, today I gotthere were three new ones to correct. Fortunately, today there were three new ones to correct.

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I secretly hope Chinese learners write more haha.


I secretly hope the Chinese learners write more, haha. I secretly hope the Chinese learners write more, haha.

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Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication.


Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and i. It is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication. Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history. It is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication.

Today I fixcorrected an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication. It was an great experience to read about other people's perspectives. Today I corrected an article about "Paper Bag Test" and learned more about racism in American history. It was an great experience to read about other people's perspectives.

Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it i. It was an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives bythrough communication. Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history. It was an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives through communication.

I would break this sentence into two for improved readability.

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