Dec. 4, 2020
The days passed that my first journal, sorry for it. Now, in Houston, the weather is very cold, the next week I will have the last exams of my course of English., after it, I need to continue practicing to improve my English every day. Houston is a very big city, but I couldn't see a lot of it because if you don't have a car to move in this city is not easy. I hope to visit the Zoo and another museum. I would like to go to the stadium to enjoy the match of the different sport (baseball, soccer or Basket) but, now is not possible because is the pandemic time. I hope to do this experience early.
Thank you so much,
I see you soon in my next journal :-)
My second Journal
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A few days have passed since my first journal, sorry about that.
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Now in Houston the weather is very cold. Next week I will have the last exams of my English course, and after that I need to continue practicing to improve my English every day.
Houston is a very big city, but I couldn't see a lot of it because if you don't have a car to move around in this city, it is not easy. Houston is a very big city, but I couldn't see a lot of it because if you don't have a car to move around in this city, it is not easy.
I hope to visit the Zoo and anotherone museum.
I hope to visit the Zoo and one museum.
I would like to go to the stadium to enjoy the match of the different sportsome sports matches (baseball, soccer or Bbasketball) but, now it's not possible because isof the pandemic time.
I would like to go to the stadium to enjoy some sports matches (baseball, soccer or basketball) but now it's not possible because of the pandemic.
I hope to do this experience earlyI can do it soon.
I hope I can do it soon.
Thank you so much,
I sSee you soon in my next journal. :-)
See you soon in my next journal. :-)
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Good work! Mostly I corrected the styling errors in order to make it sound a bit more natural (more like something a native speaker would say). You have good grammar and vocabulary, keep it up! :)
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The days passed that my first journal, sorry for it.
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Now, in Houston, the weather is very cold, the next week I will have the last exams of my course of English., after it, I need to continue practicing to improve my English every day.
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Houston is a very big city, but I couldn't see a lot of it because if you don't have a car to move in this city is not easy. Houston is a very big city, but I couldn't see a lot of it because if you don't have a car to move around in this city, it is not easy. Houston is a very big city, but I couldn't see a lot of it because if you don't have a car to move around in this city, it is not easy. |
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I hope to visit the Zoo and another museum.
I hope to visit the Zoo and |
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I would like to go to the stadium to enjoy the match of the different sport (baseball, soccer or Basket) but, now is not possible because is the pandemic time.
I would like to go to the stadium to enjoy |
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I hope to do this experience early.
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