Mike is a cook at this restaurant,h. He is a tall amn,hman. He likes to makes c fookd for hungry customers. Mike is a cook at this restaurant. He is a tall man. He likes to make food for hungry customers.

Mike is a cook at this restaurant,h. He is a tall amn,man, and he likes makes cing fookd for hungry customers. Mike is a cook at this restaurant. He is a tall man, and he likes making food for hungry customers.

Mike is a cook at this restaurant, he is a tall aman, he likes makes cooking for hungry customers. Mike is a cook at this restaurant, he is a tall man, he likes cooking for hungry customers.

Just a typo :-)

The customers come from different countries，they're. They speak many different languages. The customers come from different countries. They speak many different languages.

counties = 县 countries = 国家

The customers come from different countries，they're. They speak many different languages. The customers come from different countries. They speak many different languages.

The customers come from different countries，, they're speak many different languages. The customers come from different countries, they speak many different languages.

A county(from the "counties") is also a thing! But I thought you meant to say that customers from other countries- like Germany, Italy etc. come to his resturant.

He can meet many fridendly people. He can meet many friendly people.

He can meet many fridendly people. He can meet many friendly people.

He can meet many fridendly people. He can meet many friendly people.

Just a typo :-)

This customer likes cake, this customer likes chinck,en, and this customer likes beef. This customer likes cake, this customer likes chicken, and this customer likes beef.

This customer likes cake, this customer likes chinck,en, this customer likes beef. This customer likes cake, this customer likes chicken, this customer likes beef.

This customer likes cake, this customer likes chinck,en, this customer likes beef. This customer likes cake, this customer likes chicken, this customer likes beef.

Just a typo :-)

Mike makes many kinds of food for the customers. Mike makes many kinds of food for the customers.

Mike makes manylots of food for the customers. Mike makes lots of food for the customers.

Mike makes manya lot of food for the customers. Mike makes a lot of food for the customers.

"A lot of" is better than "many" here :)

They customers are happy when mMike makes delicious food. The customers are happy when Mike makes delicious food.

They customers are happy when mMike makes delicious food. They customers are happy when Mike makes delicious food.

They customers are happy when mMike makes delicious food. The customers are happy when Mike makes delicious food.

Just a typo :-)

Mike gets up at 6 am every day,h. He drives his car to work,. Mike likes his job, because Mike can meet many friendly people. Mike gets up at 6 am every day. He drives his car to work. Mike likes his job, because Mike can meet many friendly people.

Mike gets up at 6 am everyday,he and drives his car to work,. Mike likes his job, because Mikhe can meet many friendly people. Mike gets up at 6 am everyday and drives his car to work. Mike likes his job, because he can meet many friendly people.

Mike gets up at 6 amAM everyday, he drives his car to work, Mike likes his job, because Mike can meet manya lot of friendly people. Mike gets up at 6 AM everyday, he drives his car to work, Mike likes his job, because Mike can meet a lot of friendly people.

Heis work starts at 7 am, and work endends at 4 pm. His work starts at 7 am and ends at 4 pm.

He work starts work at 7 am, and ends work endat 4 pm. He starts work at 7 am, and ends work at 4 pm.

Heis work starts 7 am,andat 7 AM, and his work ends at 4 pmAM. His work starts at 7 AM, and his work ends at 4 AM.

You should use "at" before you say X AM/PM(example: at 8 PM, at 2 AM).

Mike makes hot food on the stove, and he has cold food of bowl with the—bowls of cereal. Mike makes hot food on the stove and he has cold food—bowls of cereal.

Mike makes hot food on the stove, and he has a cold food of bowl with thebowl of cereal. Mike makes hot food on the stove, and he has a cold bowl of cereal.

Mike makes hot food on the stove,h. He has cold food of bowl with the cereaereal, a cold food, in a bowl. Mike makes hot food on the stove. He has cereal, a cold food, in a bowl.

I was not sure what this part meant, so I just assumed ;v;

He likes to eat cereal and draniksink coffee atin thise morning. He likes to eat cereal and drink coffee in the morning.

He likes to eat cereal and draniksink coffee atin thise morning. He likes to eat cereal and drink coffee in the morning.

He likes to eat cereal and draniksink coffee atin thise mornings. He likes to eat cereal and drink coffee in the mornings.

I think you were talking about a habit here. "He drinks coffee at this morning" means that he drank coffee in this morning specifically, and doesn't say if he does this every morning. If you say "he drinks coffee in the mornings", you say that he drinks coffee every morning. And since you already said "he likes to eat cereal, there is no need to add -s to " drink". Think of it like this: This sentence is "he likes to eat cereal" and "he likes to drink coffee" merged together.

One day, Mike wakes up at 6:30 am,h. He think:s, "I will be late for work,. I hope today is sunSunday, but it is mMonday." One day, Mike wakes up at 6:30 am. He thinks, "I will be late for work. I hope today is Sunday, but it is Monday."

One day, Mike wakes up 6:30 am,hAM. He think:s: I will be late for work,I hope. I wish today is sunwas Sunday, but it is mMonday. One day, Mike wakes up 6:30 AM. He thinks: I will be late for work. I wish today was Sunday, but it is Monday.

Mike already knows today is Monday, but he wishes that it was Sunday. Saying "he hopes" would imply that he didn't know it was Monday, so you should use "wish" instead.

hHe puts on his tie and belt and pants and shirt. He puts on his tie and belt and pants and shirt.

hHe puts on his tie and belt and pants and shirt. He puts on his tie and belt and pants and shirt.

If you want to, you could also write "He puts on his tie, belt, pants and shirt" to make the sentence shorter. You don't have to write "and" after every one of them.

He brushes his teeth, washes his face and goes outside. He brushes his teeth, washes his face and goes outside.

He brushes his teeth, washes his face and goes outside. He brushes his teeth, washes his face and goes outside.

Mike starts his red car, but the car does not star,ht. He is wondering,w "Why does the car is not star?t?" Mike starts his red car, but the car does not start. He is wondering, "Why does the car not start?"

Mike starts his red car, but the car does not star,he is wondring,t, he wonders, why does the car is not start? Mike starts his red car, but the car does not start, he wonders, why does the car not start?

He sees gas,the gas. "Oh, I forgeot,M my car runsan out of gas,I. I will get gas ato the gas station." He sees the gas. "Oh, I forgot, my car ran out of gas. I will get gas at the gas station."

He sees gas,the gas meter. Oh, I forget,ot. My car runsan out of gas,I get ga. He goes to the gas station to get gas. He sees the gas meter. Oh, I forgot. My car ran out of gas. He goes to the gas station to get gas.

You could also say just "gas", but the reader would have to assume that you meant "gas meter". Both are good.

He says:, "I would like some gas in my car." He says, "I would like some gas in my car."

He says: I would like to buy some gas infor my car. He says: I would like to buy some gas for my car.

The original sentence is also technically correct, just not very natural.

It is $50$,. Mike paid $50$ for gas station. It is $50. Mike paid $50 for gas.

It is 50$,. Mike paidys 50$ for gas at the gas station. It is 50$. Mike pays 50$ for gas at the gas station.

Then, he quaikickly drives his car to the restaurant. Then he quickly drives his car to the restaurant.

Then, he quaikickly drives his car to the restaurant. Then, he quickly drives his car to the restaurant.

Just a typo :-)

What doeIs mMike is late? Is Mike late?

What doeas mMike is late? Was Mike late?

No, Mike doeis not late for work, because No, Mike is not late for work, because

No, Mike doewas not late for work, because... No, Mike was not late for work, because...

I added "..." since the sentences were separated, and it builds suspense for the next sentence.

It's sunSunday,h. He gets out his phone, "Oh,no. It's Sunday. He gets out his phone, "Oh,no.

It's sunSunday,h. He gets out his phone, out. Oh, no. It's Sunday. He gets his phone out. Oh, no.

Just a typo :-)

My alarm is bad,. Today is sunSunday,h. Haha..." My alarm is bad. Today is Sunday. Haha..."

My alarm is bad,doesn't work well. Today is sunSunday, haha... My alarm doesn't work well. Today is Sunday, haha...

You could also say "My alarm is broken". Both of them mean that your alarm isn't working properly.