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A Computer Trouble

I have a laptop computer and use it for classes, but the speaker suddenly stopped working the other day. Even insert an earphone, I could listen to only noise. In the beginning, I opened the sound system and used troubleshooting, but it didn't work. Next, I re-install the sound driver and shut down, but it was useless. The solution was BIOS. After turn off my computer, turned it up pushing F6, then BIOS was activated. I initialized the setting and could solve the problem. It was a struggle.

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The solution was BIOS.

It was a struggle.

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A Computer Trouble


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Trouble is something called an abstract noun, which means it cannot be used with "a". Abstract nouns are basically nouns which refer to concepts. Examples are: Love, Information, Pain, Freedom etc. For most abstract nouns, saying "A Love" or "An Information" is incorrect.

I have a laptop computer and use it for classes, but the speaker suddenly stopped working the other day.


I have a laptop computer andI use it for classes, but the speaker suddenly stopped working the other day. I have a laptop computer I use for classes, but the speaker suddenly stopped working the other day.

I have a laptop computer and use it for classes, but the speaker suddenly stopped working the other day. I have a laptop and use it for classes, but the speaker suddenly stopped working the other day.

Laptop computer is not wrong, but most English speakers shorten it to laptop.

Even insert an earphone, I could listen to only noise.


Even insertwhen I used an earphone, I could listen to onlyonly hear noise. Even when I used an earphone, I could only hear noise.

Even inserting an earphone, I could listen to onlyonly hear noise. Even inserting an earphone, I could only hear noise.

In the beginning, I opened the sound system and used troubleshooting, but it didn't work.


In the beginning, IAt first, I tried openeding the sound system and used troubleshooting, but it didn't work. At first, I tried opening the sound system and used troubleshooting, but it didn't work.

"used troubleshooting" feels awkward. Can't think of a solution, though.

In the beginningFirst, I opened the sound system and used troubleshooting, but it didn't work. First, I opened the sound system and used troubleshooting, but it didn't work.

In the beginningAt first, I opened the sound system and ustried troubleshooting, but it didn't work. At first, I opened the sound system and tried troubleshooting, but it didn't work.

"Troubleshooting" is an action rather than a tool that can be used.

Next, I re-install the sound driver and shut down, but it was useless.


Next, I re-installed the sound driver and shut it down, but it was useless. Next, I re-installed the sound driver and shut it down, but it was useless.

Next, I re-installed the sound driver and shut down, but it was useless. Next, I re-installed the sound driver and shut down, but it was useless.

The solution was BIOS.


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The solution was in the BIOS. The solution was in the BIOS.

After turn off my computer, turned it up pushing F6, then BIOS was activated.


After turning off my computer, I turned it up while pushing F6, then BIOS was activated. After turning off my computer, I turned it up while pushing F6, then BIOS was activated.

After turning off my computer, I turned it upon while pushing F6, then BIOS was activatedentered the BIOS. After turning off my computer, I turned it on while pushing F6, then entered the BIOS.

I initialized the setting and could solve the problem.


I initialized the setting and could solved the problem. I initialized the setting and solved the problem.

I initialized the setting and could solved the problem. I initialized the setting and solved the problem.

It was a struggle.


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