Dec. 9, 2023
挺好的天吃巧克力
今天是星期六. 外面,很冷因为是冬天.
现在我学习同我的朋友: 她叫 Evie. 因为我饿, 她买了巧克力和送我两个巧克力棒 (kinder country). 这个是我的最喜欢巧克力! 我很高兴.
Aujourd'hui on est samedi. Dehors, il fait très froid parce que c'est l'hiver.
En ce moment même, j'étudie avec mon amie: son nom est Evie. Elle a acheté du chocolat et m'a donnée deux barres de chocolat. C'est mon chocolat préféré! Je suis très contente.
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挺好的天今天是吃巧克力的好日子/ 今天很适合吃巧克力
今天是吃巧克力的好日子/ 今天很适合吃巧克力
Do you mean "Today is a good day to eat chocolate"? I would suggest avoiding doing direct translation here and replacing "今天是吃巧克力的好日子" for "挺好的天吃巧克力" to make it more natural and idiomatic in Chinese.
你是不是指“今天是吃巧克力的好日子”？我建议避免直译，因为母语人士通常会说“今天很适合吃巧克力”之類的。
Dec. 10, 2023
Thank you so much that's exactly what i wanted to say
Dec. 10, 2023
Are these the only mistakes?
Dec. 11, 2023
There are some other mistakes in your journal, but I think there was something wrong with the processing of your journal entry. When I clicked the correct button, only the title of your journal showed up, and I wasn't able to correct the body of your journal. It's still the same now. Maybe you could delete your journal and try posting again?
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挺好的天吃巧克力
Do you mean "Today is a good day to eat chocolate"? I would suggest avoiding doing direct translation here and replacing "今天是吃巧克力的好日子" for "挺好的天吃巧克力" to make it more natural and idiomatic in Chinese. 你是不是指“今天是吃巧克力的好日子”？我建议避免直译，因为母语人士通常会说“今天很适合吃巧克力”之類的。 |
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