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All capitals for the titles :)

My first day of school day My first day of school

My first school day was pretty good because my father driove me with the car to my new school. My first day was pretty good because my father drove me to my new school.

My first school day was pretty good, because my father driove me with the car to my new school. My first school day was pretty good, because my father drove me to my new school.

Drove implies with a car, so you don't need to say that bit. I'd only specify if you drive with something different, like a motorcycle!

My first day of school day was pretty good because my father driove me with the car to my new school. My first day of school was pretty good because my father drove me to my new school.

"to drive" already means that you are driving a car

It was so cool/amazing/exciting I saw the list and fiound my room the schout that my roolm is very expensive. It was so cool/amazing/exciting I saw the list and found out that my room is very expensive.

It was so I saw the list and fiound my room t. The school is very expensive. I saw the list and found my room. The school is very expensive.

It was soWhen I arrived, I saw the list and fiound my room t. The school is very expeansive. When I arrived, I saw the list and found my room. The school is very expansive.

I'm not sure what your meaning is here... Perhaps, this is what you meant?

Me and the other children will be anythingnew students had to listen to them explain about the first year there and the facts. Me and the other new students had to listen to them explain about the first year there and the facts.

Me and tThe other children and I will be anything explaintold about the first year there, and the factss well as facts about the school. The other children and I will be told about the first year there, as well as facts about the school.

Me and the other children and I will be anything explain about the first year there and the factstold about what the first year will be like and will be provided with the necessary information. the other children and I will be told about what the first year will be like and will be provided with the necessary information.

Us will bWe were give an many documents and apps for the school and check. We were given many documents and apps for the school.

UsWe will be give an many documents and apps for the school and check. We will be given many documents and apps for the school and check.

UsWe will be give an many documents and apps for the school and checkto use in school. We will be given many documents and apps to use in school.

I'm not sure what you mean by "check" - do you mean the verb "to check" or the noun "a check" Remember that "us" is used after the verb, not as the subject of the sentence :)

OvAfter that we haved a tour throught perof the whole school with the both teachers. After that we had a tour of the whole school with the both teachers.

OvAfter that we have a tour throught per the whole school with the both teachers. After that we have a tour through the whole school with both teachers.

OvAfter that, we will have a tour throught perout the whole school with the bothwo teachers. After that, we will have a tour throughout the whole school with two teachers.

It give eThey even haven a library and next tThurdsday we make our photos for our passed are having our school photos. They even have a library and next Thursday we are having our school photos.

It give even has a library, and next tThurdsday we mtake our photos for our passed s. It even has a library, and next Thursday we take our photos for our passes.

We usually say "take a photo".

It give even has a library and next tThurdsday we makeare getting our photos taken for our passed s. It even has a library and next Thursday we are getting our photos taken for our passes.