Aug. 31, 2021
Comparing between watching TV and YouTube
TV programs and visual media have changed a lot.
When i was young, I could watch only a few channels on TV.
Without a schedule table with new papers, it was very hard to find programs what I wanted.
These days, there any many available channels not only air, but also cable or satellite services.
With electronic guide, it is very easy to find programs.
But I usually feel poverty in the midst of plenty channels.
Moreover, I need to wait on time for watching programs what I want.
It is boring.
That's why I prefer to watch YouTube now.
I can find the contents and watch them right away.
Plus, I can watch anywhere with my cell phone.
For this reason, I prefer to watch YouTube rather than TV.
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TV programs and visual media have changed a lot.
When iI was young, I could watch only a few channels on TV.
When I was young, I could watch only a few channels on TV.
Without a schedule table within new spapers, it was very hard to find programs wthat I wanted (to watch).
Without a schedule table in newspapers, it was very hard to find programs that I wanted (to watch).
These days, there any many available channels not only air, but alsothrough cable or satellite services.
These days, there any many available channels through cable or satellite services.
"On air" just means "being broadcast."
Alternative: "These days, there are many channels available through cable or satellite services."
With an electronic guide, it is very easy to find programs. With an electronic guide, it is very easy to find programs.
But I usually feel poverty in the midst of plentyamidst the abundance of channels.
But I usually feel poverty amidst the abundance of channels.
"Poverty" isn't the right word here. Maybe "I usually feel lost?"
Moreover, I need to wait on time fora while to watching programs what I want.
Moreover, I need to wait a while to watch programs.
It is boring.
That's why I prefer to watch YouTube now.
I can find the contents and watch them right away.
Plus, I can watch anywhere with my cell phone.
For this reason, I prefer to watch YouTube rather than TV.
Sept. 1, 2021
Thank you very much!
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Comparing between watching TV and YouTube |
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TV programs and visual media have changed a lot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When i was young, I could watch only a few channels on TV.
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Without a schedule table with new papers, it was very hard to find programs what I wanted.
Without a schedule table |
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These days, there any many available channels not only air, but also cable or satellite services.
These days, there any many available channels "On air" just means "being broadcast." Alternative: "These days, there are many channels available through cable or satellite services." |
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With electronic guide, it is very easy to find programs. With an electronic guide, it is very easy to find programs. With an electronic guide, it is very easy to find programs. |
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But I usually feel poverty in the midst of plenty channels.
But I usually feel poverty "Poverty" isn't the right word here. Maybe "I usually feel lost?" |
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Moreover, I need to wait on time for watching programs what I want.
Moreover, I need to wait |
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It is boring. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's why I prefer to watch YouTube now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can find the contents and watch them right away. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Plus, I can watch anywhere with my cell phone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For this reason, I prefer to watch YouTube rather than TV. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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