The second oneactivity I recommend is cycling along the rivers. The second activity I recommend is cycling along the rivers.

Your original wasn't wrong, but this sounds a little nicer.

The second onething I recommend is cycling along the rivers. The second thing I recommend is cycling along the rivers.

There are two famous rivers in Shanghai,: Huangpu Jiang and Suzhou He. There are two famous rivers in Shanghai: Huangpu Jiang and Suzhou He.

There are two famous rivers in Shanghai, the Huangpu Jiang and the Suzhou He. There are two famous rivers in Shanghai, the Huangpu Jiang and the Suzhou He.

Many people like to visit the confluencejunction of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point. Many people like to visit the junction of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point.

I think 'confluence' is a little too fancy for conversation.

Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near place around your hotel as the starting point. Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose any place around your hotel as the starting point.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical, new and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting hereboth locals and tourists, and views that are typical infor any season. Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical, new and under-construction buildings, both locals and tourists, and views that are typical for any season.

Again - nothing in your original was wrong, this is just more how I would write it.

Along anyeither of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting here, and views that are typical inof the season. Along either of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting here, and views that are typical of the season.

'Either' is used for groups of two. 'Any' implies a group of three or more.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who arebuildings or buildings that are still under-construction, locals or visiting heretourists, and views that are typical inof the season. Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical buildings or buildings that are still under-construction, locals or tourists, and views that are typical of the season.

I'm sure you will have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China. I'm sure you will have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China.

Can anyone just register? Don't you need an ID or bank account?

You can use any of them to scan the QR code for a shared bicycle for a littlesmall fee. You can use any of them to scan the QR code for a shared bicycle for a small fee.