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Day 18: Who are you?

If you would be able to ask yourself a question ten years in the future, what it would be?

I would ask: who are you? Let me explain why I want to ask this. People change a lot even in just one year, ten years in the future you'll be practically another person. For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English language. But now I watch anime and read a lot of mangas, even now, I'm studying Japanese and I love learning English. Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down in the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows!
I'm going to be another person ten years in the future I'm sure of that. Therefore I would like to ask my future self, who are you?

Changing the subject, now I write my posts by hand on a notebook and then I type them in my computer. I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.

Sorry if I can't answer your corrections but I don't have much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!!

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I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.

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Day 18: Who are you?

I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.

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Day 18: Who are you?

Let me explain why I want to ask this.

For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English language.

I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.

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Day 18: Who are you?


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If you would be able to ask yourself a question ten years in the future, what it would be?


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Let me explain why I want to ask this.


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People change a lot even in just one year, ten years in the future you'll be practically another person.


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For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English language.


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For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English language. For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English.

Just saying ‘English’ already implies that you’re speaking of the English language.

But now I watch anime and read a lot of mangas, even now, I'm studying Japanese and I love learning English.


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Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down in the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows!


Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down in the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows! Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows!

Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down in the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows! Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows!

I'm going to be another person ten years in the future I'm sure of that.


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I'm going to be another person in ten years in the future, I'm sure of that. I'm going to be another person in ten years, I'm sure of that.

I'm going to be another totally different person in ten years in the future, I'm sure of that. I'm going to be a totally different person in ten years, I'm sure of that.

Therefore I would like to ask my future self, who are you?


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Changing the subject, now I write my posts by hand on a notebook and then I type them in my computer.


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I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.


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Sorry if I can't answer your corrections but I don't have much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!!


SI'm sorry if I can't answer your corrections butecause I don't have much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!! I'm sorry if I can't answer your corrections because I don't have much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!!

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