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March 19, 2025

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Flowers

Do you ever think about flowers in the field?
Or maybe in a florist?
Do you ever think, why does those flowers have different life. Like, why there's so much flowers in the field, and it's much less when you found it in the store. Even though flowers in the store have so much attention. They got watered and pretty much sun light. But their population in store is not that much as in the wild. It's a silly question, and i think you already have the answer.


Apa kamu pernah berfikir tentang bunga-bunga di lapangan?
Atau mungkin di toko bunga?
Apakah kamu pernah berfikir, mengapa bunga-bunga itu memiliki kehidupan yang berbeda. Seperti, mengapa banyak sekali bunga di lapangan, dan itu lebih sedikit ketika kamu menemukannya di toko. Walaupun bunga-bunga di toko mendapatkan banyak perhatian. Mereka disiram dan mendapatkan sinar matahari yang cukup. Tetapi populasi di toko tidak sebanyak di alam liar. Ini adalah pertanyaan yang konyol, dan aku berfikir kamu sudah mempunyai jawabannya.

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Flowers

Do you ever think about flowers in the field?

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Do you ever think about flowers in the field?


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Do you ever think about the wild flowers in thea field? Do you ever think about the wild flowers in a field?

Or maybe in a florist?


Or maybe in a floristwer shop? Or maybe in a flower shop?

Florist is the person who sells flowers.

Or maybe the blooms in a florist shop? Or maybe the blooms in a florist shop?

Or maybe in a florist's shop? Or maybe in a florist's shop?

"Florist" refers to a person who sells flowers, but "florist’s shop" clarifies the location (the place where flowers are sold).

Do you ever think, why does those flowers have different life.


Do you ever think, why does those flowers have different lifeves. Do you ever think, why do those flowers have different lives.

Do you ever think, why does thoese flowers have a different life. Do you ever think, why do these flowers have a different life.

Do you ever think, why does thosewonder why flowers have such different life.ves? Do you ever wonder why flowers have such different lives?

The question is better phrased as "Do you ever wonder why..." because "wonder" fits the context of curiosity.

Like, why there's so much flowers in the field, and it's much less when you found it in the store.


Like, why are there's so muchany flowers in the field, andbut it's much less when you fouind ithem in the store. Like, why are there so many flowers in the field, but it's much less when you find them in the store.

I think instead of "it's much less", maybe "but there are far fewer when you find them in the store" makes more sense.

Like, why are there's so muchany flowers in the field, and it's much less when you found it in the storebut there’s far fewer than you went to the florist. Like, why are there so many flowers in the field, but there’s far fewer than you went to the florist.

Like, why are there's so muchany flowers in the field, and it's much less when you found ityet so few in thea store.? Like, why are there so many flowers in the field, yet so few in a store?

"There's" is incorrect here because it should agree with the plural noun "flowers." The proper form is "are there." "So much" is used for uncountable nouns, but "flowers" is countable, so it should be "so many flowers." "And it's much less" sounds a bit off in comparison to the previous sentence. I reworded it to "yet so few in a store" to maintain the contrast more clearly.

Even though flowers in the store have so much attention.


Even though flowers in the store haveget so much attention. Even though flowers in the store get so much attention.

Even though flowers in the store haveget so much attention. Even though flowers in the store get so much attention.

Even though the flowers in the store have so muchget plenty of attention. Even though the flowers in the store get plenty of attention.

"Have so much attention" sounds awkward. It's more natural to say "get plenty of attention." "The" is added before "flowers" because we're referring to specific flowers (those in the store).

They got watered and pretty much sun light.


They goet watered and pretty muchlots of sun light. They get watered and lots of sun light.

They goet watered and pretty much, special nutrition, and just the right amount of sun light. They get watered, special nutrition, and just the right amount of sun light.

But their population in store is not that much as in the wild.


But their population in store is not thatas much as in the wild. But their population in store is not as much as in the wild.

But their population in the store is not that muchas bountiful as in the wild. But their population in the store is not as bountiful as in the wild.

But their population in store is not that much asnumbers are still much smaller than those in the wild. But their numbers are still much smaller than those in the wild

"Population in store" is not incorrect, but "numbers" is a clearer and more natural word in this context. "Not that much as in the wild" is awkward; "much smaller than those in the wild" is a smoother phrasing.

It's a silly question, and i think you already have the answer.


It's a silly question, and i think you already haveknow the answer. It's a silly question, and i think you already know the answer.

It's a silly question, and iI think you may already have the answer. It's a silly question, and I think you may already have the answer.

It's might be a silly question, and iI think you already haveknow the answer. It might be a silly question, and I think you already know the answer.

"It's" is a contraction, but it sounds more natural and less definitive if we say "It might be" to soften the tone. "i" should be capitalized to "I," as it's a standard rule in English.

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