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March 12, 2022

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IELTS T2 (5)

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?

My answer:
It is true that the world is becoming similar, which leads to distinctions in different nations become smaller, such as fashion styles round the world are nearly the same. Some people arre worried about it, however, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
There are several reasons why people think it is not a good situation that countries become more common than ever before. Firstly, they reckon some traditional culture is disappearding so that the world will be a culture desert. For example, fewer young Chinese people would like to appreciate traditional Peking Opera, many people especially the old who love it so much are afraid of its vanishment. Secondly, when the local food can be get everywhere, the tourism benefits of a country would decrease. As a result, a lot of people would be influenced.
However, though there are some disadvantages of this case, I believe that there would be more advantages. On one hand, as the differences become less obvious, young people can benefits a lot from it. For instancce, students study abroad will adapt the strange surroundings more easily than that in the past. Furthermore, if they want to work in the foreign nation after graduating, they will get more opportunities. On the other hand, we can tell from human history that when something old vanishes, something new will spout, so we can just take it easy.
In conclusion, the world becomes similar in these days, some people are very cencerned about it. In my opinion, the world will benefit from it more.

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March 13, 2022

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IELTS T2 (5)


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Differences between countries become less evident each year.


Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels.


Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?


My answer:


It is true that the world is becoming similar, which leads to distinctions in different nations become smaller, such as fashion styles round the world are nearly the same.


It is true that the world is becoming similar, which leads to the distinctions ibetween different nations become smallfewer , such as fashion styles, which round the world are nearly the same. It is true that the world is becoming similar, which leads to the distinctions between different nations become fewer , such as fashion styles, which round the world are nearly the same.

Some people arre worried about it, however, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.


Some people arre worried about it, however, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Some people are worried about it, however, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

There are several reasons why people think it is not a good situation that countries become more common than ever before.


There are several reasons why people think it is not a good situation that countries are becomeing more common than ever before. There are several reasons why people think it is not a good situation that countries are becoming more common than ever before.

Firstly, they reckon some traditional culture is disappearding so that the world will be a culture desert.


Firstly, they reckon some traditional culture is disappearding soand that the world will be a culture desert. Firstly, they reckon some traditional culture is disappearing and that the world will be a culture desert.

For example, fewer young Chinese people would like to appreciate traditional Peking Opera, many people especially the old who love it so much are afraid of its vanishment.


For example, fewer young Chinese people would like to appreciate traditional Peking Opera, so many people, especially the old who love it so much, are afraid of its vanishment. For example, fewer young Chinese people would like to appreciate traditional Peking Opera, so many people, especially the old who love it so much, are afraid of its vanishment.

Secondly, when the local food can be get everywhere, the tourism benefits of a country would decrease.


Secondly, when the local food can be get everbought anywhere, the tourism benefits of a country would decrease. Secondly, when local food can be bought anywhere, the tourism benefits of a country would decrease.

As a result, a lot of people would be influenced.


As a result, a lot of people would be influencaffected. As a result, a lot of people would be affected.

However, though there are some disadvantages of this case, I believe that there would be more advantages.


On one hand, as the differences become less obvious, young people can benefits a lot from it.


On one hand, as the differences become less obvious, young people can benefits a lot from it. On one hand, as the differences become less obvious, young people can benefit a lot from it.

For instancce, students study abroad will adapt the strange surroundings more easily than that in the past.


For instancce, students studying abroad will adapt the strange surroundings more easily than that in the past. For instancce, students studying abroad will adapt the strange surroundings more easily than that in the past.

Furthermore, if they want to work in the foreign nation after graduating, they will get more opportunities.


Furthermore, if they want to work in thea foreign nation after graduating, they will get more opportunities. Furthermore, if they want to work in a foreign nation after graduating, they will get more opportunities.

On the other hand, we can tell from human history that when something old vanishes, something new will spout, so we can just take it easy.


In conclusion, the world becomes similar in these days, some people are very cencerned about it.


In conclusion, the world is becomesing similar in these days, some people are very ceoncerned about it. In conclusion, the world is becoming similar these days, some people are very concerned about it.

In my opinion, the world will benefit from it more.


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