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llimas

Feb. 28, 2025

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Type Of Climate in My Country

I live in a tropical country, the majority of days are sunny.
The winter is not a problem for the people who live here.
If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because It doesn't snow in any state here.
When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we get our coats and jackets to avoid the cold.
If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.
If you're curious about what country I'm talking about, I live in Brazil.

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Type Oof Climate in My Country

I live in a tropical country, where the majority of days are sunny.

You can either use where or you can make these two seperate sentences.
“I live in a tropical country. The majority of days are sunny.”

The winter is not a problem for the people who live here.

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because It doesn't snow in any state here.

When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we get our coats and jackets to avoid the cold.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all the people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If you're curious about what country I'm talking about, I live in Brazil.

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Good job!

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llimas

March 1, 2025

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Thank you :)

The Type Oof Climate in Mmy Country

I live in a tropical country,; the majority of days are sunny.

The winter is not a problem for the people who live here.

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we get our coats and jackets to avoid the cold.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all peopleveryone starts to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If you're curious about what country I'm talking about, I live in Brazil.

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Not like that here. :)

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llimas

March 1, 2025

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Thank you :)

I live in a tropical country, the majority of days arewhere most of the time it is sunny.

The winter is not a problem for the people who live here.

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we getwear our coats and jackets to avoid the cold.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If you're curious about what country I'm talking about, I live init's Brazil.

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I live in a tropical country too 👋🏾 and I have not seen snow before except on the internet, haha.

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Toluwani

Feb. 28, 2025

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You wrote well by the way, just few mistakes.

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llimas

March 1, 2025

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Thank you :)

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Toluwani

March 1, 2025

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You're welcome :))

Type Of Climate in My Country

I live in a tropical country, so the majority of days are sunny.

Or even better, "I live in a tropical country, where it's sunny most of the time"

The winter is not a problem for the people who live here.

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

Again, it would sound better to say "because it never snows here..."

When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we getwear our coats and jackets to avoid the cold/to keep warm.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all peopleveryone start tos talking about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If you're curious about what country I'm talking about, I live in Brazil.

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Well done. There were few real mistakes - I just tried to make some sentences sound a bit smoother.
I've never been to Brazil, but you make me want to visit!

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llimas

March 1, 2025

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Thank you :)
Brazil have a continental size, so we have a lot places to visit here.
Sadly the international media only talks about Rio de Janeiro like we only have this state here hahaha.

The Type Of Climate in My Country

I live in a tropical country, where the majority of days are sunny.

you don't necessarily have to put the where but it makes the sentence sound better

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

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llimas

March 1, 2025

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Thank you :)

Type Of Climate in My Country


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Type Oof Climate in My Country

I live in a tropical country, the majority of days are sunny.


I live in a tropical country, where the majority of days are sunny.

you don't necessarily have to put the where but it makes the sentence sound better

I live in a tropical country, so the majority of days are sunny.

Or even better, "I live in a tropical country, where it's sunny most of the time"

I live in a tropical country, the majority of days arewhere most of the time it is sunny.

I live in a tropical country,; the majority of days are sunny.

I live in a tropical country, where the majority of days are sunny.

You can either use where or you can make these two seperate sentences. “I live in a tropical country. The majority of days are sunny.”

The winter is not a problem for the people who live here.


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If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because It doesn't snow in any state here.


If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

Again, it would sound better to say "because it never snows here..."

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

If we want to see snow, we need to visit another country, because Iit doesn't snow in any state here.

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When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we get our coats and jackets to avoid the cold.


When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we getwear our coats and jackets to avoid the cold/to keep warm.

When the weather is 17 degrees Celsius or below, we getwear our coats and jackets to avoid the cold.

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If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.


If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all peopleveryone start tos talking about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all peopleveryone starts to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If the weather is 12 degrees Celsius or below, all the people start to talk about the weather, because it is so rare here.

If you're curious about what country I'm talking about, I live in Brazil.


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If you're curious about what country I'm talking about, I live init's Brazil.

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