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I can’t get any mask wherever I go. Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she would make me a mask. I recognized it's true that “Friends are necessary for life” as people say.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks. I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return for it. Last night she messaged me that they were completed, so I met her today to get them. She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” Then, I paid 2,500 yen to her.
I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆


どこへ行ってもマスクがありません。すると、裁縫が上手な友人がマスクを作ってくれることになりました。やっぱり「持つべきものは友」だね。5個お願いしました。お礼にケーキセットを奢ろうと思いました。出来上がったと昨日メールがあったので、今日会いました。1個500円と言われました。私は2500円払いました。
やっぱり「世の中、金」だわ。

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Last night she messaged me that they were completed, so I met her today to get them.

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Friendship


Friendship🌟 Friendship🌟

I can’t get any mask wherever I go.


I can’t getouldn't find any masks wherever I gowent. I couldn't find any masks wherever I went.

I can’thaven't be able to get any mask no matter wherever I go. I haven't be able to get a mask no matter where I go.

You needed a better transition. In the next sentence you write "then" which implies that you have been searching for a period of time. "Haven't" adds this context. 次の文では、「then」と書きます。これは、一定期間検索していることを表ます。 「Haven't」はこの文脈を明らかにします。

Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she would make me a mask.


Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she would make me a maskone. Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she would make me one.

Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she wcould make me a mask. Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she could make me a mask.

「Would」が決めっているイメージと気がします. だが 「suggested」 は曖昧から 「Could」 の方がいいと思います。「Could」は可能性とか提案を表ますね。

I recognized it's true that “Friends are necessary for life” as people say.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks.


I recognalized it' was true that “Friends are necessary for life” as people saythe saying goes.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks. I realized it was true that “Friends are necessary for life” as the saying goes.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks.

I recognized it's true that “Friends are necessary for life” as people say.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks.asked her to make 5. People say, "friends are necessary for life”. I realised that that's so true. 🥺✨ I asked her to make 5. People say, "friends are necessary for life”. I realised that that's so true. 🥺✨

I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return for it.


I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return for it. I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return.

I thought maybe I would buy her a nice cake -and -drink set in return for ither kindness. I thought maybe I would buy her a nice cake-and-drink set in return for her kindness.

Last night she messaged me that they were completed, so I met her today to get them.


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Last night she messaged me to say that they were completed, so I met her today to get them. Last night she messaged me to say that they were completed, so I met her today to get them.

She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” Then, I paid 2,500 yen to her.


She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” Then, II then paid 2,500 yen to her. She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” I then paid 2,500 yen to her.

She said, “It's 500 yen for oneper mask.” ThenSo, I paid her 2,500 yen to her. Ouch. She said, “It's 500 yen per mask.” So, I paid her 2,500 yen. Ouch.

Signal your surprise more for the transition.

I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆


I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆 I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆

Or if you want a direct translation of your native text, you could use "Money is everything in this world."

I thought again and found out thatOn second thought, maybe money is more necessary for life than friendship. 😆 On second thought, maybe money is more necessary for life than friendship. 😆

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