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On my free time i like to go at the gym, reccently i tried a pilate reformer and i really like that. It's hard but at the end of the session we are proud of ourselves. I really like reading too, specifically thriller and sad history, my last book was "La petite rose" and i cried at the end :(. I'm such a big movie fan, my favorite movie is the truman show and catch me if you can, I'm in a hurry to return at the cinéma.
(I have a lot of gaps in my conjugation skills, do you know of any websites/methods to help me improve ?)
My hobbies
OIn my free time iI like to go ato the gym, reccently iI tried a pilates reformer and iI really like thad it.
In my free time I like to go to the gym, recently I tried a pilates reformer and I really liked it.
Tricky subtle stuff
It's hard but at the end of the session we are proud of ourselves.
I really like reading too, specifically thriller and sad history, my. The last book I read/the book I read most recently was "La petite rose" and i cried at the end :(.
I really like reading too, specifically thriller and sad history. The last book I read/the book I read most recently was "La petite rose" and i cried at the end :(.
This was technically correct but a run-on sentence. The start of the last clause suggested you had written the book in question rather than read it.
I'm such a big movie fan, my favorite movie isare the truman show and catch me if you can, I'm in a hurry to return ato the cinéma.
I'm such a big movie fan, my favorite movie are the truman show and catch me if you can, I'm in a hurry to return to the cinéma.
The second clause is a little awkward but is correct.
My hobbies
OIn my free time iI like to go ato the gym, r. Reccently i, I tried a pilates reformer and iI really liked that.
In my free time I like to go to the gym. Recently, I tried a pilates reformer and I really liked that.
You do things "in" or "during" your free time.
This works best split into two sentences. Since you're talking about an experience in the past in the second sentence, then you should use past tense for the entire sentence.
It's hard but at the end of the session we are proud of ourselves. It's hard but at the end of the session we are proud of ourselves.
Who is "we" here?
I really like reading too, s. Specifically, thrillers and sad history, micals. My last book was "La petite rose" and i cried at the end :(.
I really like reading too. Specifically, thrillers and sad historicals. My last book was "La petite rose" and i cried at the end :(.
"historical" is a genre where the books have a historical setting
I'm such a big movie fan, m. My favorite movie is ts are The tTruman sShow and cCatch mMe iIf yYou cCan,. I'm in a hurry to return ato the cinéema.
I'm such a big movie fan. My favorite movies are The Truman Show and Catch Me If You Can. I'm in a hurry to return to the cinema.
Since you mention multiple movies, you should use the plural form. Movie titles should be capitalised for clarity (it can be confusing, especially with titles like Catch Me If You Can)
You return *to* somewhere
No accent is needed in "cinema"
(I have a lot of gaps in my conjugation skills, do you know of any websites/methods to help me improve ?)
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I don't know if I can help much with your last question, sorry
I would suggest looking at how you're using commas, since in a lot of places here it felt more natural to split into multiple sentences
But your meaning was clear across your writing, so you are doing well!
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On my free time i like to go at the gym, reccently i tried a pilate reformer and i really like that.
You do things "in" or "during" your free time. This works best split into two sentences. Since you're talking about an experience in the past in the second sentence, then you should use past tense for the entire sentence.
Tricky subtle stuff |
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It's hard but at the end of the session we are proud of ourselves. It's hard but at the end of the session we are proud of ourselves. It's hard but at the end of the session we are proud of ourselves. Who is "we" here? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really like reading too, specifically thriller and sad history, my last book was "La petite rose" and i cried at the end :(.
I really like reading too "historical" is a genre where the books have a historical setting
I really like reading too, specifically thriller and sad history This was technically correct but a run-on sentence. The start of the last clause suggested you had written the book in question rather than read it. |
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I'm such a big movie fan, my favorite movie is the truman show and catch me if you can, I'm in a hurry to return at the cinéma.
I'm such a big movie fan Since you mention multiple movies, you should use the plural form. Movie titles should be capitalised for clarity (it can be confusing, especially with titles like Catch Me If You Can) You return *to* somewhere No accent is needed in "cinema"
I'm such a big movie fan, my favorite movie The second clause is a little awkward but is correct. |
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