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Ducky

Sept. 6, 2022

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Two Whales

This image shows two whales. One is above and the other is bellow of a text in a light grey color. They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surrouning that letters. In the text it can read the word "Whales". I chose this grey because I did want stand out the whales over the text.


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Two Whales

This image shows two whales.

One is above and the other is bellow of a text in a light grey colortext box.

They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surrounding thate letters.

In the text it can read
the word "Whales".

I chose this grey because I did want stand out the whales over the textwanted the whales to stand out over the text / I wanted the whales to be the salient image.

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As always any questions please don’t hesitate to ask !!!

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Ducky

Sept. 8, 2022

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Thanks a lot.

Two Whales

This image shows two whales.

One is above and the other is bellow of athe text in a light grey color.

They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surrounding thate letters.

In tThe text it can read the wordreads "Whales".

I chose this (shade of) grey because I did want the text to stand out over the whales over the text.

Two Whales

This image shows two whales.

One is above and the other is bellow of asome text in a light grey color.

They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surly arouningd thate letters.

or "they are blue"
or "around the word"

IOn the text it can read-shirt it says the word "Whales".

I chose this grey because I did wanwanted it stand out the whales over the textagainst the whales.

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Great writing! :)

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Ducky

Sept. 6, 2022

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I chose this grey because I did wanwanted it stand out the whales over the textagainst the whales.

I mean that I wanted stand out whales more that the word.

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Ducky

Sept. 6, 2022

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Thanks for your comments.

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Grace14

Sept. 7, 2022

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Your welcome, for that sentence you'd then say "I chose this grey because I wanted the whales to stand out more"

Two Whales


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This image shows two whales.


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One is above and the other is bellow of a text in a light grey color.


One is above and the other is bellow of asome text in a light grey color.

One is above and the other is bellow of athe text in a light grey color.

One is above and the other is bellow of a text in a light grey colortext box.

They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surrouning that letters.


They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surly arouningd thate letters.

or "they are blue" or "around the word"

They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surrounding thate letters.

They are drawn in a blue color, and you can see them swimming in freedom, surrounding thate letters.

In the text it can read the word "Whales".


IOn the text it can read-shirt it says the word "Whales".

In tThe text it can read the wordreads "Whales".

In the text it can read
the word "Whales".

I chose this grey because I did want stand out the whales over the text.


I chose this grey because I did wanwanted it stand out the whales over the textagainst the whales.

I chose this (shade of) grey because I did want the text to stand out over the whales over the text.

I chose this grey because I did want stand out the whales over the textwanted the whales to stand out over the text / I wanted the whales to be the salient image.

https://bit.ly/3cRMMVA


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