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hananoaki

March 23, 2024

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Two Types of People

Sometimes dichotomy symplicize our vision. An example is “There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.” These days I am seeing the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaging themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to get their goals.
Learning languages is my hobby. I am a learner, and as my vocation, I am also a teacher. I sometimes think there are only two types of learners, those who actively put in efforts to get their goals (study, music, art, sports, whatever field they want to improve). If I have to say to my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecpect they would be very successful in the future. Successful ones are enjoying practicing and hardly neglect their practicing routine. They would never need my encouragement.
Today, I was at a cozy cafe run by my former student. And there, the people I met were the first type of people. Cyclists who love training, a woman who is joinning a marathon every two months, artists, a high school student who never neglected practicing clarinet. He confessed he often fall asleep in classes, after he learned I am a high school teacher, that amused me.
Those people are not aware how great their devotion is. Fish swim. Just like that, it is only natural that they are so enthusiastically working hard.

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Two Types of People

Sometimes a dichotomy symplicizeis useful to simplify our vision.

An example is “There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.”. These days I am seeing the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaging themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to get their goals.

Learning languages is my hobby.

I am a learner, and as my vocation, I am also a teacher.

I sometimes think there are only two types of learners, those who actively put in efforts to get their goals (study, music, art, sports, whatever field they want to improve).

If I haved to say toask my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecxpect they would be very successful in the future.

Successful ones are enjoying practicing and hardly neglect their practicing routine.

They would never need my encouragement.

Today, I was at a cozy cafe run by my former student.

Cyclists who love training, a woman who is joinning a marathon every two months, artists, a high school student who never neglected practicing clarinet.

He confessed that he often faell asleep in classes, he said this after he learned I am a high school teacher, thatwhich amused me.

Those people are not aware how great their devotion is.

Fish swim.

Just like that, it is only natural that they are so enthusiastically working hard.

Today, I was at a cozy cafe run by mya former student of mine.

He confessed he often falls asleep in classes, after he learned I am a high school teacher, thatwhich amused me.

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Nicely written! I agree with most of Pari’s corrections so I just added a few. :-)

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hananoaki

March 24, 2024

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Hello! Thank you so much for your help! This is my first post on this website. I am glad I can hear from you again and receive your corrections as well.
Have a great weekend!

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JoeTofu

March 24, 2024

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Nice to hear from you, too! Happy Sunday!

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hananoaki

March 25, 2024

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Thank you!

Sometimes, dichotomy syimplicizefies our visionperspective.

AHere's an example is “: "There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.” T". Personally, these days, I am seeingsee the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaginge themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to getengaged in achieving their goals.

I am a learner, and as my vocation, I am also at the same time, my profession is to teacher.

The word "vocation" is a slightly older style of English. Using either "I work as...", "my job is...", "my profession is..." - these are slightly more common nowadays.

If I have to say totell my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecxpect they wouldm to be very successful in the future.

Successful ones arestudents enjoying practicing, and hardly neglect their practicinge routine.

And there, the people I met were of the first type of people.

CI met cyclists who love training, a woman who is joinning as marathons every two months, artists, and a high school student who never neglected practicing the clarinet.

HAfter he learned I am a high school teacher, he confessed that he often falls asleep in classes, after he learned I am a high school teacher, - that amused me.

Those people are not aware of how great their devotion is.

Just like that, it is only natural that they are sfor them to enthusiastically working hard.

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Nice post! It's a difficult topic that you're writing about, overall it was very nicely written and understandable!

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hananoaki

March 24, 2024

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Thank you so much for your help! It's helpful that you showed me alternative expressions to the old-fashioned word. I don't use English in my daily life, so I am grateful to learn natural expressions.
Have a great weekend!

Sometimes a dichotomy symplicizeis useful to simplify our vision.

An example is “There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.” These days I am seeing the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaginge themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to getachieve their goals.

I sometimes think there are only two types of learners, those who actively put in the efforts to getachieve their goals (study, music, art, sports, whatever field they want to improve) and those who don't.

If I have to say toell/ask my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecxpect that they would be very successful in the future.

Successful ones are enjoying practicing and hardly neglect their practice/learning routine.

They would never need my encouragement.

Today, I was at a cozy cafe run by mya former student.

Cyclists who love training, a woman who is joinningtakes part in a marathon every two months, artists, and a high school student who never neglecteds practicing the clarinet.

He confessed he often falls asleep in classes, a. After he learned I am a high school teacher, that amused me.

Those people are not aware of how great their devotion is, so it is only natural that they work hard with great enthusiasm.

Just like that, it is only natural that they are so enthusiastically working hard.

This sentence seemed a bit disconnected from the one above, so I combined them.

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hananoaki

March 24, 2024

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Thank you so much for your help! Have a great weekend!

Sometimes dichotomy symplicize our vision.


Sometimes a dichotomy symplicizeis useful to simplify our vision.

Sometimes, dichotomy syimplicizefies our visionperspective.

Sometimes a dichotomy symplicizeis useful to simplify our vision.

Learning languages is my hobby.


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Fish swim.


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Two Types of People


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I am a learner, and as my vocation, I am also a teacher.


I am a learner, and as my vocation, I am also at the same time, my profession is to teacher.

The word "vocation" is a slightly older style of English. Using either "I work as...", "my job is...", "my profession is..." - these are slightly more common nowadays.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I sometimes think there are only two types of learners, those who actively put in efforts to get their goals (study, music, art, sports, whatever field they want to improve).


I sometimes think there are only two types of learners, those who actively put in the efforts to getachieve their goals (study, music, art, sports, whatever field they want to improve) and those who don't.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I have to say to my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecpect they would be very successful in the future.


If I have to say toell/ask my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecxpect that they would be very successful in the future.

If I have to say totell my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecxpect they wouldm to be very successful in the future.

If I haved to say toask my students to study harder, to be honest, I wouldn’t ecxpect they would be very successful in the future.

An example is “There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.” These days I am seeing the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaging themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to get their goals.


An example is “There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.” These days I am seeing the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaginge themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to getachieve their goals.

AHere's an example is “: "There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.” T". Personally, these days, I am seeingsee the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaginge themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to getengaged in achieving their goals.

An example is “There are only two types of people, those who are XX and those who are not XX.”. These days I am seeing the world using this classification: “There are only two types of people, those who are engaging themselves in something and those who are not capable of being absorbed in something to get their goals.

Cyclists who love training, a woman who is joinning a marathon every two months, artists, a high school student who never neglected practicing clarinet.


Cyclists who love training, a woman who is joinningtakes part in a marathon every two months, artists, and a high school student who never neglecteds practicing the clarinet.

CI met cyclists who love training, a woman who is joinning as marathons every two months, artists, and a high school student who never neglected practicing the clarinet.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He confessed he often fall asleep in classes, after he learned I am a high school teacher, that amused me.


He confessed he often falls asleep in classes, a. After he learned I am a high school teacher, that amused me.

HAfter he learned I am a high school teacher, he confessed that he often falls asleep in classes, after he learned I am a high school teacher, - that amused me.

He confessed he often falls asleep in classes, after he learned I am a high school teacher, thatwhich amused me.

He confessed that he often faell asleep in classes, he said this after he learned I am a high school teacher, thatwhich amused me.

Those people are not aware how great their devotion is.


Those people are not aware of how great their devotion is, so it is only natural that they work hard with great enthusiasm.

Those people are not aware of how great their devotion is.

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Just like that, it is only natural that they are so enthusiastically working hard.


Just like that, it is only natural that they are so enthusiastically working hard.

This sentence seemed a bit disconnected from the one above, so I combined them.

Just like that, it is only natural that they are sfor them to enthusiastically working hard.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Successful ones are enjoying practicing and hardly neglect their practicing routine.


Successful ones are enjoying practicing and hardly neglect their practice/learning routine.

Successful ones arestudents enjoying practicing, and hardly neglect their practicinge routine.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They would never need my encouragement.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I was at a cozy cafe run by my former student.


Today, I was at a cozy cafe run by mya former student.

Today, I was at a cozy cafe run by mya former student of mine.

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And there, the people I met were the first type of people.


And there, the people I met were of the first type of people.

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