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Scarlett_Father

May 31, 2023

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Two Tiny Frogs

I have a small fish pond at the corner of my home garden made out of cement, which is two meters long, one meter wide and one meter tall. It's really small, but the water preserved in it is all natural rain that was collected and piped from the roof. I will write an entry in the future to illustrate how I make it.

A few days ago. I added some water lettuce and frog eggs in the pond, I hope to see how they grow up. I have searched on the internet and learned that a frog would generally go through four stages: egg, tadpole, metamorphosis and adult frog stages. Yesterday,I took a picture of the water lettuce, and found two small frogs sitting on it; they were light brown, with two small grey and deep eyes, squatting motionless. I believe the two frogs are in their metamorphosis stage. They are so cute and tiny in my eyes, I'm so interested in what they are thinking about and what they are going to eat. It is true, that they can grow up
without any care of their mother.
I transferred this picture to my wife. She was scared warning me to let the frogs out of the pond because suggested that they would attract snakes, moreover, the voice of the frogs might let us insomnia at night. In my thought, however, adult frogs might eat mosquitoes which would be beneficial for us.

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Two Tiny Frogs

I have a small fish pond at the corner of my home garden made out of cement, which is two meters long, one meter wide and one meter talldeep.

わー、すごいですね。

池に関する言葉は、「tall」より「deep」という言葉の方がいいです。

It's really small, but the water preserved contained within it is all natural rain that was collected and piped from the roof.

I will write an entry in the future to illustrate how I makde it.

よかった!

past tense

A few days ago.

A few days ago, I added some water lettuce and frog eggs into the pond,. I hope to see how theym grow up.

このの方が自然です。

I have searched on the internet and learned that a frog would generallys go through four stages: egg, tadpole, metamorphosis and adult frog stages.

科学ですから、直接の言葉を使った方がいいです。

Yesterday, I took a picture of the water lettuce, and found two small frogs sitting on it; they were light brown, with two small greay and deep eyes, squatting motionlessly.

「squatting」は動詞ですから、「motionlessly」という副詞を使うべきです。

I believe the two frogs are in their metamorphosis stage.

They are so cute and tiny in my eyes,. I'm so interested in what they are thinking about and what they are going to eat.

かわいい!

It is true, that they can grow up
without any care ofrom their mother.

I transferrshowed this picture to my wife.

She was scared warning me to let the frogs out of the pond because suggested that they wouldthey might attract snakes, moreover, the voices of the frogs might letgive us insomnia at night.

In my thought think, however, adult frogs might eat mosquitoes which would be beneficial for us.

そうですね。

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面白い記事です。将来のことを楽しみにしています!また上手に書けています!

A few days ago.,

Yesterday, I took a picture of the water lettuce, and found two small frogs sitting on it; they were light brown, with two small grey and deep eyes, squatting motionless.

They are so cute and tiny in my eyes,. I'm so interested in what they are thinking about and what they are going to eat.

It is true, that they can grow up
without any care
ofrom their mother.

I transfershared this picture towith my wife.,

Sand she was scared, warning me to let the frogs out of the pond becaus. She suggested that they would attract snakes, m. Moreover, the voicesound of the frogs might letcause us insomnia at night.

In my thoughts, however, adult frogs might eat mosquitoes, which would be beneficial for us.

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Scarlett_Father

May 31, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! :-)

Two Tiny Frogs


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I have a small fish pond at the corner of my home garden made out of cement, which is two meters long, one meter wide and one meter tall.


I have a small fish pond at the corner of my home garden made out of cement, which is two meters long, one meter wide and one meter talldeep.

わー、すごいですね。 池に関する言葉は、「tall」より「deep」という言葉の方がいいです。

It's really small, but the water preserved in it is all natural rain that was collected and piped from the roof.


It's really small, but the water preserved contained within it is all natural rain that was collected and piped from the roof.

I will write an entry in the future to illustrate how I make it.


I will write an entry in the future to illustrate how I makde it.

よかった! past tense

A few days ago.


A few days ago.,

A few days ago.

I added some water lettuce and frog eggs in the pond, I hope to see how they grow up.


A few days ago, I added some water lettuce and frog eggs into the pond,. I hope to see how theym grow up.

このの方が自然です。

I have searched on the internet and learned that a frog would generally go through four stages: egg, tadpole, metamorphosis and adult frog stages.


I have searched on the internet and learned that a frog would generallys go through four stages: egg, tadpole, metamorphosis and adult frog stages.

科学ですから、直接の言葉を使った方がいいです。

Yesterday,I took a picture of the water lettuce, and found two small frogs sitting on it; they were light brown, with two small grey and deep eyes, squatting motionless.


Yesterday, I took a picture of the water lettuce, and found two small frogs sitting on it; they were light brown, with two small grey and deep eyes, squatting motionless.

Yesterday, I took a picture of the water lettuce, and found two small frogs sitting on it; they were light brown, with two small greay and deep eyes, squatting motionlessly.

「squatting」は動詞ですから、「motionlessly」という副詞を使うべきです。

I believe the two frogs are in their metamorphosis stage.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They are so cute and tiny in my eyes, I'm so interested in what they are thinking about and what they are going to eat.


They are so cute and tiny in my eyes,. I'm so interested in what they are thinking about and what they are going to eat.

They are so cute and tiny in my eyes,. I'm so interested in what they are thinking about and what they are going to eat.

かわいい!

It is true, that they can grow up without any care of their mother.


It is true, that they can grow up
without any care
ofrom their mother.

It is true, that they can grow up
without any care ofrom their mother.

I transferred this picture to my wife.


I transfershared this picture towith my wife.,

I transferrshowed this picture to my wife.

She was scared warning me to let the frogs out of the pond because suggested that they would attract snakes, moreover, the voice of the frogs might let us insomnia at night.


Sand she was scared, warning me to let the frogs out of the pond becaus. She suggested that they would attract snakes, m. Moreover, the voicesound of the frogs might letcause us insomnia at night.

She was scared warning me to let the frogs out of the pond because suggested that they wouldthey might attract snakes, moreover, the voices of the frogs might letgive us insomnia at night.

In my thought, however, adult frogs might eat mosquitoes which would be beneficial for us.


In my thoughts, however, adult frogs might eat mosquitoes, which would be beneficial for us.

In my thought think, however, adult frogs might eat mosquitoes which would be beneficial for us.

そうですね。

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