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June 20, 2021

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Two Small ‘Do-Nabe’ Earthen Pots

"What is your favorite thing you own?"

I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot). Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay. I bought it to cook boiled rice.
I screwed up. I've blackened the bottom of the pot. So, I have two pots(They are the same shape).
Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it. (I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)


『あなたが持っている物の中で、大好きな物は何ですか?』
今回は、小さな土鍋について書きます。土鍋とは、土から作られた鍋です。ご飯を炊くために買いました。
昔に失敗して、鍋の底を焦がしてしまいました。だから、今は2つ持っています(同じ形のものです)。
今では、ご飯を炊くことに慣れました。(鍋を火にかけるとき、タイマーをかけていますけれど。)

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I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot).

Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay.

"is" relates to a singular object. Just saying "donabe" would work.

I screwed up.

I've blackenedurnt the bottom of the pot.

I hope I've interpreted your intentions correctly, because I'm assuming it got burnt?

So, I have two pots(They are with the same shape).

"So" isn't needed at the beginning.

Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it now.

(I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)

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Great job :)

Two Small ‘Do-Nabe’ Earthen Pots


"What is your favorite thing you own?


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I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay.


Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay.

"is" relates to a singular object. Just saying "donabe" would work.

I bought it to cook boiled rice.


I screwed up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've blackened the bottom of the pot.


I've blackenedurnt the bottom of the pot.

I hope I've interpreted your intentions correctly, because I'm assuming it got burnt?

So, I have two pots(They are the same shape).


So, I have two pots(They are with the same shape).

"So" isn't needed at the beginning.

Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it.


Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it now.

(I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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