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Nov. 12, 2022

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I find that Sir Jin is very interesting. He rarely speaks, but every time his fewer words often have special meanings. He either speaks straight or roundabout, and after that, he stops giving more responses. Hi, Sir Jin, am I right?

Another interesting person is Miss Xiang. She only posts her videos or articles on our WeChat groups, but she never talks to us. Most strangely, even after our group leader told her that some WeChat groups are our backup group and not to post her works there, she still does, as if she had never heard of that.

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I find that SirMr. Jin is very interesting.

You could say either "I find that Mr. Jin is very interesting" or "I find Mr. Jin very interesting."

'Sir [name]' is a very outdated way to call a man. It is only used in archaic speech or in fiction. Sir by itself is used in customer service/formal places (police, shops, etc.) or when giving respect to a male: a boss, a father, a police officer or an older man. It is also used with teenagers, usually when they are in trouble.

He rarely speaks, but every time his fewere does his curt words often have a special meanings.

He either speaks straight or in a roundabout, and way. Then after that, he stops giving more responsesding.

Hi, Siryou are Mr. Jin, am I right?

Hi is a bit casual compared to saying hello.

Another interesting person is Miss Xiang.

You can use Miss or Ms. (Both mean an unmarried woman. Mr. is always used for a man even when he is not married.)

Most sStrangely enough, even after our group leader told her that some WeChat groups are our backup group and that she should not to post her worksstuff there, she still does, as if she had never heard of thatwere deaf.

You could use 'as if she were deaf', 'as if it had fallen on deaf ears' or 'like it went through one ear and out the other'. All mean for a person to be ignorant of what they were told.

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You wrote very well. Aside from some mistakes you are very close to sounding natural

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Jack

Nov. 13, 2022

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Thank you very much. I really appreciate it.

Two Short WeChat Messages


I find that Sir Jin is very interesting.


I find that SirMr. Jin is very interesting.

You could say either "I find that Mr. Jin is very interesting" or "I find Mr. Jin very interesting." 'Sir [name]' is a very outdated way to call a man. It is only used in archaic speech or in fiction. Sir by itself is used in customer service/formal places (police, shops, etc.) or when giving respect to a male: a boss, a father, a police officer or an older man. It is also used with teenagers, usually when they are in trouble.

He rarely speaks, but every time his fewer words often have special meanings.


He rarely speaks, but every time his fewere does his curt words often have a special meanings.

He either speaks straight or roundabout, and after that, he stops giving more responses.


He either speaks straight or in a roundabout, and way. Then after that, he stops giving more responsesding.

Hi, Sir Jin, am I right?


Hi, Siryou are Mr. Jin, am I right?

Hi is a bit casual compared to saying hello.

Another interesting person is Miss Xiang.


Another interesting person is Miss Xiang.

You can use Miss or Ms. (Both mean an unmarried woman. Mr. is always used for a man even when he is not married.)

She only posts her videos or articles on our WeChat groups, but she never talks to us.


Most strangely, even after our group leader told her that some WeChat groups are our backup group and not to post her works there, she still does, as if she had never heard of that.


Most sStrangely enough, even after our group leader told her that some WeChat groups are our backup group and that she should not to post her worksstuff there, she still does, as if she had never heard of thatwere deaf.

You could use 'as if she were deaf', 'as if it had fallen on deaf ears' or 'like it went through one ear and out the other'. All mean for a person to be ignorant of what they were told.

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