Nov. 19, 2021
I have two phones in my daily life.
One phone is a Galaxy S10 which is calling others and going on the internet.
The other phone is an iPhone 8 for musics and some note-taking apps which are for iOS only.
There are some disadventages with these phones, like little heavy to bring both things and need to pay bills double.
But there are more benefits that I don't care about their batteries, being able to do multi-tasking and I can find other phone when I don't find it.
Because both phones follow different UX, so I can always experience each thing.
Now, this way is one of my unique character.
Two Phones
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Nice work! Which phone do you like more? :)
I have two phones in my daily life.
One phone is a Galaxy S10 which isI use for calling others and going on the internet.
The other phone is an iPhone 8 for, which I use for listening to musics and some note-taking apps which are for iOS only.
There are some disadveantages with these phones, like, it can be a little heavy to bring both things andcarry both, and the need to pay bills is doubled.
But there are more benefits that — I don't carehave to worry about their batteries, beingI'm able to do multi-tasking, and I can find otherne phone when I docan't find ithe other.
Because both phones follow different UX, so I can always experience each thingthe UX of each phone is different, I can experience each distinct behaviour.
Now, this way is one of my unique characteristics.
I'm not sure if I correctly understood the intended meaning of this sentence. I've corrected for the meaning "This is something unique about me"
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The other phone is an iPhone 8 for musics and some note-taking apps which are for iOS only. The other phone is an iPhone 8 The other phone is an iPhone 8, which I use for music |
There are some disadventages with these phones, like little heavy to bring both things and need to pay bills double. There are some disadv There are some disadv |
But there are more benefits that I don't care about their batteries, being able to do multi-tasking and I can find other phone when I don't find it. But there are more benefits But there are |
Because both phones follow different UX, so I can always experience each thing. Because Because both phones follow a different UX, |
Now, this way is one of my unique character. Now, this way is one of my unique characteristics. I'm not sure if I correctly understood the intended meaning of this sentence. I've corrected for the meaning "This is something unique about me"
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