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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 19, 2021

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Two Phones

I have two phones in my daily life.

One phone is a Galaxy S10 which is calling others and going on the internet.

The other phone is an iPhone 8 for musics and some note-taking apps which are for iOS only.

There are some disadventages with these phones, like little heavy to bring both things and need to pay bills double.

But there are more benefits that I don't care about their batteries, being able to do multi-tasking and I can find other phone when I don't find it.

Because both phones follow different UX, so I can always experience each thing.

Now, this way is one of my unique character.

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Two Phones

I have two phones in my daily life.

One phone is a Galaxy S10, which isI use for calling others and going on the internet.

The other phone is an iPhone 8, which I use for musics and some note-taking apps which arthat are only available for iOS only.

There are some disadveantages with theseto having two phones, like littlthe heavy to bring both thingsweight of both of them and needing to pay bills double the bills.

But there are more benefits that I don't care about their, such as not worrying about batteries, being able to do multi-tasking, and I can fusindg otherne phone when I docan't find ithe other.

Because both phones follow a different UX, so I can always experience each thinghave a unique experience.

Now, this wayThis is one of my unique characteristics.

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Nice work! Which phone do you like more? :)

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 20, 2021

402

Thank you very much. Because of their unique things, I can't choose one. :) I will keep using both OS phones continuely.

I have two phones in my daily life.

One phone is a Galaxy S10 which isI use for calling others and going on the internet.

The other phone is an iPhone 8 for, which I use for listening to musics and some note-taking apps which are for iOS only.

There are some disadveantages with these phones, like, it can be a little heavy to bring both things andcarry both, and the need to pay bills is doubled.

But there are more benefits that ⁠— I don't carehave to worry about their batteries, beingI'm able to do multi-tasking, and I can find otherne phone when I docan't find ithe other.

Because both phones follow different UX, so I can always experience each thingthe UX of each phone is different, I can experience each distinct behaviour.

Now, this way is one of my unique characteristics.

I'm not sure if I correctly understood the intended meaning of this sentence. I've corrected for the meaning "This is something unique about me"

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Great job overall!

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 20, 2021

402

Thank you so much. Your advices are suitable my original meanings. :)

Two Phones


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One phone is a Galaxy S10 which is calling others and going on the internet.


One phone is a Galaxy S10 which isI use for calling others and going on the internet.

One phone is a Galaxy S10, which isI use for calling others and going on the internet.

The other phone is an iPhone 8 for musics and some note-taking apps which are for iOS only.


The other phone is an iPhone 8 for, which I use for listening to musics and some note-taking apps which are for iOS only.

The other phone is an iPhone 8, which I use for musics and some note-taking apps which arthat are only available for iOS only.

There are some disadventages with these phones, like little heavy to bring both things and need to pay bills double.


There are some disadveantages with these phones, like, it can be a little heavy to bring both things andcarry both, and the need to pay bills is doubled.

There are some disadveantages with theseto having two phones, like littlthe heavy to bring both thingsweight of both of them and needing to pay bills double the bills.

But there are more benefits that I don't care about their batteries, being able to do multi-tasking and I can find other phone when I don't find it.


But there are more benefits that ⁠— I don't carehave to worry about their batteries, beingI'm able to do multi-tasking, and I can find otherne phone when I docan't find ithe other.

But there are more benefits that I don't care about their, such as not worrying about batteries, being able to do multi-tasking, and I can fusindg otherne phone when I docan't find ithe other.

Because both phones follow different UX, so I can always experience each thing.


Because both phones follow different UX, so I can always experience each thingthe UX of each phone is different, I can experience each distinct behaviour.

Because both phones follow a different UX, so I can always experience each thinghave a unique experience.

Now, this way is one of my unique character.


Now, this way is one of my unique characteristics.

I'm not sure if I correctly understood the intended meaning of this sentence. I've corrected for the meaning "This is something unique about me"

Now, this wayThis is one of my unique characteristics.

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