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Two Men Ruined the English Meet-up (90)

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people coming including four teachers.

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and the leader who is feisty in the meet-up.

The other day, Mr. S said something wrong in front of others, and the leader was upset and started to yell at Mr. S.

There were already many people, but the two men didn't care about others and kept arguing.

We were really awkward, but couldn't do anything.

We just had to wait for them to calm down.

Why nobody didn't stop their fight is because I guess everybody already knew their personality.

If someone tries to stop them it would have gotten worse.

We ended up wasting 20 minutes in the beginning of the meet-up.

After two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insult Mr. S was a little bit nasty.


私の町に英会話サークルがあります。大体いつも、4人の先生を含めて20人位の人が来ます。

そのサークルに、Sさんというおしゃべりな男性と、とても勝気で短気なリーダーがいます。

ある日Sさんが何か変なことをみんなの前で言いました。そして、リーダーは怒り怒鳴り始めました。

もうその時、そこには大勢の人がいましたが、二人は全く気にせず口論し続けました。

私達は、とても気まずかったですが、何もできませんでした。

私達は、ただ彼らが落ち着くのを待ちました。

なぜ誰も彼らのけんかを止めなかったのか、それは多分みんなその二人の性格を知っていたからかもしれません。

もし誰かが止めようとしたら、そのけんかがもっと悪くなっていたかもしれません。

私達は、結局、英会話サークルの最初の20分を無駄にしてしまいました。

2人が英会話サークルを妨害した後、リーダーはSさんを追い出して、みんなに謝りました。

でも、正直言って、私は、そのリーダーのSさんに対するののしり方がちょっと嫌な感じだと思いました。

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Two Men Ruined the English Meet-up

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people coming including four teachers, including the four teachers, around 20 people come.

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and the leader who is feisty inof the meet-up is feisty.

The other day, Mr. S said something wrongeird in front of the others, and the leader wasgot upset and started to yell at Mr. S.

There were already many people at the time, but the two men didn't care about others and kept arguing.

We werefelt really awkward, but couldn't do anything.

Alternatively: It was really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

We just had to wait for them to calm down.

WThe reason why nobody didn't stopped their fight iwas because I guess everybody already knew their personalityies, I guess.

If someone triesd to stop them it would have gotten worse.

Alternatively: If someone tries to stop them it would get worse.

We ended up wasting 20 minutes in the beginning of the meet-up.

After two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

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sachisachi

Aug. 28, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections! I always appreciate your help!

OPTION A: Two Men Ruined thean English Meeting¶
OPTION B: Two Persons Ruined an
English Study Meet-uping

There's an English study meet-up in my town, andwhich is usually there areattended by around 20 people coming, including four [English] teachers.

具体的には、どのようなタイプの教師だったのかを説明します。 彼らは科学の先生でしたか? 数学の先生ですか? それとも英語の先生でしょうか?

There iwas an old man named S who iwas really talkative, ands well as the leader who iwas feisty in theis meet-up.

メモ: 会議が終わったので、過去形の方が良いです。

単純な文法または語彙のエラーが発生した場合: The other day, Mr. S said something wrongincorrect in front of others, and the leader wasbecame upset and started to yell at Mr. S. ¶

There were already many people, but the two men didn't care about others and kept arguing
that person. 失礼なことを言われても、次のようになります: The other day, Mr. S said something impolite in front of others, and the leader became upset and started yelling at that person.¶
2つ目の文章をお勧め: These two men ignored others and continued arguing among themselves
.

We wereThey made the entire meeting really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

We just had to wait for them to calm down.

WhyPerhaps nobody didn'ttried to stop their fight is because I guess everybodbickering because they already knew their personalityies.

If someoneより自然にです: If anyone had triesd to stop them it would have gottenonly made things worse.

We ended up wasting 20 minutes in the beginning of the meet-up/meeting.

After two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

However, honestly it felt like the way themeeting leader insult Mr. S was a little bitwas partly to blame because he was so nasty.

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Sorry to hear this squabble occurred. / この騒動が起こったことを聞いて残念に思います。

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sachisachi

Aug. 28, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections and explaining well.

Two Men Ruined the English Meet-up

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people cominge, including four teachers.

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and. There is also the leader who is feisty in the meet-uprather feisty.

I think splitting up the sentences is more natural here.
Instead of "feisty", maybe "short-tempered" or "quick to anger" is better?

The other day, Mr. S said something wrong in front of the others, and the leader was upset and started to yell at Mr. S.


There were already many people
there, but the two men didn't care about the others and kept arguing.

We wereIt was really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

"It was really awkward", as in "The situation was awkward"

We just had to wait for them to calm down.

WI guess why nobody didn't stopped their fight is because I guess everybody already knew their personalityies.

If someone triesd to stop them it would have gotten worse.

We ended up wasting 20 minutes in the beginning of the meet-up.

After the two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

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I'm sorry to hear that the meetup was ruined. I don't know what Mr. S said wrong, but I kind of feel bad for him getting kicked out.

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sachisachi

Aug. 28, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections and explaining well.
I agree with you. I kind of feel like the leader should have left with the other man because if he didn't become angry, it wouldn't have gotten worse.

Two Men Ruined the English Meet-up

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people comingthat come, including four teachers.

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and the leader who is feisty in the meet-up.

The other day, Mr. S said something wrong in front of others, and the leader was upset and started to yell at Mr. S. There were already many people, but the two men didn't care about others and kept arguing.

We werefelt really awkward, but couldn't do anything.

We just had to wait for them to calm down.

WhyI guess nobody didn't stopped their fight is because I guess everybody already knewows their personalityies.

If someone triesd to stop them it would have gotten worse.

We ended up wasting 20 minutes in the beginning of the meet-up.

After two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

However, honestly, it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

Or just "Honestly, it felt like..."

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sachisachi

Aug. 28, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections !

Two Men Ruined the English Meet-up

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people cominge, including four teachers.

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and the leader who is feisty inof the meet-up is feisty.

"Feisty" is fine. I think you could also say "short-tempered"?

Besides "leader," you can also use the word "organizer" for the person who leads and organizes things like meet-ups.

The other day, Mr. S said something wrong in front of otherseveryone, and the leader was upset and started to yell at Mr. S.


There were already many people, but the two men didn't care
about others and kept arguing.

We werefelt really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

“We were awkward" in English means that in general, you and others were awkward people. It’s describing a character trait or personality trait.

“We felt awkward,” on the other hand, means that in that particular moment we felt awkward, as if somebody or something in the moment made us feel that way. You can also say, "It was really awkward" ("it" means the situation).

We just had to wait for them to calm down.

Why nobody didn't stopped their fight is because I guess everybody already knew their personalityies.

If someone triesd to stop them, it would have gotten worse.

We ended up wasting 20 minutes inat the beginning of the meet-up.

After the two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

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Wow, that sounds very awkward indeed. 😅

I wonder what Mr. S said in front of everyone that that made the leader of the meet-up angry.

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sachisachi

Aug. 27, 2024

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I'm not really sure what he said, maybe Mr. S said something relate to money, like "the party fee is expensive." We had a farewell around the time.
However, I wonder the organizer just didn't like Mr. S because he was talkative and he spoke English well.
Anyway, thank you so much for your corrections!

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sachisachi

Aug. 27, 2024

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a farewell party*

Two Men Ruined the English Meet-up


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OPTION A: Two Men Ruined thean English Meeting¶
OPTION B: Two Persons Ruined an
English Study Meet-uping

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However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insult Mr. S was a little bit nasty.


However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

However, honestly, it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

Or just "Honestly, it felt like..."

However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

However, honestly it felt like the way themeeting leader insult Mr. S was a little bitwas partly to blame because he was so nasty.

However, honestly it felt like the way the leader insulted Mr. S was a little bit nasty.

We just had to wait for them to calm down.


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Why nobody didn't stop their fight is because I guess everybody already knew their personality.


Why nobody didn't stopped their fight is because I guess everybody already knew their personalityies.

WhyI guess nobody didn't stopped their fight is because I guess everybody already knewows their personalityies.

WI guess why nobody didn't stopped their fight is because I guess everybody already knew their personalityies.

WhyPerhaps nobody didn'ttried to stop their fight is because I guess everybodbickering because they already knew their personalityies.

WThe reason why nobody didn't stopped their fight iwas because I guess everybody already knew their personalityies, I guess.

If someone tries to stop them it would have gotten worse.


If someone triesd to stop them, it would have gotten worse.

If someone triesd to stop them it would have gotten worse.

If someone triesd to stop them it would have gotten worse.

If someoneより自然にです: If anyone had triesd to stop them it would have gottenonly made things worse.

If someone triesd to stop them it would have gotten worse.

Alternatively: If someone tries to stop them it would get worse.

We ended up wasting 20 minutes in the beginning of the meet-up.


We ended up wasting 20 minutes inat the beginning of the meet-up.

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We ended up wasting 20 minutes in the beginning of the meet-up/meeting.

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After two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.


After the two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

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After the two men disrupted our meet-up, the leader kicked out Mr. S, and the leader apologized to everyone.

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There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people coming including four teachers.


There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people cominge, including four teachers.

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people comingthat come, including four teachers.

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people cominge, including four teachers.

There's an English study meet-up in my town, andwhich is usually there areattended by around 20 people coming, including four [English] teachers.

具体的には、どのようなタイプの教師だったのかを説明します。 彼らは科学の先生でしたか? 数学の先生ですか? それとも英語の先生でしょうか?

There's an English study meet-up in my town, and usually there are around 20 people coming including four teachers, including the four teachers, around 20 people come.

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and the leader who is feisty in the meet-up.


There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and the leader who is feisty inof the meet-up is feisty.

"Feisty" is fine. I think you could also say "short-tempered"? Besides "leader," you can also use the word "organizer" for the person who leads and organizes things like meet-ups.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and. There is also the leader who is feisty in the meet-uprather feisty.

I think splitting up the sentences is more natural here. Instead of "feisty", maybe "short-tempered" or "quick to anger" is better?

There iwas an old man named S who iwas really talkative, ands well as the leader who iwas feisty in theis meet-up.

メモ: 会議が終わったので、過去形の方が良いです。

There is an old man named S who is really talkative, and the leader who is feisty inof the meet-up is feisty.

The other day, Mr. S said something wrong in front of others, and the leader was upset and started to yell at Mr. S. There were already many people, but the two men didn't care about others and kept arguing.


The other day, Mr. S said something wrong in front of otherseveryone, and the leader was upset and started to yell at Mr. S.


There were already many people, but the two men didn't care
about others and kept arguing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The other day, Mr. S said something wrong in front of the others, and the leader was upset and started to yell at Mr. S.


There were already many people
there, but the two men didn't care about the others and kept arguing.

単純な文法または語彙のエラーが発生した場合: The other day, Mr. S said something wrongincorrect in front of others, and the leader wasbecame upset and started to yell at Mr. S. ¶

There were already many people, but the two men didn't care about others and kept arguing
that person. 失礼なことを言われても、次のようになります: The other day, Mr. S said something impolite in front of others, and the leader became upset and started yelling at that person.¶
2つ目の文章をお勧め: These two men ignored others and continued arguing among themselves
.

The other day, Mr. S said something wrongeird in front of the others, and the leader wasgot upset and started to yell at Mr. S.

There were already many people at the time, but the two men didn't care about others and kept arguing.

We were really awkward, but couldn't do anything.


We werefelt really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

“We were awkward" in English means that in general, you and others were awkward people. It’s describing a character trait or personality trait. “We felt awkward,” on the other hand, means that in that particular moment we felt awkward, as if somebody or something in the moment made us feel that way. You can also say, "It was really awkward" ("it" means the situation).

We werefelt really awkward, but couldn't do anything.

We wereIt was really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

"It was really awkward", as in "The situation was awkward"

We wereThey made the entire meeting really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

We werefelt really awkward, but couldn't do anything.

Alternatively: It was really awkward, but we couldn't do anything.

Two Men Ruined the English Meet-up (90)


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