Feb. 10, 2024
Two Extraordinary Singers I Enjoy Recently
Straight to the point, they are Angelina Jordan and Michael Jackson. The former is one of the winners of a popular talent show on YouTube. She was only seven years old when she won the show. She is undeniably a born artist because no one can teach someone to sing like that. She seems to be enjoying so much and always knows what she's doing to the music she is dealing with. The king of pop, on the other hand, was also already very popular at around the age of seven. He was, as the world knows, an excellent showman with not only singing talent but also creating music and even creative dancing. There were some rumors around MJ, but all cleared up to me thanks to some YouTube videos. I just hope Angelina Jordan will always be happy and well.
最近よく聞いている二人の天才シンガー
単刀直入に、それはアンジェリーナ・ジョーダンとマイケル・ジャクソンです。前者はYouTubeの人気タレントコンテストの優勝者の一人です。彼女はたった７歳のときに優勝しました。疑いようもなく生まれつきの芸術家です。なぜなら、誰も教わってあんな歌い方を身につけられはしないからです。彼女はいつでも取り組む曲をどうしたらいいのか知っていて、こよなく楽しんでいるように見えます。ポップ王の方はというと、彼も７歳頃にはすでに頭角を表して世の中に知られたシンガーでした。世界が知っているように卓越した芸人で、歌の才能だけでなく音楽制作や独創的なダンスにも才能を発揮しました。MJにはいくつか噂が立っていましたが、いずれもYouTubeビデオのおかげですっかり晴れました。アンジェリーナがいつまでも幸せで元気なことを願わずにいられません。
Two Extraordinary Singers I've Enjoyed Recently
or "I've Been Enjoying."
Straight to the point, they are Angelina Jordan and Michael Jackson.
The former is one of the winners of a popular talent show on YouTube.
She was only seven years old when she won the show.
She is undeniably a born artist because no one can teach someone to sing like that (especially at such a young age).
The addition of the last part in parentheses I think helps emphasize your point a bit, but your original sentence is perfect. ^^
She seems to be enjoy it/singing so much and always knows what she's doing toto do with the music she is dealing with.
The king of pop, on the other hand, was also already very popular at around the age of seven.
He was, as the world knows, an excellent showman with not only a talen for singing talent but also for creating music and even creative dancing.
There were some (bad) rumors around/about MJ, but it was all cleared up tofor me thanks to some YouTube videos.
I just hope Angelina Jordan will always be happy and well.
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Very nicely written! Thanks for sharing the artists you've been enjoying as of late. ^^
Feb. 10, 2024
Thank you. :)
Two Extraordinary Singers I Enjoy Recently
other titles : .......I enjoy listening to /....... I enjoyed listening to recently
Straight to the point, they are Angelina Jordan and Michael Jackson.
The former is one of the winners of a popular talent show on YouTube.
She was only seven years old when she won the show.
She is undeniably a born artist because no one can teach someone to sing like that.
She seems to be enjoying singing / it so much and always knows what she's doing towith the music she is dealing withplaying.
enjoy + object dealing with is often for something hard or unpleasant, it is not wrong but sounds strange
The king of pop, on the other hand, was also already very popular at around the age of seven.
He was, as the world knows, an excellent showman with not only singing talent but also creating music and even creative dancmusical creativity / genius, and his dancing was original / groundbreaking.
not only .... but also needs to be followed by the same grammar structure here adjective + noun
There were some rumors around MJ, but they were all cleared up tofor me, thanks to some YouTube videos.
every verb needs a subject, here it is passive, they were cleared up, / they all became clear to me,
I just hope Angelina Jordan will always be happy and well, and not suffer sadness like Michael Jackson.
Because you wrote about 2 singers, the concluding sentence is better mentioning both of them.
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Good writing. Many correct sentences with difficult grammar.
Feb. 10, 2024
Thank you. :)
She is undeniably a bornnatural artist because no one can teach someone to sing like that.
Your wording makes sense and I could understand what you meant! Usually, though, we'll say someone is 'a natural' when they're born with a talent, or have had no training in their field. You weren't incorrect; it's more a way of phrasing it, though, if that makes sense.
She seems to be enjoying soit very much and always knows what she's doing to the music she is dealing with.
There were some rumors around MJ, but they were all cleared up to me thanks to some YouTube videos.
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This was great! Very very few errors, and the ones I corrected were not serious mistakes. I had never heard of Angelina Jordan, so it was interesting to learn about her! I've always loved MJ, though. It was so sad when he died.
Feb. 10, 2024
Thank you. :) I learned how charming person MJ was. The beautiful smile was genuine.
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There were some rumors around MJ, but all cleared up to me thanks to some YouTube videos. There were some rumors around MJ, but they were all cleared up to me thanks to some YouTube videos. There were some rumors around MJ, but they were all cleared up every verb needs a subject, here it is passive, they were cleared up, / they all became clear to me, There were some (bad) rumors around/about MJ, but it was all cleared up |
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I just hope Angelina Jordan will always be happy and well. I just hope Angelina Jordan will always be happy and well, and not suffer sadness like Michael Jackson. Because you wrote about 2 singers, the concluding sentence is better mentioning both of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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