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Lutis226

March 28, 2025

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Two different topics: nightclubs & testing women sports

I read two topics, that are not related to each other, but I should write about them.

First, woman sports
I read the they will do a test by swabbing cheecks' women to emphasize the genders' athletics. They want the championships to be fair and integrity. I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletics don't mind that, while crities see that is invasive. What about you?


Second, the night clubs
After pandemic, many nightclubs lose their visitors, the life become more expensive and the youth can't now go to this places and even alcohol is no longer as common as before. I find that is really cool, because I refuse drinking alcohol, anyway many youths go now to bars or cheaper places, where they can enjoy, have new friends, eat delicious foods or drinks and have fun, for me who prefer to stay in calm places, i don't like that. What about you?

First
World Athletics has introduced mandatory cheek swabbing to confirm the gender of athletes competing in the female category.
The organization’s president, Sebastian Coe, stated that this measure is necessary to protect female sports and ensure fair competition. The tests will start at the World Championships in Tokyo in September. A testing provider is currently being selected, and the procedure will only be required once in an athlete’s career. Coe emphasized that maintaining the integrity of women’s sports is a priority. He stated that World Athletics has been working on this issue for years and has defended its regulations in court. The decision has led to discussions about whether other sports federations might adopt similar measures.
This topic is widely debated, with some critics arguing that such testing could become invasive. While World Athletics insists the tests are non-invasive, past gender testing methods have been controversial. The issue of fairness and inclusion in sports remains a significant concern for international sports organizations.



Second
The nightclub scene in the UK has been affected by changes in society.

Many clubs closed after the pandemic, and the cost of living has made it more difficult for people to go out. As a result, many young people now prefer spending time in cheaper places like bars instead of expensive nightclubs.

Alcohol consumption has also dropped among younger generations, which has led to a decline in traditional clubbing. Some venues have changed their business models, offering events like quiz nights or alcohol-free spaces to attract people.

Independent venues are adapting to these changes and thriving by creating more inclusive and affordable environments. For example, a club in Sheffield provides a space for queer people and others who feel marginalized. These places are often nonprofit and focus on community. Despite the challenges, nightclubs and independent spaces remain an important part of youth culture, and many believe these places should be protected.

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winter_night_skies's avatar
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First, womanin women's sports ,
I read theat they will do a test by swabbing ctheecks' women to emphasiz inside of their mouth to determine their genders' athletics.

They want the championshipcompetitions to be fair and have integrity.

I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletices dwon't mind that, while critiecs seeay that it is invasive.

Second, theI'll talk about night clubs .
After the pandemic, many nightclubs loset their visitors, the lifecustomers because the cost of living become more expensive and, so the youth can't now go to this places and ego. Even alcohol is no longer as common as before.

You need a subject and verb. I think it's better to use many short simple sentences to make it easy to understand.

I find that is really cool, because I refuse to drinking alcohol, a. Anyway, many youths go now to bars or cheaper places, where t now. They can enjoy, havmake new friends, eat delicious foods or drinks and have fun, for me who. I prefer to stay in calm places, iso I don't like that.

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Two different topics: nightclubs & testing in women's sports

First, womanen's sports
I read the they will do a test by swabbing women's cheecks' women to emphasize the genders' of the athletices.

You could maybe say 'confirm' instead of emphasize, but I'm not sure the exact situation.

They want the championships to be fair and have integrity.

I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletices don't mind that, while critiecs see that ias invasive.

Second, the night clubs .
After pandemic, many nightclubs loset their visitors, the lifepatrons. Life has become more expensive and the youth can't now go to thisese places anymore, and even alcohol is no longer as common as before.

I find that is really cool, because I refuse to drinking alcohol, a. Anyway, many youths go now go to bars or cheaper places, where they can enjoy, havemeet new friends, eat delicious foods or drinks, and have fun, f. For me who prefers to stay in calm places, iI don't like that.

You can also say 'I don't drink alcohol' or just 'I don't drink'

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Great job! Yes, certainly many changes in the world following the pandemic.

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I read two topics, that are not related to each other, b. But, I should still write about them.

First, womaen sports.
I read theat they will do a test by swabbing women cheecks' women to emphasize the genders' athletics.

They want the championships to be fair and have integrity.

I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletices don't mind that, w. While crities see that ias invasive.

I am not sure what you mean by 'crities', maybe you are trying to say 'critics'.

Second, the night clubs
. After the pandemic, many nightclubs loset their visitors, th. Because lifeves becoame more expensive and the youth can't now go to thisese places and e. Even alcohol is no longer as common as before.

I find that is really cool, because I refuse to drinking alcohol, a. Anyways, many youths go, now go to bars or cheaper places, w. There they can enjoy, havmake new friends, eat delicious foods or, have drinks and have fun, f. For me, who prefers to stay in calm places, iI don't like that.

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Keep up with the good work! All the very best!

winter_night_skies's avatar
winter_night_skies

March 28, 2025

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Nice job! I think you should use many short sentences. Then connect them with simple words like "but", "then", "so", and "because".

Two different topics: nightclubs & testing women sports

Two different topics: nightclubs & testing in women's sports

I read two topics, that are not related to each other, but I should write about them.

I read two topics, that are not related to each other, b. But, I should still write about them.

First, woman sports I read the they will do a test by swabbing cheecks' women to emphasize the genders' athletics.

First, womaen sports.
I read theat they will do a test by swabbing women cheecks' women to emphasize the genders' athletics.

First, womanen's sports
I read the they will do a test by swabbing women's cheecks' women to emphasize the genders' of the athletices.

You could maybe say 'confirm' instead of emphasize, but I'm not sure the exact situation.

First, womanin women's sports ,
I read theat they will do a test by swabbing ctheecks' women to emphasiz inside of their mouth to determine their genders' athletics.

They want the championships to be fair and integrity.

They want the championships to be fair and have integrity.

They want the championships to be fair and have integrity.

They want the championshipcompetitions to be fair and have integrity.

What about you?

I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletics don't mind that, while crities see that is invasive.

I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletices don't mind that, w. While crities see that ias invasive.

I am not sure what you mean by 'crities', maybe you are trying to say 'critics'.

I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletices don't mind that, while critiecs see that ias invasive.

I don't really understand that, but I thinking the athletices dwon't mind that, while critiecs seeay that it is invasive.

What about you?

Second, the night clubs After pandemic, many nightclubs lose their visitors, the life become more expensive and the youth can't now go to this places and even alcohol is no longer as common as before.

Second, the night clubs
. After the pandemic, many nightclubs loset their visitors, th. Because lifeves becoame more expensive and the youth can't now go to thisese places and e. Even alcohol is no longer as common as before.

Second, the night clubs .
After pandemic, many nightclubs loset their visitors, the lifepatrons. Life has become more expensive and the youth can't now go to thisese places anymore, and even alcohol is no longer as common as before.

Second, theI'll talk about night clubs .
After the pandemic, many nightclubs loset their visitors, the lifecustomers because the cost of living become more expensive and, so the youth can't now go to this places and ego. Even alcohol is no longer as common as before.

You need a subject and verb. I think it's better to use many short simple sentences to make it easy to understand.

I find that is really cool, because I refuse drinking alcohol, anyway many youths go now to bars or cheaper places, where they can enjoy, have new friends, eat delicious foods or drinks and have fun, for me who prefer to stay in calm places, i don't like that.

I find that is really cool, because I refuse to drinking alcohol, a. Anyways, many youths go, now go to bars or cheaper places, w. There they can enjoy, havmake new friends, eat delicious foods or, have drinks and have fun, f. For me, who prefers to stay in calm places, iI don't like that.

I find that is really cool, because I refuse to drinking alcohol, a. Anyway, many youths go now go to bars or cheaper places, where they can enjoy, havemeet new friends, eat delicious foods or drinks, and have fun, f. For me who prefers to stay in calm places, iI don't like that.

You can also say 'I don't drink alcohol' or just 'I don't drink'

I find that is really cool, because I refuse to drinking alcohol, a. Anyway, many youths go now to bars or cheaper places, where t now. They can enjoy, havmake new friends, eat delicious foods or drinks and have fun, for me who. I prefer to stay in calm places, iso I don't like that.

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