July 29, 2023
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I once read an article that suggested that we can judge a person's characteristics from their handwriting, sharp calligraphy usually indicates that the writer is cold, confident and difficult to approach. The very top center of the logo "X" is like a piece of sharp blade, preparing to emilnate all the competitors.
In my opinion, aesthetically, this logo is the ugliest one I have ever seen, lacking curves on and emotions.
Why the "everything app", Wechat, is widely and efficiently used in China? The main reason as I have noticed is it's easier for local government to monitor its subjects, because everyone has been bound by it. The net policeman can check users' history of payments, hospital records, transportation routines, working conditions, and communications... This app really cracks down on a lot of crimes and plummets the crime rate. That's also one of the reasons why many Chinese scammers are entrenched overseas like in Myanmar to do telecom fraud. At the same time, people also dare not express ideas freely on it, because they know this app is equivalent to the Big Brother in the book 1984, who is portrayed as a symbol monitoring their people's every move through surveillance.
Now, the "X" is preparing to be "WeChat, Does Elon Musk really believe he will make his dream?
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I once read an article that suggested that we can judge a person's characteristics from their handwriting,; sharp calligraphy usually indicates that the writer is cold, confident and difficult to approach.
I think "character" sounds better. Don't join two complete sentences with only a comma. You need an "and", "but" etc.. The two sentences are related so I have used a semicolon.
The very top center of the logo "X" is like a piece of a sharp blade, preparing to elimilnate all the competitorsion.
Or you could say "a sharp blade" instead of "a piece of a sharp blade"
In my opinion, aesthetically, this logo is the ugliest one I have ever seen, lacking curves on and emotions.
You don't need the "on".
Why is the "everything app", Wechat, is widely and efficiently used in China?
"Why is" for a question. The way you have written it, apart from the question mark, sounds like an explanation.
The main reason as, I have noticed, is that it's easier for local government to monitor its subjects, because everyone has been bound byforced to use it.
The net -policeman can check users' history of paymentpayment histories, hospital records, transportation routines, working conditions, and communications...
As "users'" is plural, I have made "payment histories" plural as there is more than one user involved.
This app reallyhelps with cracksing down on a lot of crimes and plummets the crime rate. has plummeted.
"crime rate" is the subject for the verb "to plummet" here.
That's also one of the reasons why many Chinese scammers are entrenchlocated overseas, in places like in Myanmar, to do telecom fraud.
You didn't need the "also".
At the same time, people also dare not express ideas freely on it, because they know this app is equivalent to the Big Brother in the book 1984, who is portrayed as a symbol monitoring their people's every move through surveillance.
Now, theat "X" is preparing to be "WeChat", Ddoes Elon Musk really believe he will make his dream come true?
The expression is "make his dream (or dreams) come true".
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Good work. Interesting to learn about the Chinese app.
July 29, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
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I once read an article that suggested that we can judge a person's characteristics from their handwriting, sharp calligraphy usually indicates that the writer is cold, confident and difficult to approach. I once read an article that suggested that we can judge a person's character I think "character" sounds better. Don't join two complete sentences with only a comma. You need an "and", "but" etc.. The two sentences are related so I have used a semicolon. |
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The very top center of the logo "X" is like a piece of sharp blade, preparing to emilnate all the competitors. The very top center of the logo "X" is like a piece of a sharp blade Or you could say "a sharp blade" instead of "a piece of a sharp blade" |
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In my opinion, aesthetically, this logo is the ugliest one I have ever seen, lacking curves on and emotions. In my opinion, aesthetically, this logo is the ugliest one I have ever seen, lacking curves You don't need the "on". |
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Why the "everything app", Wechat, is widely and efficiently used in China? Why is the "everything app" "Why is" for a question. The way you have written it, apart from the question mark, sounds like an explanation. |
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The main reason as I have noticed is it's easier for local government to monitor its subjects, because everyone has been bound by it. The main reason |
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The net policeman can check users' history of payments, hospital records, transportation routines, working conditions, and communications... The net As "users'" is plural, I have made "payment histories" plural as there is more than one user involved. |
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This app really cracks down on a lot of crimes and plummets the crime rate. This app "crime rate" is the subject for the verb "to plummet" here. |
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That's also one of the reasons why many Chinese scammers are entrenched overseas like in Myanmar to do telecom fraud. That's You didn't need the "also". |
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At the same time, people also dare not express ideas freely on it, because they know this app is equivalent to the Big Brother in the book 1984, who is portrayed as a symbol monitoring their people's every move through surveillance. At the same time, people |
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Now, the "X" is preparing to be "WeChat, Does Elon Musk really believe he will make his dream? Now The expression is "make his dream (or dreams) come true". |
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