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Tammy

Jan. 3, 2025

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had last Saturday. You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds

The image part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.

I wrote a text for the video three days ago but was not satisfied with it. Then I rewrote it yesterday.

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijacking people's attention from the images.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.


我终于完成了一个关于上周六整个徒步旅行的视频。你可以在这里观看:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds

画面部分并不难,但配音部分对我来说并不容易。

三天前我为视频写了一篇字幕,但并不满意。然后我昨天重写了一遍。

然而,当我给视频配音时,感觉文字太长了,最后只用了三分之一,因为我觉得如果我在视频中不停地说话,感觉就像从画面那里抢走了观看者的注意力。

像往常一样,如果你有任何问题或建议,请告诉我噢。

感谢先。

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds The image part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.

I wrote a text for the video three days ago but was not satisfied with it.

Then I rewrote it yesterday.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

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Jan. 5, 2025

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Then I rewrote it yesterday.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had last Saturday.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

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Tammy

Jan. 4, 2025

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

Then I rewrote it yesterday.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

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Tammy

Jan. 3, 2025

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday


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As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.


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